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The object of this is
to print a section out and practice your skills on correcting any of my
papers. See if your Wright (right) or am I wrong? Try this, turn any of
these papers into a writing center over and over and I bet they will correct
something in the same paper every time you turn it in. Take one of these
papers to 100 different people and ask them to correct it, they all will find
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History of me with dyslexia |
Correction papers
To: James Anthony Jeffries
Cc: Knoxville News Sentinel 2332 News Sentinel Drive Knox, TN
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From: Franklin Delano Jeffries II
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Date: December 31, 2005
Resource classes will be involved:
All the papers I have wrote in college to study dyslexia’s History:
Government Aid and its positive and negative approach of all discriminations:
One formula I have made for it, and I dare to challenge its perfect exact view:
Having dyslexia is a paradox:
It is a decrement word or work when used in the wrong way:
The formula: Value is equal to Discrimination of Having Dyslexia times the Benefits to having dyslexia mines the Costs of having dyslexia plus the Values of having dyslexia. V = DofDis x B – C + VofHDis
The truth of facts in my life about this formula, and how it can be used in everyone’s life to help human kind:
Also, the truth how the formula will be used for the rest of all human life for eternity:
And last: how I and other handicaps cope with our disabilities through life and look at Value more then any animal or human being for the rest of our life. Weather it be positive or negative it will stay the same based on our own lives. And it is just a letter for life just itself.
For a brother I’m taking about, my really closes friend, I have missed and will always miss, if it is not even him that is missed. For: James Anthony Jeffries My Brother
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American Sign
Language
Dr. Davis Class
3 Conversation’s
Three Diverse People
Indeed these three people are deaf, but all are different in their way of life. Communicating is the most important formats we have as human beings, these arrangements of symbols, hand movement, body expressions and not least but for most reading lips are all part of survival skills we inherit from others. However, these Three Diverse People are not all that differ when it comes to communication. The people I convene this spring 2005 semester follow in order with names such as Joyce, whom I assembled with fist, Mark Allen, and Kendra the third but not last.
Joyce
is a
These hearing aids seemed differ to me, but as I looked in-depth and past the bad thoughts, I could see the good in them and the bad in me. People who make these kinds of statements are just jealous and selfish who can’t communicate passed the outer limits. Joyce is a good person and her implants help her communicate beyond the normal and abnormal humans.
The
second person I meet is a High School Teacher from
Last
but not the last deaf person I talked to this year is Kendra. She was at the
basketball game too, and this is the most excommunicated but communicated
conversation I have ever had. Kendra is
from
Diverse People are not all that differ when it comes to communication, but some are more educated in communicating more than others. Teachers like Mark can work even if he is deaf in his diverse way. Joyce is the one that inspired me to see how diverse in good because she can communicate more than me. Kendra is a gift to me since I was able to understand her, because I took the time to learn some ASL.
Works Cited
(unit 3) For Hearing People Only by Moore and Levitan,
Deaf Life Press
Franklin D. Jeffries II
American Sign Language
Dr. Davis Class
Book Review
Monkey Sees Dose
“Deaf
In
The first reaction I had about “learning to be deaf” is we do learn from people and what people say stay. I do believe the “sorts of symbols they surround themselves” become their way of learning. The way to a new meaning of Monkey See Does is a better phrase in my time. Sign language is visual and is like learning a new slang. Just as growing up around a friend and seeing them make a new suggestion.
Hanging around deaf people gives me better knowledge and understanding of my development with these new body languages. If I was to flip you a bird you may ask me what that means, and I would tell you. The difference is that you would learn something new and carry a new meaning on. How we talk to each other is a way of life and a way of traditions. Culture comes from all ways of life and the Authors put it best, “being able to hear does not emerge as significant in itself; instead it takes on significance in the context of other sets of meanings to which the child has been exposed” (Humphries 22).
Exposed to many different ideas and beliefs is what I have just done. Two meanings in one topic is a style of culture in my time. I have just opened more doors in the mind of the reader. “Learning to be deaf” is the same way. If you can understand me then you can understand them. Monkey Sees Does is my way of saying what you suggest I do and will carry on with tradition. If you tell me to move with your eyes, I would know you mean get out of my way by you movements. Believe me I would get out of your way too, and that is “Learning to be Deaf”.
Our own ideas like the Author says is “how things can be known” (Humphries 24). Believing in something is our way of carrying tradition on to the next person. The idea of “Learning to be Deaf” is impossible unless you pluck out your ears. However, seeing seems to bring more believers, but seeing is not always true. My opinion how Sign Language is know is simple, Monkey Sees Does.
The idea of absolute power to teaching is best said by Padden and Humphries, “As children living in the world of their caretakers, they are powerfully guided by the conventions of their culture” (Humphries 25). True, to me and a few believer that our family culture has absolute power and control of our guidance. Many times in my life family and friend has influenced me to carry the message on. And I am sure I have influenced them by having a Heart Attack, and living to tell about it.
Human life can see the outside fire when needed, but the mild inside can be a harder higher degree. However, “Learning to be deaf” is like leaning to have a Heart Attack. Monkey Sees Does as culture is what “we know best, our own” (Humphries 4).
Work Cited
“Deaf In
Franklin D. Jeffries II
American Sign Language
Dr. Davis Class
Activity number 1
Amazing By Grace
I
found myself at a Basketball game sitting in the bleacher’s, wondering if I am
the only hearing person. The
I
looked around the bleachers to see who is deaf or not out of curiosity. Indeed,
fitting in was a charm because all the nice people around me I talked to.
Asking questions about what is the difference in deaf basketball and hearing.
One person Named Bill Damon who is deaf from
However, finding hearing people started at the gate with the security guard and then on to the ticket table. In a far distance I heard noises from, deaf yelling to deaf and hearing talking all around, but a basketball game full of hearing people would be much louder with the same amount of people. Something more amazing happed in the game off the court for me: My Deaf Uncle Gene Reynolds appeared.
My Uncle sat in the bleacher’s watching TDS play against Mississippi School for the Deaf on January 28, 2005 at 730pm. A tournament that ended for TDS by MSD winning 45 to 33, leaving MSD to play Louisiana or Alabama in the finals. I told my Uncle about my heart problem and he told me to go home and get rest. I’m sure he will go home and tell his wife my Aunt Minnie Reynolds I am sick and have a pace maker on. However, Uncle Gene and Minnie is my loving family that inspired me to learn ASL. Growing up I did not take the time to learn because Uncle Gene could talk and other family members could translate for me. Anyhow, I have felt bad for not learning. And see the importance now to learn.
On the contrary, I was a newcomer in a large deaf crowed, but not new to the deaf community. I have learned from these activity questions. The one question I wonder for myself is way have I not been involved in the Deaf community in a large crowed before. I guess my family can only help me with that question: I have gone to Church with my Aunt and Uncle. I’m just Amazed by Grace at this Basketball event in all it’s wonderful communications and nice people that surrounded me.
The question about deaf people and hearing people has been answered for me. Communities come together and unite as one and do differ. I have learned that picking up the TTY (A way to communicate with the deaf) phone and calling someone can get you into the game with the community. Making an effort in helping someone in a basketball game leaves me to believe the deaf is working harder to bring the hearing and deaf together. My Uncle being there did not surprise me as much as I may have come across, but meeting him and being able to sign (communicate) makes grace a peace with the forgiven (The Author wrote Amazing Grace for a forgiveness of his slave trade).
Franklin D. Jeffries II
American Sign Language
Dr. Davis Class
Movie Book Review
Retarded Until Proven Innocent
Children of a Lesser God is a 1986 film telling a story of a speech teacher at a deaf school. William Hurt who is (playing as James Lee) gets the Job as a Speech Teacher and convinces the kids they have to learn how to speak. Meanwhile, he meets a young women who he falls in love with, and his luck is about to change when he finds out teaching Marlee Marlin (playing Sarah) a deaf women who does not want to learn how to talk, because she was made fun of as a young child.
My feelings about the movie are reflective on three pertinent ideas that relates to the narratives of what the Author is trying to say about the subjects. First, is improving jobs for the deaf helpful in the eyes of the hearing, second is it really important for deaf people to learn how to talk for them or for us, and last is it important for deaf people to learn to speck so they can be independent.
I am a strong believer for better or worse. Better is a why we all can get more out of life to help our self esteem. Worse is a way to self destruct our own thoughts if we get there and don’t make it. Getting a better job is a little different for hearing people. If we hearing people get a better job we our not thinking deaf is a problem, because we are not. Deaf people getting a better job have the thought of if I get the job can I communicate and be productive on moving up the latter with the hearing people.
Most of all this is my own philosophy but true to the hearing side looking in on the deaf side. I do think bettering for good is a way to help all self esteem. The problem like in the movie people tend to believe and think that the deaf are content because they seem that way in life. Really this is for worse when other people oppose on thinking what is best for you. Getting a better job is a good thing for everyone, as long as others don’t make us out as a retard.
Just because we can’t understand a person don’t make them a retard or us one either. I do believe deaf people learning to talk can help them out and me. I’m not so sure it really helps them any more then me though. Listening to their lips just makes me listen to them and not learn the language. Growing up I did not learn the language because my Uncle Gene Reynolds could speck, and that did not help me but helped him. Gene being able to speck did not help him in the long run because I am trying to learn now. Being able to speck has its trade offs either way we study deaf speaking. However, the truth is within the person’s freedom.
Inside the heart of the person who wants to speak for better or for worse is their will of being independent. Freedom comes with a great price and has its trade offs. Looking into if deaf and hearing should speak and learn Sign Language is left up to them. Hearing people can be more independent if they learn ASL, and deaf can to if they learn to speak. I do believe it is left up to the person on how far they want to go in communicating, and becoming more independent for them self.
I believe the Author was trying to say that getting a new job helps our self esteem, and indeed speaking is important to them and us so we all can becoming more independent. Better is left up to the person on how far they want to go in this life (communications). ASL for hearing and speaking for deaf is a way to look at it more diverse.
Franklin D. Jeffries II
American Sign Language
Dr. Davis Class
Activity number 2
Silent Lunch
Buffalo Hot Wings is a good place to go, but you may need to ask for plenty of paper towels before you chaw down. Consider wiping off that hot sauce before you tell someone their glasses are dirty too. If not, at lest do not touch your eyes while signing in American Sign Language. Even though, my eyes got watery, I enjoyed eating lunch with a few University Students. Anyway, I learned a few things about a Silent Lunch that I never new before.
First, I learned when the waitress ask you, “what do you want sir?” You do not try to Sign to him, because he may not have a clue what you are trying to say. For all I know he still may think I told him…. which I promise I did not. Indeed, if you can talk, talk. Trying to fit in with the deaf community is a good ideal, but when you have a voice in the matter, us it. I realized the Lunch was only silent when you communicate with the deaf, not the hearing. Next time I may ask the waitress if they know sign language before I go flopping my hands at them.
Besides almost getting beat up at the Buffalo Hot Wings down on Cumberland Strip, I tried to keep up with everyone’s conversation at the table. Hands went flopping here and there while my head went spinning in the air. For a few moments, I felt like I was sitting at a table with the United Nations. I had no clue what everyone was saying. Everyone had their own language and homemade style in progress. Maybe they had a plot against me. For all I knew they could of been planning to assemble a Nuclear Bomb before my eyes. So what was I thinking?
Trying
to keep up with everyone’s conversation caused me to go see my mental doctor
after this lunch. Dr. John Doe told me to only stay focused on one conversation
at a time: so that just what I did. Holy
Oops is what I thought when I sat at a table with a bunch of flopping hands. This Silent Lunch is just another experience for me in the deaf community. I can say every time I think I have learned something new about deaf people: I learn something new. Indeed, I have sat with my deaf family and hearing family together, but I have never been confused in foreign language before. Signing slow and repeating what you are trying to say is very important in being heard.
Being heard is the most important part for me in communicating with others. I hope I never try to sign to someone who may not understand me, such as that waitress who thought I was telling him off. Also, I hope the next time I get together with deaf people I do not try to keep up with everyone’s conversation at the same time. If I was eating lunch with all deaf people, I would have a totally different experience. Because deaf people make sure you understand them if it is important or not, and they will get your attention so you can understand. The way to this, is get in evolved.
Dale Jeffries
JEM 485
FINAL PROJECT
WEBSITE
RESEARCH AND DESIGN
Designing a website is a complicated and
evolving work. The website will serve to connect many of our potential users to
employers and to each other. The customers for this website will current UTK
and former students’. We will peddle this idea to the UT board of trustees
because of its future utility to students. UTK administration will be asked by
our group to host a URL link of our website www.employme.com
.
Because UTK already have a website which
involves several hits per day by current students, potential students,
community groups, parents, news media, and other special interest groups, it
would be to our advantage to have UTK webmaster place an URL for us on their
homepage. The URL ought to be visible from the UTK homepage and possibly placed
in a less conspicuous place. We do understand that there might be some
resistance from administrators citing the possibility that their homepage is
already cramped with information and thus have no room. However, we should
convince them of the long term benefit of this webpage. We could even make a
case that we will be helping UTK placement office as we will serve as another
alternative to what they currently offer. The greatest benefit to UTK is that
we will be furthering their interest as they make an effort to serve their
current and former students to get a better job placement.
The high percentage of job placement
will speak volume about the education at UTK and also their effort to place
students in jobs. After all, the goal of a good education is not only lifelong
learning but also contributing to the society by being employed. Students who
are employed do bring income to themselves and also to the society in which
they are part of by way of paying taxes.
The process of designing a webpage
involves coming up with a domain name which we already have www.employme.com we will purchase the domain name from an
already identified seller for $16 per year. The company name is buy domain .com
We
will have to contract with an expert web designer to help us set up a more
professional looking webpage. The designer will be paid approximately $40 per
hour. I was also given a quote of about 47 hours total required to complete the
customized work for the website. This will bring the total project design to
$1,880.
The web designer will meet with us as a
group to go over what our needs are for the website. We will schedule several
meetings to hammer out what we want. This will include how much space we need;
graphics; alternate text for images; background, text, and link color; maps;
fill-out forms; checkboxes; web content management; software; logo design and
implementation; choosing a webmaster; appointing helpers for the webmaster; how
we will get access to job advertisements; who to contact for job postings; the
format in which the advertisement must be submitted; how long to run the job;
if we have too many jobs than the space then what; faculty and administration
advisors; advertising on the website by community and special interest groups;
how much to charge for such service; will we be a non profit designation; how
to use the money we raise through advertisement; how to invest it; who will be
in charge; should we www.employme.com
dissolve who should get the funds?
Designing the logo may be time consuming
for our group and thus may want to hold a university wide contest to come up
with a logo. Students will be asked to submit their entry to a designated
person who then will keep and catalog them before we meet to decide on what we
want. We could give away some money $50-100 for the winner. Money in this case
maybe a good motivator compared to a T-shirt. Secondly, we could solicit money
from business establishment from Knox, Blount, and Anderson counties. We can
taunt our idea and promising them a space to advertise in the future.
If everything goes as planned with the
expert web designer help, UTK agreeing to host us, then we need to plan for
various job descriptions for our site. First, we must understand that most
students came to UTK to get a good education thus running the website will
require some effort and commitment. We must plan for who the webmaster will be,
assistant webmaster, persons to call up business for jobs to be advertised, the
person to type the information in a format that we can upload on the web,
president, vice president of operations, secretary, and treasurer. We also need
to plan for the bank we intend to do business with, how the funds should be
used, contact with the placement office and meetings to discuss the progress
and or changes on the website.
In conclusion, our job is manageable if
UT board of trustees agrees with our vision and UTK allow us to plug in our URL
from their homepage. The web designer has been identified, the price mentioned
above has been agreed upon and the other minor details can be worked out. Our
website may also serve as a place for practical internship for our students.
JEM 485 Final project – Group 2:
Justman Myers
Brooke Everette
Josh Lucas
Zachary Zoeller
Dale Jeffries
Josh Shaffer
Amy Clowers
Business plan for EmployMe.com
EmployMe.com is a
Audience
When analyzing the potential audience of our website,
www.EmployMe.com, a number of factors must be considered that should shape the
final product. The audience we chose to target is college students, so we need
to understand what would be the content, promotions, and sales that would be
most applicable to a large group of college students. Through a series of
randomly distributed surveys, our group has made a number of decisions about
how to properly set up a functional employment website for students at the
Content is the first factor to be
researched when creating a website. We have loosely based the layout of our
website on that of the “Facebook” phenomenon that has
recently swept the nation’s college students. Facebook.com is a website that
was started by a few Harvard students to connect their group of friends
together in an online network. They used a very simple format in which they
could post pictures, text, links, and general information about themselves for
all other users to see. According to Techcrunch.com, the popularity of this
site has skyrocketed among college students since it started. It now spans to
over 900 universities and recent polls show that over 85 percent of students
currently have a facebook account. Out of the estimated
3.8 million students who use facebook, 60% log-in
daily. We would incorporate some of the same simple, profile-style attributes
that facebook has to set up a resume site that links
graduating students to employers across the nation. The students would be able
to post a wide variety of media and information on their EmployMe.com account.
We would create links that would allow employers to view students’
accomplishments and/or talents. For example, if a broadcasting major were to
create an account, he would be able to post video clips of himself reading the
news. He could also post writing abilities, experience, and so forth for
potential employers to see. In our survey, we asked if students would post
their various skills online for the world to see and an overwhelming 83% said
they would. In contrast, 13% said they would not and 4% did not answer.
Like the incredibly popular www.myspace.com, EmployMe.com would include
features like posting audio and video. Myspace.com’s
user-friendly format is exactly what our website would implement. Users would
be able to manage their digital files easily from any computer and upload them
onto their personal space on EmployMe.com. The success of myspace.com is based
in part on this ease of use. Members can customize their web pages to fit their
personality, a feature that would be perfect for our website. Through
personalization, users can convey their attitudes and individuality to
prospective employers. For instance, if a theatre major is looking for a
comedic role, he can make the sights and sounds of his profile fit the job
sought. He can include video, audio and pictures of his performances, in
essence creating a pre-audition. If employers like what they see, they can send
e-mails to the user through the website. Unlike other resume-posting websites,
EmployMe.com would be an interactive experience instead of a static resume.
The users would not only consist of
students, but employers could create their own profiles, customized to fit the
character of their company. On these profiles, employers could list job
postings, job descriptions, pictures, video and audio files, as well as other
media that would enhance their appeal to potential employees. Employer profiles
would offer an innovative way to view companies and get to know them better.
Students would not have to wait for a job fair to see employers’ work and get
to know the attitude and character of companies. EmployMe.com’s
able staff of students, which is detailed in length below, could help employers
set up their profiles, if needed. The first employers that we seek will be UT
alumni looking to connect with UT students. There is not a better way to
contribute to an alma mater than helping its current students find jobs and create
careers. Even if a company does not have any specific job available, they could
post valuable information about the job application process, what they look for
in future employees and what a typical workday is like for them. All of this
information would help students prepare for the job search. Employers’ profiles
would also include an option to directly e-mail the company. This would prove
valuable because student would not have to search high and low for a company’s
contact information, put together a paper resume and send it, hoping for a
response. There would be a direct UT connection between the employer and
student, and the e-mail feature would offer increased efficiency in
communication and response. The employer could then view the student’s online
resume and profile on EmployMe.com, basically a pre-interview or audition. The
online format would save time and money, two things incredibly valuable to an
employer.
Audience
and Promotion
The college and recent graduate market should be considered a valuable and important group to companies. Because students spend so much time in class rather than working, they may not be in the position to frivolously spend money. However, they are making first-time decisions regarding investing in high value products such as automobiles. These first purchases are the potentially the beginnings of life-long brand loyalties. Securing these customers now is a way to increase business for the future. It adds long-term relationships with professional and affluent clientele. Also, the earning potential of college educated young adults is higher than that of others in the same age group.
We randomly
surveyed 180 people to find out their Internet usage habits in order to better
understand what EmployMe.com should offer and how it should serve its users.
Ages of those surveyed ranged from 19 to 53, the majority of whom are students
at the
The survey is as follows:
Please circle responses.
Do you have access to a computer?
Yes No
How often to you get online?
-Never
-Once a month
-Once a day
-Multiple times per day
Where do you go to get the majority of your news?
-I don’t get the news
-Newspapers
-TV
-Internet
-Radio
-Combination
How much money do you spend per week on entertainment on average?
1$-30$
31$-45$
46$-60$
61$-75$
Have you ever bought anything using the Internet?
Yes No
If yes, what did you buy?
Do you ever look at advertisements on the Internet?
Yes No Sometimes
Do you work or have class online?
Yes No
Is Internet access an important factor in where you go?
Yes No
Would you visit a website affiliated with UT?
Yes No
What is your favorite website?
Would you post your own music online as part of your talent?
Yes No N.A.
What are your talents?
Do you have any comments or suggestions about a new UT website?
Age:
Sex: M F
The results are as follows:
|
Have
access to a computer |
|
|
|
Justman |
100% |
out of 30 |
|
Dale |
100% |
out of 41 |
|
Josh L |
100% |
out of 23 |
|
Josh S |
91.40% |
out of 35 |
|
Brooke |
100% |
out of 25 |
|
Amy |
100% |
out of 11 |
|
Zack |
100% |
out of 9 |
|
TOTAL |
98.80% |
|
|
Time
Online |
Justman |
Dale |
Josh L |
Josh S |
Brooke |
Amy |
Zack |
TOTAL Avg |
|
Never |
0.30% |
0 |
0 |
2.80% |
0 |
0 |
0 |
0.44% |
|
Monthly |
0 |
0 |
0 |
0 |
0 |
0 |
0 |
0 |
|
Weekly |
0 |
0 |
9% |
14.00% |
8% |
0 |
0 |
4.42% |
|
Daily |
23% |
1% |
35% |
34% |
16% |
27% |
11% |
26% |
|
Mult. Daily |
73% |
93.00% |
56.00% |
48% |
76% |
72% |
89% |
72% |
|
Majority
of News |
Justman |
Dale |
Josh L |
Josh S |
Brooke |
Amy |
Zack |
TOTAL Avg |
|
Don’t |
0.35 |
0 |
13% |
8% |
12% |
0% |
11% |
6.33% |
|
Newspapers |
10% |
9% |
0 |
8% |
8% |
18% |
11% |
9.14% |
|
TV |
16% |
34% |
21% |
25% |
24% |
18% |
11% |
21.28% |
|
Internet |
26% |
19% |
17% |
31% |
20% |
18% |
22% |
21.85% |
|
Radio |
0.30% |
0% |
4% |
0% |
4% |
0% |
0% |
1.16% |
|
Combo |
40% |
17% |
43% |
25% |
28% |
45% |
56% |
36% |
|
$ On Entertaiment |
Justman |
Dale |
Josh L |
Josh S |
Brooke |
Amy |
Zack |
TOTAL
Avg. |
|
$1-30 |
60% |
15% |
45% |
77% |
40% |
36% |
78% |
50% |
|
$31-45 |
20% |
19% |
34% |
6% |
24% |
36% |
11% |
21.42% |
|
$46-60 |
10% |
0.00% |
8.60% |
0% |
16% |
18% |
11% |
10.51% |
|
$61-75 |
0.30% |
0% |
13% |
0% |
8% |
9% |
0% |
4.33% |
|
None |
7% |
4% |
0% |
17% |
4% |
0% |
0% |
4.57% |
|
Internet
Purchases |
YES |
NO |
|
Justman |
90% |
10% |
|
Dale |
90% |
10% |
|
Josh L |
91% |
9% |
|
Josh S |
46% |
54% |
|
Brooke |
84% |
16% |
|
Amy |
90% |
10% |
|
Zack |
100% |
0% |
|
Advertisements |
YES |
NO |
Sometimes |
|
|
|
Justman |
7% |
50% |
43% |
|
|
|
Dale |
22% |
44% |
34% |
|
|
|
Josh L |
17% |
26% |
13% |
|
|
|
Josh S |
17% |
17% |
60% |
|
|
|
Brooke |
64% |
36% |
0% |
|
|
|
Amy |
18% |
36% |
0% |
|
|
|
Zack |
44% |
33% |
11% |
Adds up
to be 88% ??? |
|
|
Internet
Important? |
YES |
NO |
No Answer |
|
Justman |
60% |
33% |
7% |
|
Dale |
88% |
12% |
9% |
|
Josh L |
61% |
26% |
13% |
|
Josh S |
28% |
72% |
0% |
|
Brooke |
64% |
36% |
0% |
|
Amy |
36% |
54% |
10% |
|
Zack |
67% |
33% |
0% |
|
TOTAL Avg |
57% |
38% |
5% |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Would You
Visit |
|
|
|
|
A UT
Site? |
YES |
NO |
No Answer |
|
Justman |
90% |
3% |
7% |
|
Dale |
85% |
15% |
0% |
|
Josh L |
56% |
9% |
35% |
|
Josh S |
66% |
34% |
0% |
|
Brooke |
68% |
32% |
0% |
|
Amy |
82% |
0% |
2% |
|
Zack |
100% |
0% |
0% |
|
TOTAL
Avg. |
78% |
13% |
8.50% |
|
Would You
Post |
|
|
|
|
Skills/Talents |
YES |
NO |
No Answer |
|
Justman |
83% |
10% |
7% |
|
Dale |
85% |
15% |
22% |
|
Josh L |
74% |
4% |
0% |
|
Josh S |
94% |
6% |
0% |
|
Brooke |
76% |
24% |
0% |
|
Amy |
91% |
9% |
0% |
|
Zack |
78% |
22% |
0% |
|
TOTAL
Avg. |
83% |
13% |
4% |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Ages
19-53 |
|
|
|
The EmployMe.com audience is highly educated and one of the most web-savvy audiences available. Most college students see the Internet as an important interactive medium for their college careers and beyond. Our research shows that most students are getting online at least once a day if not multiple times per day. This will give a lot of exposure to the advertisers’ products.
A large percentage of the graduates will probably buy a car after graduation. The automobile industry should be represented as advertisers for EmployMe.com. A company such as General Motors or Ford should gain interest in advertising with us once we have established EmployMe.com as a popular venue for college graduates to find a job. These companies will get the opportunity to be the first to reach this car-buying audience. Until success comes, local dealerships are a good choice to target in order to sell banner ads.
Of those graduates who will not be purchasing a car, many will need to get insurance to cover the cars they already have. The insurance they did have under their parents’ plan will expire upon graduation. Therefore, automobile insurance companies could advertise successfully on EmployMe.com.
Graduates will also be moving out of campus or student housing. This generation of graduates is clearly accustomed to having access to the Internet. This means that they will need an Internet service provider, as well as a new computer or software. This is a big opportunity for those companies because as long as there are no huge problems, they are likely to remain customers of the companies they choose first for a long time. Credit card companies, appliance makers, and furniture sellers should also be interested in reaching college graduates because they will need these things soon after graduation.
A study done by iLogos Research revealed that today 91 percent of Fortune 500 firms recruit potential employment online, according to advertising.com. There will be a large number of managers, employers and owners of companies to cater to as well those searching for a post-college job. These business owners, who have already established themselves, have more money to spend. However, they will not be in the market for the same things that college seniors and recent graduates seek. It is convenient that employers will be looking at separate information and pages.
The pages containing searchable resumes and information on finding employees are the ones that employers will see. These pages will contain advertisements geared to the specific audience.
Office suppliers cannot ask for a more targeted way to reach those who need staplers, paperclips and printer cartridges. It is true that many companies will have established relationships with other suppliers already, but businesspeople are always looking for ways to save money and work more efficiently. If they are unhappy with the way their current supplier is working out or convinced that they could do business more efficiently with the advertised company, they will try it.
These employers have company money. Company money has to go to a bank. Banks could advertise on our websites section for employers.
Promotions
Promotion is a crucial task because the success and future of EmployMe.com will depend upon the usage and popularity of the website. Without a loyal and sizeable user base, advertisers will not be interested in the website; therefore, the possibility of expansion would be eliminated.
We found that it would be best to promote EmployMe.com
through a variety of mediums. Our survey showed that an average of 36% of the
college students we surveyed get the majority of their news from a combination
of newspapers, TV, and the internet. Radio news was by far the worst medium to
promote our project because only 1% of college students check it for news. An
unsettling 5.5% of the students we surveyed don’t check the news at all. We
came to the conclusion that the Internet is the strongest medium to deliver our
promotions. We found that 73% of students in our survey check the Internet
multiple times a day. A solid 26% or the students get online daily, and less
than .5% of our surveyed students never get online.
Promotion of the
website will be a difficult task, as similar websites are already established
and the cost of promoting the product can be high. However, being linked to the
Links on several UT websites will be EmployMe.com’s strongest promotional agents. With thousands of students and faculty viewing www.utk.edu and webmail.utk.edu several times daily, the chances of success within the UT community are greatly increased. UT’s homepage always features several university events and services such as plays, art exhibits and UT-related websites. Another key website to promote EmployMe.com is the UT Career Services site: career.utk.edu. Career Services’ website would be an ideal place to feature EmployMe.com because of its commitment to helping UT students finding jobs and careers.
The EmployMe.com brand should be a new, down to earth type of website that college students can easily read and understand. Many websites fail because they do not fulfill their customers’ needs, and that is what it must accomplish first. However, our website will be affiliated with UT, so the website will be run by students in a professional manner and it will be representative of the university. This will be our first means of promotion. Having our website promoted on UT’s homepage will take care of our hosting costs, and the UT home page already sees high numbers of Internet traffic. A simple click will direct customers or potential customers to our site where they can post their skills. We will be able to get the website started with the help of UT and the Office of Information Technology
Given the popularity of the Internet in the college-age market, EmployMe.com will have a large amount of competition. New websites are starting every day and it is important to capture your niche audience and keep them coming back to your site. The website’s niche will primarily be the UT student body and alumni. We will be keeping the UT affiliation close, but on our promotion ideas we plan to have our logo and the slogan.
From our research, we came to the conclusion that 78 percent of all students surveyed said that they would visit a website that was affiliated with UT. Our audience is there and they want to visit websites that are a part of their university.
Over 98 percent of all students surveyed have access to a computer and of all the students surveyed, 72 percent are online multiple times a day, and 26 percent are online at least once a day.
Also, 83 percent of all students surveyed said that they would post their skills or talents online for potential employers to see. Once again, our audience is there and they need our website.
A simple and very
easy promotion is to print and pass out flyers. This is also a cheaper way to
reach our target audience and get the name out in the public. Once the flyers
are printed, members of the staff will be able to distribute them accordingly.
FedEx Kinko’s on
Our logo and
slogan will be posted on the flyers and directions to the website will also be
included. We have two options when placing the flyers; the full page flyers
will be posted onto bulletin boards in each college at UT, on various telephone
polls across campus, and around the
The flyers should give us a cheaper form of advertising our website and give us a valuable turnaround on website traffic.
Next, we move on to a more expensive but also more reliable form of promotion, free t-shirts. Giving away free t-shirts will attract our target audience, as well as create a new form of advertising a website. If our t-shirts are worn by the owner, people are bound to see the shirt and hopefully they will go home at the end of the day and take a look at our website.
While more
expensive then printing flyers, this mode of promotion is also more likely to
have a higher turnaround because of the giveaway. College students, for the
most part, will take anything you will give them, and we plan on doing that.
However, our t-shirt giveaway will be that only. They will not have to fill out
an information sheet like some credit card companies do on campus. In talking
with representatives of Joe Shirt,
From these forms of promotion we should have a mid to high-level market penetration. Especially around the UT campus, we should see a substantial increase in traffic as there are no costs to view our website or to look at our services. Once we get the audience visiting our website on a regular basis, we will have a higher chance of gaining them as a client and as a paying customer of the site.
Customer segmentation will be a focus of our site as well. The mainstream media advertising will not work as well for what we plan to do, so we will need to come up with the proper advertising plan to suit our customers and their needs. With proper techniques and placement, these simple and cost effective promotions can help get our name known in the market. Our website will not only benefit current students but also graduates or those seeking to get their resume and talents out to employers.
Sales
Sales is another important issue that we researched in the
planning of our website. In theory, our site would eventually be a money making
venture through the use of a small amount of advertising. Facebook.com does a
good job keeping their advertising to a minimum, yet they make solid earnings
considering how expensive it is to post an ad on their site. I think it is safe
to assume advertisers are willing to shell out an impressive amount of money to
have their product shown to the 3.8 million members who often check their
account daily. Our survey shows that college kids at the
We also found that 84% of our
surveyed students admitted to making purchases online. It’s a fact that our
generation is out spending money online and is willing to accept advertisers.
We asked if they ever clicked on online advertisements and we found that it was
almost a tie between those who do and those who do not. Our research showed
that 33% said they had followed online ads and 35% said that they don’t succumb
to the advertising. Interestingly enough, 29% said that they sometimes click on
ads, thus I think the conclusion can be made that if the advertising is
enticing enough, college students just might click on the ad and a potential
sale could be made.
Another easy selling point when
discussing advertisers is how specific the market is. Advertisers would know
exactly to whom they are selling to and how to market their product. We found
that the majority of the students we surveyed were in their early 20’s. We also
found that they rely pretty heavily on the Internet, and they are willing to
spend their money online. Advertisers and salespeople spend huge amounts of
time and money trying to understand their potential audience. In terms of
EmployeMe.com, they would know exactly who they are selling to and tailoring
their advertising campaign would be much more focused and easy.
Advertising
EmployMe.com will not only offer employment resources to students and employers, it can also generate profit by selling space to advertisers on the website. The audience will only tolerate a limited amount of advertisement on the website. Therefore, we plan to sell fewer ads at a more expensive rate.
We expect that the advertisers will get what they pay for. The website not only sells space, it sells the audience to potential advertisers. The college market, which has a high expendable income, is one of the most sought after groups by advertisers because of its independent buying habits. Companies advertising to the college market, such as AOL, ESPN, Electronic Arts, Inc. and Apple, would know exactly what audience is viewing their advertisements. They will be able to reach a targeted audience that they can tailor their ads to.
There are two groups that will see the website. These two groups are college students or recent graduates and employers. While both groups are important to reach, they will have to be reached differently. Each group has separate needs and wants. For instance, a college student might be more interested in video games than a Wall Street broker, and a company executive would be more interested in buying stocks than a recent graduate. The different groups will be interested in visiting separate parts of the website so it will be easy to specify the most successful product and ad for that product to the viewer. Thus, the advertisements will be catered to whoever is viewing the page at any given moment. Since users will be required to log-in to view the website; their age, occupation and other demographic information will be known and the website will automatically show an advertisement appropriate to the viewer.
The staff of EmployMe.com would be made entirely of UT students. Since our website is based off of The University of Tennessee’s domain, it would be in our best interest to use UT students. This way the students are getting real world experience and actually putting to use the information they learn in class. The opportunity for students to participate in running the website would not be limited to one specific major. Our website would utilize as many majors as possible. We hope professors would be willing to set up a requirement in their classes for students to work on the website.
This website would allow for many students to participate as wanted. We hope to have the website run fully by students with the supervision of a faculty member. This way we are giving students the full responsibility of running the website and keeping it up. Not only does this allow students to get hands on experience, but also it allows them to have something they can put on their resume.
By using UT students we also save on costs. Since students would be getting credit for the class we would not be paying them. This situation of hiring students not only helps the students, but it also helps the university. It cuts down on the cost to run the website.
There are many
majors at The University of Tennessee that has something to offer to the
website. Within the
Another
major within the
An
area where we could allow students the opportunity to do HTML formatting would
be in the Computer Science major within the
Another
major that would be usual in help with the staffing of the website EmployMe.com
would be the Journalism and Electronic Media Major within the
Another
area where we would rely on free staffing would come from Career Services. We
would utilize this office when students or participates of the website needed
help with their resumes. This office offers free help for all
By having all of the staffing come from within The University of Tennessee, the website is saving money before it even starts. The staffing is a cost that EmployMe.com does not have to consider. Not only are we saving money by using students, we are giving them real experience that they can use when they look for a job.
In conclusion, we hope to create a website that is helpful to the students and graduates of UT. Our main goal is to fulfill a need we think is present on our campus. This website will benefit everyone affiliated with it, from the students to the employers, even the university itself. Our plan is to create something that is a success and that will represent our university well.
Website Design
Designing a website is complicated and involving work. The website will serve to connect many of our potential users to employers and to each other. The customers for this website will current UTK and former students’. We will peddle this idea to the UT board of trustees because of its future utility to students. UTK administration will be asked by our group to host a URL link of our website www.employme.com .
Because UT already has a website which involves many hits per day by current students, potential students, community groups, parents, news media, and other groups, it would be to our advantage to have UT webmaster place an URL for us on their homepage. The URL ought to be visible from the UT homepage and possibly placed in a less conspicuous place. We do understand that there might be some resistance from administrators citing the possibility that their homepage is already cramped with information and thus have no room.
However, we should convince them of the long-term benefit of this webpage. We could even make a case that we will be helping recruit new students and helping current students as we will serve as another alternative to what they currently offer. The greatest benefit to UT is that we will be furthering their interest as they make an effort to serve their current and former students to get a better job placement.
The
process of designing a webpage involves coming up with a domain name, ours
being www.employme.com, but since the
name is already owned by another entity, we will purchase the domain name from
them for $16 per year. The seller’s name is buydomain .com.
Running the website will require some effort and commitment. As previously noted, UT students will be the primary work force behind the creation and maintenance of the website. We must select a Webmaster and Assistant Webmaster to head this group of students and ensure the website is run well. The student designers will hold meetings to discuss the progress and changes to the website and who will perform the changes and how.
The designers will meet as a group to go over what our needs are for the website. We will schedule several meetings to hammer out what we want. This will include how much space is needed; graphics; alternate text for images; background, text, and link color; maps; fill-out forms; checkboxes; web content management; software; logo design and implementation; the format in which the advertisement must be submitted; how long to run the job.
[i] The
[ii]Office
of the University Registrar, http://registrar.utk.edu/registration/prerequisites_ug.pdf
on
Franklin D. Jeffries II
To: Sequoyah Elem. School/Martha Hill
Re: Records
Cc: Allen Everett (Attorney of Law)
From: Dale Jeffries
This is a letter regarding my
child’s Records Allison Lynn Jeffries. I do need to know if my child was in school
this day (
Indeed, please contact me in the future by mail, email, phone, however. I would also like to know about pictures, events etc….
Sincerely,
Franklin D Jeffries II
Today Date:
Contacts for me:
865-936-3300 (C)
865-946-5223 (H)
fdj@utk.edu
Ps. Any information about my daughter may only be transmitted to Tamara Rae Jeffries my second wife if I am not available. She and she only may contact the school and obtain any record or records on the behalf of me in the interest of my daughter. Thank you for your help. This consent is good as long as I say other wise in writing.
Witness ______________________________________
______________________________________
Wife ______________________________________
______________________________________
2521 Kingston Pike Apt 703 Knox, TN 37919
Franklin D. Jeffries II
American Sign Language
Dr. Davis Class
Movie Activity
READ THIS or BE LEFT OUT!
The movie “Miss Congeniality 2” left a wonderful impression in view of a well screen write. However, spending time with students in American Sign Language class is even more graceful to me. I would like to share three motivations about the experience that pleased me for the over all experience. Also, I would like to share an experience I learned in the movie for the first time under caption: keep in mind I am a film maker too, so learning new tricks in a trade is rewarding not only to me but for the deaf as well.
First impressions leave the greatest treasure on others when we first meet them; just like the ASL beginner’s class who attended the dinner and a movie too. I got a chance to talk to Carols students who I seen at another activity this year. These beginners reminded me of all the new questions I had about learning new words. I spend about two hours with them teaching them new words, and every once in a while they would refresh my memory as well. Seeing students getting better with their Sign Language over time impressed me.
Another intuition for me is how well the interpreter could sign quicker than the eye. As we waited in the lobby for the manager to set up an earlier time for caption for us, Michael followed along with the interpreter so he would know what the lady was saying about what time the movie would be changed too. I tried to follow her and realized I am not as fast as Bug’s Bunny yet, so I just used me ears and stayed amazed that people can talk really fast with their hands.
Anyhow, I really enjoy spending time with people interested in learning Sign Language. My experience with a dinner and a movie for this activity will be the most remembered in all my events for the deaf. I do recommend this kind of an event in the future for all students. Most of all I really enjoyed spending time with others that have the same common interest in learning a language. The activity alone means more to me than the movie: the reason is my family ties to the deaf community.
Having deaf family like my Aunt and Uncle Minnie and Gene Reynolds is a good reason for using ear plugs in a movie. Acting deaf for the first time while watching captions made me pay attention to more details. I am familiar with watching movies with out sound because I am a film maker. However, I never noticed some of the music the producers and directors use in the back ground until I discovered the words on the caption that I had to watch. The word a film maker would use is (mise-in-scene). The importance of the word is what to put in the back ground to help evoke people’s emotions better, just like the words to the songs I never can hear well or never pay any attention too until now. Captions gave me a better look for how I can help the deaf people see the emotion better too.
Caption
is a hard skill to follow in a movie with all the movements and special effects
going on around the screen. However, the little thing is what I am finding that
count in life the most. Just
like the manager who set an earlier time for our class, and like the students
who are willing to get together and learn more signs to communicate with the
deaf. The most important part of this event for me is living to see another day
of progress.
__________________________________________________________________________________________
SCREENING REPORT
Volume 1, Collectors Edition
FILM:
CITY:
ATTENDANCE (%): 100%
Full TICKET
RATIO:
ATTENDANCE: All Seats
Full and some had to stand.
WALKOUTS: Maybe 5
left when John said, “keep it in a safe place.”
A Theater Employee said, “They waited
at the door to see the end, so they could be the first one out.”
SCREENING
INFORMATION: 5020 Millertown Pike-> Carmike 10
|
SCREENING TYPE |
DATE |
THEATRE & CAPACITY |
TIME |
PROMO VALUE |
GENERAL REACTION |
|
Advanced |
|
Carmike |
|
N/A |
Fair |
DEMOGRAPHICS:
|
% MALE: |
60 |
% BLACK: |
10 |
% HISPANIC: |
0 |
|||
|
% FEMALE: |
40 |
% WHITE: |
90 |
% ASIAN: |
0 |
|||
AGES: |
||||||||
|
% 0 - 12: |
0 |
% 13 - 17: |
5 |
% 18 – 24 |
40 |
|||
|
% 25 - 34: |
20 |
% 35 - 49: |
30 |
% 50 +: |
5 |
|||
PRESS ATTENDEES/
REACTIONS:
Outlet
|
Journalist |
Reviewer or Feature Writer |
Reaction or Comments |
|
1 |
Betsy Pickle |
KnoxNews Sentinel |
Good 3 Stars |
|
1 |
102.1 Star |
Radio Station |
Good 3 Stars |
|
1 |
90.3 College Radio |
TheTorch |
Good |
AUDIENCE REACTION:
|
22male “Pretty Good” “Nice FX” “Meeting
Gabriel very cool” “Giving Satan the finger, not very funny” |
|
26Male “The Acting was not the best” “I got
what I paid for, wasn’t let down” |
|
58Female “The Man pulls his cancer out; and
that is why he didn’t die. I liked that”
|
|
? Female: Betsy
Pickle from the |
|
37Male “It was
Okay, I liked the Locations.” |
|
14Female “The Scene
Where Isabella’s sister was flying through walls, I was Surprised.” “When |
|
Another 14yold
Female said, “I wouldn’t so much call this a scary movie. It’s more freaky. I
like how he points out sometimes you might even have to die to really believe
in a higher power, and really understand what life is about. Good that it
also included some humor.” |
|
61 year old Man
said, “Somebody is on bad drugs.” I must agree with that. |
|
While Someone was
leaving said, “Petty Good, better than I expected”. |
|
Not A Blockbuster,
But a Movie for College Student’s to Study. I personally think in the long
run By me: Dale Jeffries Film Study Student
and Director at 30yrs old and still Male |
TRAILERS (if any):
|
Studio |
Film |
Audience Reaction |
|
N/A |
N/A |
N/A |
Screening Reps
Report:
This is my first Professional Review for WB
Pictures, and in my career.
Scene (1): Nice
Opening: Reaction was good when the car hits the man. Someone said, “God”. Fear
Scene (2): Good
Scene--No Response
Scene (3): Intro to
the main Characters: Scary, some transition to the music not in sink. Mickey
Mouse-ing techniques with the editing could have been
better before the point when John heals her with his thumb. Keanu Reeves says,
“Mirror three feet high” and for some reason this line was funny for a few
audience members. I do not know why either, may have been because of the corny
line. Would have to see this part again where I could focus in more.
Scene (4): Move the
Car scene: Good Job on the effects and some laughed on the lines right before
Reeves walked out of the room.
Scene (5): In the car
traveling: The lines, “let him know” was laughed at in this scene and John,
John, John John is said way to much here by Chaze.
Scene (6):
Confession—No Response
Scene (7): Pool: No
Response—Don’t see how this scene is connected yet.
Scene (8): Blood spit
out in sink—Audience response Normal “yuk”
Scene (9): Got laughs
from the lines of the black lady.
Scene (10): Hospital
room:—no response yet. Wondering and trying to understand at this point.
Scene (11): Man Jumps
over fence: Getting to the story board at this point/seems like the 2 story
going on point. Seems like a two narrative turn and twist here. Good.
Scene (12): Funny
again before the lines finger puppet.
Scene (13): Somewhere
in here John was said to many times again, and I’m not sure the scene fits the
story.
Scene (14): Library:
Many stories going on again here, confusing the audience to much. The director
is doing a better job getting to the story line when John says, “I was born
with this curse” or “he knows he was born with this curse”. They are lots of
laughs at the end of the scene when “he’s fucked”.
Scene (15):
Scene (16):
Detective: Isabel Saying
Scene (17): Trying to
get the Matchbox: This Mise-en-scene portion of the
movie did not connect to the narrative (was not clear with what the matchbox
had to do with the movie). Kicking the
water was funny to some audience members, but more bizarre for me is why did
Francis Lawrence decide to keep the water on the camera?
Scene (18): Red room
Club: To many Johns in the script. Not sure way John is said so many times.
Scene (19): Many
scenes (stories) not flowing at this point. No Reactions here.
Scene (20): “What
kind of Mental patient Kills herself” Scene may need some Mickey Mouse-ing with it as a Director I may think about making this
scene more serious. -Funny to some-
Scene (21): Up to
this point, I think the flow of excitement needed much more work. This is the
Producers’ job and Directors job to get a second opinion while in Pre, Post and
Production.
Scene (22): Got some
laughs at, “close your eyes” “suit your self”. (Good Scene all together here)
Scene (23): Very bad,
bad, bad transition with the bus. The editors mistake here.
Scene (24): Holding
the Cat while Reeves wets his feet scene. Audience laughs at her saying, “be
careful with that cat”. Nice Transition with the sound and her hair. (Good Job
Here)
Scene (25): In hell
Scene: Isabel is in hell because she commits suicide. Good story and effects
here with the Mise-en-scenes. (Great Job here)
Scene (26): John
Finds out Isabel kills her self. (Good transitions with music)
Scene (27): Priest
Freaks out: Fear is showed very well here and it is clear that the devil is in
control of the Alky priest. (Good Scene for the story)
Scene (28): Boy
looking out bus: Transition not well around this point and needs clarification
on what the shot has to do with the story.
Scene (29): Cops find
dead priest: Bowling ally Good Suspense for scene. (No Reactions here) Just
mine, maybe to suspense and tends to exhaust people.
Scene (30): Hospital
room Scene: Confused, but focused on trying to fig out point.
The Twist
in the movie is at this point for me.
Scene (31): Car Ride
to the Bowling Ally up to the end of the scene where she finds the coin and the
honey jars on the ceiling with the knife and the gun John carries with his to
his next scene: Not Sure how the Mise-en-Scenes fit
in to action. The props and costumes should have been emphasized more for
precision here in this scene. The clues are not collaborating with the audience
and for what reason?
Scene (32): John said,
“No turning back.” The detective (Rachel Weisz)
Acting was not effective in this scene and she seemed out of balance with
Reeves here. People are laughing around this scene. Some laughing may be because of the suspense
to the movie and laughing is natural when focused or nervous like an actor or
actress gets in a performance. Weise seems to be
acting in this way, causing the viewers not to feel the emotions that are
supposed to be evoked. The prep Actor or the director could have helped her
with getting in the mood on every scene: this would help the movie
tremendously.
Scene (33): Clues not
being explained well again. The General Warning Sign is burning away and is not
even as clear to the smartest. A 14 year old girl gets the meaning better than
adults. She quoted once again; “I like how he points out sometimes you might
have to die to really believe in a higher power…” A child can understand dieing
better than us. This is a big hint is it?
I got the feeling at this point
that this movie is going to be a, oOo I get it now. I
finally understand!
Scene (34): Killing
the Devil or his helper: the helper is the poky dot tie man. (Good Scene)
Scene (35): Crossing
over or sucked out the building as some understood it: Good Scene and starting
to make a little more depths to the expanding mind.
Scene (36):
Transitions to the red room: John needs to use the chair. The writer got a
laugh at the line, “by the way.” Good job on all work at this scene. And at the beginning of this red room the supporting
actor had a good line too for once, “he knocked you out”. However,
Scene (37): Bad
transition again in the editing and story here at this point.
Scene (38): Now
getting back to the front story with the knife. A rule of thumb in directing
movies or plays is start at a point and end up back there. Jump in, jump out
and back in again. The moment of truth is about to be revealed somehow.
Scene (39): Getting
better with Transitions.
Scene (40): “My name
is John… Deporting… Go to Hell” This part is Excellent.
Scene (41): Swimming
pool baby in tummy: Very well rounded scene. At this point I started to get the
sick feeling in my tummy. Everyone did a good job evoking the suspended
emotions here.
Chaze-Not the best supporting Actor, but has hit
some good lines. I think he could have been better if the producer/writer gave
him some better lines. His dieing scene was good.
Scene (42): The Baby
and angle scene: The baby was not clear to me in this scene and the arm bands
on the angle did not make brains. I think the arm bands could have been the
mark of the beast. The devil’s helper said once upon a time about something of
a first born child if he kills him. And she, (the detective) ended up killing
him with a gun. Ok, is the child the antichrist that lives in the end? You
decide this one for your self. Mise-en-Scene needed
work here. I really did enjoy the freeze effect with the hair. Around this part
is my favorite of the movie and does put the rest of the movie effects to shame
(competition wise). However, even a simple effect can top the chart the story
here gets reviled deeply all around.
Scene (43): “I got
Stock” was and is the funniest line in the whole movie, and got the biggest
laugh of course. However, is a phrase that is used but never in this way have I
ever heard. “I got Stock” is original for comedy practice. The lines come
around the Soul Collector line/scene. And indeed, “cut your finger… Got one
too” made the top laugh. Spirit Destiny is trying to con
Lucifer saves detective and her
unborn child because
Anyway, the angle in scene 43 prays
out loud and says, “Father.” Someone “don’t have her back anymore” according to
the dialogue.
Scene (44): “My
Sister Isabel” John finds out his sister is Isabel as we do too. Maybe, it is a
trick to get him to accept the mark of his destiny. However, he slashes his
wrist and accepts to save his loved ones in return he enters hell or does he?
Very good at this point good but you have to think really deep and for the ones
who have no education on the backdoor of revs would not get the movie or part
here.
Scene (45): A Bright
Light Resurrection like ET bird did once upon a time here, but in a
Scene (46): Lucifer
tried to pull out his lungs and kill him anyway but God let him pull out his
cancer instead, and once again God told the Devil
Scene (47): Put this document “some
where safe” because this is my most thought out work and is worth a lot of
money I do believe in what I do as a College Student Majoring in Film Studies.
Relating to the movie on the other hand John said, “Put it somewhere safe” (the
knife or our hearts is it?). However, 5 people may have walked out at this
point. Indeed, “some like it some don’t” John Constantine said.
The End!
I would rate this
movie as a director’s point of view as a 5 star (*****) movie when it comes to
my quote, a Movie for College Student’s to Study. I personally think in the
long run
I say this because it
is a very educated movie but at the same time children can fig out the simplest
of things like the burning Doctor’s General HEART Warning on a pack of
smokes.
Dale Jeffries
Extended Audience
Reviews
14 Year old said,
“Have to die to
really believe in a higher power” (also said) “I liked it when the glass
shattered and that seemed as if time had stopped. Made me upset Lucifer took Isabel’s
sister though. Special effects are good. Honestly, it was a little drug out at
times. Could’ve used better story line to help viewers understand what exactly
the story was getting across, more clearly. The Ending was pretty good how it
kept you in suspense whether he was going to heaven or hell. Although, the
movie a little confusing to me.”
58 Year old
Woman
Positive – “The
movies special effects were great. Story at times was confusing. The movie Kept
my interest until the last segment, than I became bored. The conclusion should
have been more exciting at the end. Movie lasted too long. If last scene was
sharpened; than it would have rated more with me. The scenes I liked the best
is the real life situations such as man hit by a car. Left a shock with the
Audience because seem so real. The drowning of the girl in tub left you unable
to breath. The suicide of slashing the wrist made you not want to look (scary).
Did not see anything sad in the movie: because you really did not get to know
the characters deeply. The characters are just in and out of situations. Funny was the finger. Started off great and
the ending left you a feeling of wanting to leave before the movie was over. There were scenes that I thought was more
real than the Exorcist.”
61 Year old Man
My favorite easadropping quote I heard, “Somebody is on Bad
Drugs.”
“Dyslexia is a gift
to help others see what they can’t see--Dale Jeffries Film
Director/Producer/Writer”
“Over Coming is the battle that
is achieved only through others encouragements”
I hope you like very much. I have put my heart and soul in
this work.
I give you consent to use and abuse my thoughts anyway you wish as long as you
give me the recognition that (I did it) everything I wrote is mine and my own
to share for the purpose of growth for the Movies that I love so much. I hope
the entire Cast and Crew sees this review and deciphers through it to become
better at what they do. And for the Advertising I hope this helps you in deeper
pockets to spread the wealth around our new circle. I want to thank all of you
for giving me this opportunity I enjoy so much, and have trained for in school
for 24 years now.
I want to thank you Dena and Laura for giving me this job as WB Pictures
Screening Rep in
“Dyslexia is a gift to help others see what they can’t see--Dale Jeffries Film
Student Director/Producer/Writer and Over Coming is the battle that is achieved
only through others encouragements”
From the University of Tennessee:
I am Dale Jeffries
865-691-8627
Looking for a internship
Pass me on or Pass me by?
http://kidswb.warnerbros.com/web/home/home.jsp
Betsy Pickle can criticize a movie but can’t take the heat
from a statement I passed on to her. Maybe I was wrong by letting her know some
public truth. And I should have kept my mouth shut and turned the other cheek,
but I didn’t because I was trying to be nice to someone. Sorry Betsy I hurt
your feelings. Next time I will not tell you that A Journalism Staff suggested
that I should write for the paper so people could get a better outlook on the
skirts of movies. Thanks for going behind my back and telling WB Pictures that
I hurt your feelings. Being a Journalist as you are, you should have confronted
me with the problem then. I’m not going to TAKE YOUR JOB OVER if that is why
you are making philosophy out of Criticism. However, I’m sorry for what it is
worth. But I think it would be a good ideal for someone to write a review of
the movie too, because being a movie lover as I am helps better the eyes of the
viewers, and it may help them to go see a movie that you jump all over. WB also
said, “They have never considered
Dale Jeffries
JEM Major
Everything
I said is true to the fullest and I give the Daily Beacon or any new outlet to
publish any part of this story. You have my consent and permission to print
this Article I wrote (Franklin D. Jeffries II). I am a Student of the
University of the Tennessee Knoxville and I should have the write to express my
Freedom of Speech. I will be finished
I have considered the 6 laws of libel and believe with all my education I am protected by laws on published, identified, defamation, fault, injury and so on. Everything I say is true and not slander neither false. And Betsy Pickle is a Public figure and in our field of journalism I hope Freedom of Press still stands.
Students and comrades of the Press, I have never felt more
criticized in Journalism and Electronic Media until now, and I believe it is in
the best interest to print this Article on behalf of
Franklin D. Jeffries II
Dale Jeffries
Franklin D. Jeffries II
Law Class 400
Professor Dwight Teeter &
Professor Kelly Leiter
Ethics Activity 1
Run the Story and be sued
I have been presented with a story by Clemens Bierce who used to work here at the UB40News Sentinel. Bierce sent me an Email saying, “it is a big story that is worth a great deal of money for a one-time publication, and I want to keep the copyrights in the story so I can expand it into a book.” As a reporter, my job at the UB40News Sentinel as editor is to “seek truth and report it.”¹ On these grounds I found the story not to be complete in our codes of ethics and laws for professional journalists, so for the following reasons below is why at this time I do not plan to publish the story that Clemens Bierce presented.
Under our Attorneys advice our story lacks insufficient facts for the absolute truth to print. Even though, some facts are true from court documents like the conservatorship record that was set up during the term of our former Governor Neil Golden, Golden can not be linked with absolute truth to the girl (Jane Doe). According the National Alliance for the Mentally Ill, “You can be put on a conservatorship if the court believes that you are ‘gravely disabled’ which means having a mental disorder that keeps you from being able to provide food, clothing and shelter for yourself.”²
¹ Dwight L Teeter, Jr. and Bill Loving, Law of Mass
Communication, 11th ed,
(
² http://www.namiscc.org/newsletters/July01/conservatorship.htm
Viewed website on
However, this story of conservatorship is true on the bases related to only Jane Doe. Running this part of the story according to our Attorneys would lead us to a libel law suit. And her having a mental condition dose not makes it right for me to publish a story with out truth or her consent. Discriminating and downgrading this girl even more would do more harm then we could do more good. Only to prove that a Governor we all liked so well ended up crooked. Our Attorneys explained a similar case: Gertz v. Robert Welch which has influenced our decision even further. The Court of Appeals said,
“Because private individuals characteristically have less effective opportunities for rebuttal than do public officials and public figures, they are more vulnerable to injury from defamation. Because they have not voluntarily exposed themselves to increased risk of injury from defamatory falsehoods, they are also more deserving of recovery.”³
According to the Majority Opinion in this case we maybe libel if we print only the conservatorship with out all the facts. We do not know the girl had any connection with Golden in this document. Therefore, our ethics in running this story of a fourteen year old girl who was rapped or had sexual conducts with the former Governor Neil Golden lacks evidence, and would libel UB40News Sentinel for defaming two parties, the girl and Golden. Even though the girl is now a women, truth still has to be proved before I can print a story of self defamation.
³
http://www.bc.edu/bc_org/avp/cas/comm/free_speech/gertz.html
Viewed website on
Or Law
The question is what would happen if we do not hurry up and print this story, and if we just go ahead and draft it up and print it, what would the out come? A good example our Attorney explained that relates to the same case Gertz v. Robert Welch is,
“failure to investigate the truth of the
allegations, coupled with its receipt of communications challenging the factual
accuracy of this author in the past, amounted to actual malice, that is,
'reckless disregard' of whether the allegations were true or not. New York
Times [
We
would be responsible for our actions for not taking our time and finding the
truth. Someone may take the story before UB40News, and if so, that is fine. A
case such as a young girl v. a Governor who is accused of raping her is taken
very seriously, and at the same time has to be researched even further to cover
our tracks from law suits. Considering the truth in a case of this kind is the
most important part as a journalist. If we do not print the truth and take the
time to research the actual story in facts, we are libel.
At
UB40News we dedicate our integrity by our principles in protecting our
community by researching the truth. Failure to do so is not just degrading to
us as journalist, but humiliating to others. In our preamble of code and ethics
for professional Journalists stats that, “The duty of the journalists is to
further those ends by seeking truth and providing a fair and comprehensive
account of events and issues.”² Failing to do so leads our integrity untrue and
incomplete.
¹ http://www.bc.edu/bc_org/avp/cas/comm/free_speech/gertz.html
Viewed website on
Or Law
Or Law
² Dwight, p. 994.
In our findings, rather our story should print a story on a former Governor Goldmen who was accused of having a relationship with a minor, which is a felony if convicted. The simple answer is no, not yet. Finding facts about the truth is a good start before any journalists should publish any report. Especially if the story is down grading to the people involved. There are four facts our lawyers advised us on to make our decision why we should not print this story at this time. And their research included the following facts:
0. “Seek truth and report it.”º
1. “Because private individuals… they are more vulnerable to injury from defamation. Because they have not voluntarily exposed themselves to increased risk of injury from defamatory falsehoods, they are also more deserving of recovery.”¹
2. “failure
to investigate the truth of the allegations, coupled with its receipt of
communications challenging the factual accuracy of this author in the past,
amounted to actual malice, that is, 'reckless disregard' of whether the
allegations were true or not. New York Times [
3. “The duty of the journalists is to further
those ends by seeking truth and providing a fair and comprehensive account of
events and issues.”³
º Dwight, p. 994.
¹ http://www.bc.edu/bc_org/avp/cas/comm/free_speech/gertz.html
² http://www.bc.edu/bc_org/avp/cas/comm/free_speech/gertz.html
³ Dwight, p. 994.
Discriminating
and downgrading this girl even more would do more harm then we could do more
good. We can not publish the story because the girl would be identified and the
truth has not been reviled. We would
be responsible for our actions for not taking our time and finding the truth.
Failure to find truth is degrading to us as a journalist, and humiliating to
others.
In conclusion, the story presented by Clemens Bierce who used to work here at the UB40News Sentinel is not going to be published at this time. However, our publisher has paid Bierce for the information on Golden he sent me by Email saying, “it is a big story that is worth a great deal of money for a one-time publication, and I want to keep the copyrights in the story so I can expand it into a book.” Our publisher has also worked out a deal with Bierce that binds him to UB40News Sentinel. As a reporter, my job at the UB40News Sentinel as editor is to “seek truth and report it.”¹ On these grounds I found the story not to be complete in our codes of ethics and laws for professional journalists, so for the following reasons I have to move on to another story until facts are presented in truth.
¹ Dwight, p. 994
Franklin D. Jeffries II
History 242
Henry Staruk
What would they do with Napoleon’s Power?
I believe The Count De Las Cases would use Napoleon’s power to gain equity and rights for every citizen with out using campaigns. However, I believe he would use his power to get equity with out force. Johann Gottfried Von Herder would too. I believe Herder and Las Cases would use Napoleon’s psychological power with out war.
First let’s see how The Count would use Napoleon’s powers and why. He states wonderfully, “the dreams of the upright men of all ages were realized.” Also, he said, “it was found necessary to sell, in order to provide the charges of the war.” Freedom of being equal is what the campaigns were for, taking away the thought of noble and bringing equity. I believe he would use dreams and money to avoid war.
Anyhow, since De Las Cases is Napoleon’s secretary transcriber (writer). I believe from his quotes above he would use his wits in power. I believe he would focus on peoples dream’s of freedom and use this psychological power rather than war. I believe he would use Napoleons powers because he would show equally a better way. Indeed, Herder would use the same method because he dose not believe in slavery. He said, “No words can express the sorrow and despair of a bought or stolen negro slave”. He makes it clear through out his reading how slavery is not right. Herder is more likely to use Napoleon’s campaigns than Cases would, because of the anger he has against these evil spirits. Anyway, he is against slavery and should be against campaigns of war too, as any good Man should be.
Franklin D. Jeffries II
History 242
Henry Staruk
Three Worst Things Napoleon Did
Napoleon maybe a king in his time but reminds me of the game we call Risk.
The worst things Napoleon did to his country is, try to play God, second he tried to take over to much land, and last he did not take care of his peoples health.
Forgetting to take care of his people’s health would make me not like him. Just think the sewage system was not even changed from Louie the 14th according to Alistair Horne. He wrote a very good book called, “The Age of Napoleon.” Every page has an interesting fact about Napoleons life.
The most motivating fact is how Horne makes Napoleon out to be a God. Even at the very beginning he states a “book about Napoleon, yet one more added to the total of 600,000….” He even called the book another “episode that fundamentally changed Western civilization.” Not only did Horne start the book boldly about Napoleon, he agrees, the Emperor of Paris left his people in tears.
Napoleons country’s health may not have been
the best of time, but at least the sewage system is better in
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Franklin D. Jeffries II
History 242
Henry Staruk
Define Anti Nationalism Your self “To The United States of America”, by Robert Bridges maybe the closest Anti Nationalistic poem in the book of World War One British Poets. Being devoted to your own nation is protection of common welfare in my eyes. The definition for nationalism: it is the belief that nations will benefit from acting independently. I believe the one line in the poem that states, “God Grant we may- Transform the earth” is clearly not independently for the good of one nation. Anti-Nationalism is hard is define. However, from the research I have done in this book, I had a hard time finding any poem Anti-nationalist. The poems in the book are all talking about their common welfare in one form or fashion. Every poem in the book is personal and dark, mostly because of the war going on, but over all every poem had something to do with death. Defining which play is most anti-nationalism is not easy and not even clear at this point to me. Anyhow, the poem “To The United States of America” is the closest I could even come the Anti-nationalism. The poem even has a little nationalism to it too. The line, “they challenge freedom to the fray” is a nationalism statement by acting independently for one’s nation. Over all, all of the poems has a little of both (Nationalism v. Anti-Nationalism). I do believe this reading assignment has been opinionated for our own interpretation to define nationalism.
Franklin D. Jeffries II
History 242
Henry Staruk
French Had More Reason
The Germans are “soulless yet aggressive, and boneheaded” (page 49). However, the word soulless is a way to me they have no clue why they are fighting the war. In my opinion fighting for a cause make’s me believe a soul is important. I am not totally sure but having a reason to fight would make a better cause.
Anyhow, “to the French it had come as a blow to national pride, making any lingering thought of withdrawal impossible” (page 268). The French had more to lose in a military war trench fair. I am right about the Germans in one point; they did try to take over the world. Being the French with their pride shows they’re not just going to let strangers just come in their houses and take over.
The French had “to make sure they
understood how vital their task was to the nation (page 285). A nation they had
to protect for the good of man kind. Germens came in
Franklin Jeffries Study Case
DIETEMANN V. TIME,
INC, 449 F.2d 245 (9thCir. 1971)
FACT: Reporter Jackie Metcalf and
Photographer William Ray cracked a case of medical fraud working with
QUESTION: Did Time Inc, impose on Dietmann’s privacy.
DECISION: Yes. (Judge Shirley Hufstedler made the final decision in an appeal by Time).
REASONS: “The district court concluded: "The publication in Life Magazine on November 1, 1963 of plaintiff's picture taken without his consent in his home on September 20, 1963 was an invasion of his privacy under California law for which he is entitled to damages to [Dietemann's] feelings and peace of mind. Time appeals from that decision”. Judge Hufstedler wrote, “Investigative reporting is an ancient art; its successful practice long antecedes the invention of miniature cameras and electronic devices. The first Amendment has never been construed to accord newsmen immunity from torts or crimes committed during the course of newsgathering.”
The Dietemann Decision modified the concept of freedom of press in two ways.
1) “The First Amendment gives the media no right to break the law with impunity, even if
legitimate news is being pursued”.
2)
Reporters are
not protected by the First Amendment when they commit crimes or torts.
SOURCES: (1) http://www.bc.edu/bc_org/avp/cas/comm/free_speech/dietemann.html
(2) Dwight L Teeter, Jr. and Bill Loving, Law of Mass Communication, 11th ed,
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To: Professor: Sam Swan
From: Franklin Delano Jeffries II
Re: Practical Experience & One Recommendation
Date:
My
name is Delano Franklin Jeffries. However, most of my family and friends call
me Dale. My parents Frank and Charlotte were both born and raised in
I’m
currently classified as a 5th year senor at the
In the Spring Semester of 2005, I struggled to finish the practicum at Community Television. Being new to the work field of cable television was hard. My life came to a halt during that long year with a heart problem. The reason I did not go back and finish my work at CTV is because of guilt of missing one day. During my time there I worked hard. I also had my own struggles and fears to cope with. And one of them was: “Am I going to be doing this the rest of my life?”
Maybe if my spirits are not broken, I will work that dream job of nine to five. Indeed, helping people work through their problems is the most important lesson I have learned this year. I can only say that if we all work together in hard times such as mine, then maybe the undergraduates will have a better chance of keeping their jobs. I really was scared to go back to work, because I missed one day with out calling, and no one called to see if I was alright.
Making the same mistake twice, almost jeopardized my work hear at UT Extensions. However, knowing that it was up to me to put fourth a better effort, I improved towards the middle of the semester. I hoped that UT Extensions would call me, but I realized that I had to be responsible for making the phone calls.
Even though, some jobs will not call you, UT Extension has helped me find my way back to work. Doug Edlund the Video Editor at The University of Tennessee Institute of Agriculture has done a wonderful job keeping me on track. Edlund’s response to all my emails has encouraged me to continue.
Sometimes we all must struggle to gain the gratitude’s and the integrity of others. Working with Edlund has been much appreciated. I really am glad there is an alternative for students like me. UT Extensions is a perfect place to get experience. The work I have done is online at www.dalebay.com in the movie project’s folder. Indeed, I have found my interest and talents from these practicums.
Recommendation only:
Providing us with a partner would be the only recommendation I would suggest for this practicum. Working with someone in our field would have been great. Having a partner to position a camera, and do part of the story too, would have helped tremendously.
I did my practicum at the University of Tennessee Institute of Agriculture Marketing and Communications unit.
Theatre 481
Feb 25th
Sing Down the Moon
Thank you: Clarence Brown
I
came to the
Seeing the faces on the children out in the theater enjoyed my heart. Knowing my daughter enjoyed this feeling too, gives me a better respect for the Clarence Brown Theatre. Children of all ages should have the right to enjoy Clarence Brown, and as a pre-amble to show our promise for them should say:
•We the Clarence Brown Theatre: Promise to have a children’s show twice a year.
• Our goal is to give families a place to see their joys and expressions they long deserve.
The
director to Sing Down the Moon Casey Sams is one of the hardest workers and most dedicated
employees from the Clarence Brown I have seen since I have been here. I have
asked Casey to help me in a film I have been deemed to do upon my completion at
MGM Studios. The
I want to thank everyone in the theatre for helping me, and encouraging me to carry on my dreams. Remember this too, I did decide to hang of the Catwalk, but I forgot to bring a change of underwear that day too. If your going to hand off the catwalk and do pull ups, at least tie yourself off, because you do not stay young forever.
Anyhow, I am very happy I had a chance to be apart of one of the Greatest professional theatres in the world. I hope you all carry on your dreams as well as I am mine. The Clarence Brown has given me the traits I need for my artistic view. The biggest accomplishment I have archived from great people like John Horner, Mike Ponder, Laura Sims and, Blake Robison is motivation for the truth. Without the truth, there is no motivation. These people’s stories have helped me see my true motivation.
The truth is I am not great without good people, and these people have given me the way to my true dream. The New Your Film Academy in MGM or Universal Studios is the dream I have chosen and will carry out. I want to give a special thanks to John Horner for giving me the most credit for my lighting project; I know it will be one to remember too.
For the production of Sing Down the Moon, thank you for a great cast and crew. Children loved you, and I know from the show more productions for children will be preformed. For anyone and everyone who has a dream: the Clarence Brown is a good place to get experience. Thank you Clearance Brown.
Sincerely,
We will review any movie or any project you may have.
Volume 1, Collectors Edition
Screening Report
FILM:
CITY:
ATTENDANCE (%): 100% Full TICKET RATIO:
ATTENDANCE: All Seats Full and some had to stand.
WALKOUTS: Maybe 5 left when John said, “keep it in a safe place.”
A Theater Employee said, “They waited at the door to see the end, so they could be the first one out.”
SCREENING INFORMATION: 5020 Millertown Pike-> Carmike 10
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% 13 - 17: |
5 |
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20 |
% 35 - 49: |
30 |
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PRESS ATTENDEES/ REACTIONS:
Outlet |
Journalist |
Reviewer or Feature Writer |
Reaction or Comments |
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Betsy Pickle |
KnoxNews Sentinel |
Good 3 Stars |
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102.1 Star |
Radio Station |
Good 3 Stars |
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1 |
90.3 College Radio |
TheTorch |
Good |
AUDIENCE REACTION:
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22male “Pretty Good” “Nice FX” “Meeting Gabriel very cool” “Giving Satan the finger, not very funny” |
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26Male “The Acting was not the best” “I got what I paid for, wasn’t let down” |
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58Female “The Man pulls his cancer out; and that is why he didn’t die. I liked that” |
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37Male “It was Okay, I liked the Locations.” |
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14Female “The Scene
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Another 14yold Female said, “I wouldn’t so much call this a scary movie. It’s more freaky. I like how he points out sometimes you might even have to die to really believe in a higher power, and really understand what life is about. Good that it also included some humor.” |
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61 year old Man said, “Somebody is on bad drugs.” I must agree with that. |
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While Someone was leaving said, “Petty Good, better than I expected”. |
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Not A Blockbuster,
But a Movie for College Student’s to Study. I personally think in the long run
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TRAILERS (if any):
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Film |
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Screening Reps
Report:
This is my first Professional Review for WB Pictures, and in my career.
Scene (1): Nice Opening: Reaction was good when the car hits the man. Someone said, “God”. Fear
Scene (2): Good Scene--No Response
Scene (3): Intro to the main Characters: Scary, some transition to the music not in sink. Mickey Mouse-ing techniques with the editing could have been better before the point when John heals her with his thumb. Keanu Reeves says, “Mirror three feet high” and for some reason this line was funny for a few audience members. I do not know why either, may have been because of the corny line. Would have to see this part again where I could focus in more.
scene 4. scene 5, scene, 6 and so on...
Scene break down is 300 dollars extra. That is a lot of work.
Betsy Pickle can criticize a movie but can’t take the heat
from a statement I passed on to her. Maybe I was wrong by letting her know some
public truth. And I should have kept my mouth shut and turned the other cheek,
but I didn’t because I was trying to be nice to someone. Sorry Betsy I hurt
your feelings. Next time I will not tell you that A Journalism Staff suggested
that I should write for the paper so people could get a better outlook on the
skirts of movies. Thanks for going behind my back and telling WB Pictures that
I hurt your feelings. Being a Journalist as you are, you should have confronted
me with the problem then. I’m not going to TAKE YOUR JOB OVER if that is why
you are making philosophy out of Criticism. However, I’m sorry for what it is
worth. But I think it would be a good ideal for someone to write a review of
the movie too, because being a movie lover as I am helps better the eyes of the
viewers, and it may help them to go see a movie that you jump all over. WB also
said, “They have never considered
Dale Jeffries
JEM Major
Everything
I said is true to the fullest and I give the Daily Beacon or any new outlet to
publish any part of this story. You have my consent and permission to print
this Article I wrote (Franklin D. Jeffries II). I am a Student of the
University of the Tennessee Knoxville and I should have the write to express my
Freedom of Speech. I will be finished
I have considered the 6 laws of libel and believe with all my education I am protected by laws on published, identified, defamation, fault, injury and so on. Everything I say is true and not slander neither false. And Betsy Pickle is a Public figure and in our field of journalism I hope Freedom of Press still stands.
Students and comrades of the Press, I have never felt more
criticized in Journalism and Electronic Media until now, and I believe it is in
the best interest to print this Article on behalf of
Franklin D. Jeffries II
Dale Jeffries
Dr. Luther’s Class
Reflection paper 3
Stereotype
Indeed, television has brainwashed my daughter. Ashley Jeffries is a 3 year old that can process information well. Advertisers use tactics in their commercials to focus her in on how cool the product is. From my experience I can recognize how the television has given her stereotypes. The product may be cool: “But, are the advertisers thinking on how the shot memory recall affects the child and parent?”
Certainly, the advertisers look at every angle. The sales pitch is the most important part to brainwash us. Stereotyping is just one of advertiser’s tactics to show how cool products are. My daughter has seen a commentarial on Barbie here recently. Indeed, the advertisers did their home work, because my daughter was sold.
Dr. Luther’s Class
Reflection paper 1
You Should Lie About This
My goal is to be honest and type the first words that come to mind. Indeed, telling a hypothetical story is not an easy task for me. Therefore, I ask you as my reader to understand how hard being honest can be. Meaning if I tell the truth, than people such as my x-wife can harm me. Really, the truth is a struggle in communications sometimes.
I will get right to the point. If I have learned from experience: “than way have I not put propaganda first”? In-short, people have control over what I say and do in life, mostly because of Child Custody battles that lead to court. For example, my x-wife has control over me because we have a child together, so if I do something wrong she will send a message to me that can influence my actions.
Anyhow, the most interesting topic that relates to my topic was the “War of Worlds.” Terror can influence decisions. Just as my x-wife has hunted me by using my daughter as a weapon, blackmail is a word some would use. However, using a child to keep control over someone is a very bad way to communicate with others. I may lose my daughter, if I tell the truth.
Yes, I may very well lose my child if I have been bad. However, overtime people like me live with this kind of fear everyday. As time passes we forget simple truths that we can say, but never do because we fear we could lose our child. I really believe this should be called, The Child Custody Syndrome-A form of terror that people use against you in the court of law.
I have read this to my daughter and she does not agree with my hypothetical statement about her mother. If I tell the truth, I may lose my daughter. Indeed, I made it clear to my daughter she would understand my argument when she got older. Anyhow, my statement is just hypnotically, or is it more propaganda driven.
Certainly, I do want people to understand this bizarre topic that many people are so afraid to discuss. Hopefully, people will start seeing this type of communication is a real threat to our society as a whole. Hypothetically, if you lie, than you are wrong.
Dr. Luther’s Class
Reflection paper 2/Presentation
Watching Television
Indeed, I grow up watching television from the beginning of my era (1974). Violence from cartons such as Bugs Bunny, Mickey Mouse and Road Runner distorted my perception at one point. Anyhow, I have looked back in time to recall some perceptions television has gave me. Indeed, I found the results of the passed disturbing when I recalled a Theory I tried as a young boy.
The Umbrella Theory was tested on TV shows, such as Bugs Bunny and many more, I am sure. Certainly, I was not the only little boy who tried to parachute off my Parent’s two story house with an umbrella. Indeed, that day was a complete failure. However, know matter how distorted this sounds, but today I believe The Umbrella Theory is possible.
Certainly, I am crazy for even thinking I could jump off a one hundred foot bridge with a stronger and bigger umbrella. Since my cheap rain stopper folded up on me that day; I have not attempted the experiment again. Anyhow, I have thought of ways of making the Theory work. Getting the nerve up to do it again is not an easy task, the first time almost killed me.
Anyway: “who in their right mind would jump off a two story house with just an umbrella?” Indeed, children can and do process television dangerously. I hope this experience from my risky umbrella theory helps parents realize how TV really affects children. These crazy ideal’s are even sometimes in black in white. The real question is: “who is going to educate our children about distortion?” The best approach is for teachers and parents to watch television with their children or students and explain the distorted perceptions to them.
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Professor: Georgiana Vines
Extra Credit
SPJ CLUB MEETING
The Society of Professional Journalist meeting was very interesting. I really enjoyed sitting in, and listening to Stacy McCloud tell her story. However, I do not know if I could stomach the tale about the after math of Katrina she was telling.
After the meeting I spoke with McCloud and asked her: “Would you do it again?” She said, “Yes, I hope we all are better prepared next time. I was shocked very much but I would go again and report.”
Indeed, Paul Brown from channel 10 News was equipped when I asked him: “What did you do during this hurricane?” He said, “I am the Assignment manager. I helped coordinate crews to Katrina.”
Indeed, these Reporters and Managers really grabbed my attention when they talked about what they did during disasters. When I finish my career, I hope to be as good as they sound in reporting.
As for now, I will keep up with my last class in Media Management. Indeed, in the near future I would like to be apart of PSJ CLUB. Seeing people with the same interest, made me really happy that I am a Journalism Electronic Media Student.
Certainly,
I have tried very hard in the last few weeks to catch up, so I can finish the
Restraints
Schenck v. US 1919
Gitlow v.
Near v.
New York Times v.
Obscenity
Roth v.
Miller v.
California 1973
Reno v.
ACLU 1997
Fighting words hate
speech
Chaplinsky v.
RAV v
Braun v. soldier of Fortune Magazine 1992
Civil Libel suits
New York Times v.
Sullivan 1964
Curtis Publishing Co. v. Butts, Walker v. A.P. 1967
Gertz v. Welch 1974
Time Inc v. Firestone 1976
Herbert v. Lando 1979
Harte-Hanks v. Connaughton 1989
Milkovich v. Lorain Journal Co 1990
New York Times v.
The Pentagon papers
Chaplinsky v.
Fighting words are not protected by the First Amendment.
RAV v
Invalidation of city’s hate crimes ordinance, appearing to weaken universities’ efforts to regulate with hate speech codes.
Braun v. soldier of Fortune Magazine 1992
Ad offering Gun for hire
Harte-Hanks v. Connaughton 1989
Case showed sloppy reporting can cause media to lose a public-figure libel case.
Milkovich v. Lorain Journal Co 1990
Decision weakened- and nearly killed off the opinion defense
Schenck v. US 1919
Schenck and his co-defendants had mailed circulars in violation of the Espionage Act 1917, urging men who had been called to Military service to resist the draft.
Gitlow v.
Gitlow was a Anarchy an had a doctrine that said, that organized gov should be
overthrown by force.
Near v.
Jay Near
published a scandal sheet in
The Supreme Court held that the statute authorizing the injunction was unconstitutional as applied. History had shown that the protection against previous restraints was at the heart of the First Amendment
New York Times v.
In what
became known as the "Pentagon Papers Case," the Nixon Administration
attempted to prevent the New York Times and Washington Post from publishing
materials belonging to a classified Defense Department study regarding the
history of
Did the Nixon administration's efforts to prevent the publication of what it termed "classified information" violate the First Amendment?
Yes. In its per curiam opinion the Court held that the government did not overcome the "heavy presumption against" prior restraint of the press in this case. Justices Black and Douglas argued that the vague word "security" should not be used "to abrogate the fundamental law embodied in the First Amendment." Justice Brennan reasoned that since publication would not cause an inevitable, direct, and immediate event imperiling the safety of American forces, prior restraint was unjustified.
Supreme said Tornillo has the right to Reply to a critic.
Roth v.
Roth
operated a book-selling business in
Did either
the federal or
In a 6-to-3
decision written by Justice William J. Brennan, Jr., the Court held that obscenity
was not "within the area of constitutionally protected speech or
press." The Court noted that the First Amendment was not intended to
protect every utterance or form of expression, such as materials that were
"utterly without redeeming social importance." The Court held that
the test to determine obscenity was "whether to the average person,
applying contemporary community standards, the dominant theme of the material
taken as a whole appeals to prurient interest." The Court held that such a
definition of obscenity gave sufficient fair warning and satisfied the demands
of Due Process. Brennan later reversed his position on this issue in Miller v.
Miller v.
Miller,
after conducting a mass mailing campaign to advertise the sale of
"adult" material, was convicted of violating a
Is the sale and distribution of obscene materials by mail protected under the First Amendment's freedom of speech guarantee?
In a 5-to-4
decision, the Court held that obscene materials did not enjoy First Amendment
protection. The Court modified the test for obscenity established in Roth v.
United States and Memoirs v.
Several litigants challenged the constitutionality of two provisions in the 1996 Communications Decency Act. Intended to protect minors from unsuitable internet material, the Act criminalized the intentional transmission of "obscene or indecent" messages as well as the transmission of information which depicts or describes "sexual or excretory activities or organs" in a manner deemed "offensive" by community standards. After being enjoined by a District Court from enforcing the above provisions, except for the one concerning obscenity and its inherent protection against child pornography, Attorney General Janet Reno appealed directly to the Supreme Court as provided for by the Act's special review provisions.
Did certain provisions of the 1996 Communications Decency Act violate the First and Fifth Amendments by being overly broad and vague in their definitions of the types of internet communications which they criminalized?
Yes. The
Court held that the Act violated the First Amendment because its regulations
amounted to a content-based blanket restriction of free speech. The Act failed
to clearly define "indecent" communications, limit its restrictions
to particular times or individuals (by showing that it would not impact on
adults), provide supportive statements from an authority on the unique nature
of internet communications, or conclusively demonstrate that the transmission
of "offensive" material is devoid of any social value. The Court
added that since the First Amendment distinguishes between "indecent"
and "obscene" sexual expressions, protecting only the former, the Act
could be saved from facial overbreadth challenges if
it dropped the words "or indecent" from its text. The Court refused
to address any Fifth Amendment issues.
Chaplinsky v.
Chaplinsky, a Jehovah's Witness, called a city marshal a
"God-damned racketeer" and "a damned fascist" in a public
place. He was arrested and convicted under a state law for violating a breach
of the peace.
Does the application of the statute violate Chaplinsky's freedom of speech protected by the First Amendment?
No. Some forms of expression--among them obscenity and fighting words--do not convey ideas and thus are not subject to First Amendment protection. In this case, Chaplinsky uttered fighting words, i.e., words that "inflict injury or tend to incite an immediate breach of the peace."
RAV v
Several teenagers allegedly burned a crudely fashioned cross on a black family's lawn. The police charged one of the teens under a local bias-motivated criminal ordinance which prohibits the display of a symbol which "arouses anger, alarm or resentment in others on the basis of race, color, creed, religion or gender." The trial court dismissed this charge. The state supreme court reversed. R.A.V. appealed to the U.S. Supreme Court.
Is the ordinance overly broad and impermissibly content-based in violation of the First Amendment free speech clause?
Yes. In a 9-to-0 vote, the justices held the ordinance invalid on its face because "it prohibits otherwise permitted speech solely on the basis of the subjects the speech addresses." The First Amendment prevents government from punishing speech and expressive conduct because it disapproves of the ideas expressed. Under the ordinance, for example, one could hold up a sign declaring all anti-semites are motherfuckers but not that all Jews are motherfuckers. Government has no authority "to license one side of a debate to fight freestyle, while requiring the other to follow the Marquis of Queensbury Rules."
Time Inc v. Firestone 1976
"In sum, the Firestone divorce action was unquestionably news-worthy, but reports thereof were not constitutionally protected as being matters of real public or general concern."
New York Times v.
Sullivan 1964
Decided together with Abernathy v. Sullivan, this case
concerns a full-page ad in the New York Times which alleged that the arrest of
the Rev. Martin Luther King, Jr. for perjury in
Did
The Court
held that the First Amendment protects the publication of all statements, even
false ones, about the conduct of public officials except when statements are
made with actual malice (with knowledge that they are false or in reckless
disregard of their truth or falsity). Under this new standard, Sullivan's case
collapsed.
Gertz v. Welch 1974
Gertz was an attorney hired by a family to sue a police officer who had killed the family's son. In a magazine called American Opinion, the John Birch Society accused Gertz of being a "Leninist" and a "Communist-fronter" because he chose to represent clients who were suing a law enforcement officer. Gertz lost his libel suit because a lower court found that the magazine had not violated the actual malice test for libel which the Supreme Court had established in New York Times v. Sullivan (1964).
Does the First Amendment allow a newspaper or broadcaster to assert defamatory falsehoods about an individual who is neither a public official nor a public figure?
The Court
reversed the lower court decision and held that Gertz's
rights had been violated. Justice Powell argued that the application of the New
York Times v. Sullivan standard in this case was inappropriate because Gertz was neither a public official nor a public figure. In
the context of the opinion, Powell advanced many lines of reasoning to
establish that ordinary citizens should be allowed more protection from
libelous statements than individuals in the public eye. However, continued
Powell, the actual malice standard did not lose all significance in cases
involving ordinary citizens as he advised states to use it in assessing claims
for punitive damages by citizens suing for libel.
Herbert v. Lando 1979
Anthony
Herbert was a retired Army officer who served in
In an accusation of libel, do the First and Fourteenth Amendments protect members of the press from inquiries into their thoughts, opinions, and conclusions that go into the editorial process?
The Court reversed the decision of the Court of Appeals and held that the privilege not to answer editorial inquiries is not absolute. Justice White argued that shielding editorial decision-making from inquiry would "substantially enhance the burden of proving actual malice," a burden which was already substantial in the Court's view. White was confident that investigations into this process for falsehood or libelous reporting would not lead to self-censorship of stories that are documented and true; "only reckless error will be discouraged," which would not threaten the constitutionally protected freedom of the press.
Milkovich v. Lorain Journal Co 1990
Milkovich was a high school wrestling coach, his team was involved in an altercation at a match with another high school's team.
Malice
Ways to be sued for/things to ask yourself
Published
Identified
Defamation
Fault
Harm
Truth
Statue of limitation 1 year slander 6 months
Qualified privileged
Opinion
Fair comment
Consent
TEST IS IN Communication Building Room 430 at
MIDTERM EXAM REVIEW SHEET
ESSAY QUESTIONS:
(Take the time to read over the question carefully. Make sure you have
understood and can respond to all of the points included. Formulate a concise
argument in one sentence, a THESIS (not retelling or narration), and then make
an outline for yourself planning how you will argue the position you take.
Finally, create a powerful title for your essay, which captures the argument
you have made. Be sure to use important details and DATES to anchor your
argument in historical context and time! )
1. Discuss the origins of nationalism.
What forces or factors energized nationalism at the end of the eighteenth
century and the beginning of the nineteenth century? Compare and contrast the
development of nationalism in
-Nationalism: sense of
national consciousness based on awareness of being part of a community–a
“nation”–that has common institutions, traditions, language, and customs that
becomes the focus of the individual’s primary political loyalty
-Nationalism in
-In the first half of the 19th century, nationalism and liberalism became strong allies. Many nationalist believed that once each people obtained its own state, all nations could be linked together into a broader community of all humanity. (Spielvogel p. 589-90)
-The Germanies
and nationalism: News of revolution in
This Frankfurt Assembly was
dominated by well-educated, articulate, middle-class delegates, many of them
professors, lawyers, and bureaucrats. When it came to nationalism, many were
ahead of the times and certainly ahead of the governments of their respective
states. From the beginning, the assembly aroused controversy by claiming to be
the government for all of
The Frankfurt Assembly soon
disbanded. Although some members spoke of using force, they had no real means
of compelling the German rulers to accept the constitution they had drawn up.
The attempt of the German liberals at
-Johann Gottfried von Herder (1744-1803): “Father of nationalism” German Protestant pastor, ‘philosophe.’ Believed God created different peoples and different environments so they would adapt and create their own culture and become a nation, all equal in God’s plan. Herder also believed God created people to be free and that slavery was a sin and that nationalism was also a was of respecting other cultures.
2. How do you account for the appeal of
socialist ideas? What is socialism? How did Marx's message differ from that of
earlier socialist thinkers? How did socialists seek to organize the working
classes in
3. What was Bonapartism?
How does it function as a political system? What are its strengths? What are
its liabilities or risks? How were the reigns of Napoleon I and Napoleon III
linked?
-Bonapartism: a form of
government dictatorship using plebiscites, but you must seek greater and
greater military success to keep power. The essence of the Bonapartist
system were plebiscites, a poll of approval or disapproval used by Napoleon as
he continued to take greater risk for more success.
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4. What caused the "new
imperialism" at the end of the nineteenth century? How was it different
from earlier forms of imperialism? Which of its causes was most important, and
why?
5. Imagine that you are the editor of a
liberal newspaper in a city in
What happened in 1848?
Revolutionary fervor!
Where did it start?
Revolutionary wars, Napoleon
1848
Monarchy disappointing
Banquets held, political gatherings where overthrow of monarch debated
Second Republic-provisional government to put in place liberal and nationalist ideas.
Louis Blanc: state had obligations towards it people which should be instituted in national workshops (welfare state), socialist
June Days: 4 days, street fighting over the closing of workshops
Revolution starting to break down
Carl Marx cheered on the fights
Marx wrote Communist Manifesto
Charles Louis Napoleon Bonaparte:
nephew of Napoleon, presented himself as an option to restore order to
Germanies and Italies
Fragmented areas, not united despite hopes of nationalists
Hoffman von Fallersleben
“Deutschland uber Alles”
Word of second French
revolution sparked hope in
German lands elected representatives for German state
1848
- fateful moment in
Austrian Empire
Metternich exiled
revolt
Hungarians rose up under Louis Kossuth
Czechs rose up under own leader
Hapsburg monarchy could quell revolts because they were not united, called Russians for help.
Risorgimento,
Giuseppe Mazzini, Young
6. What were the most important
political consequences of the Second Industrial Revolution? Why did it take
place? How did the Second Industrial Revolution differ from the First
Industrial Revolution?
7. Discuss how Absolutism changed
-To many historians, the
seventeenth century has assumed extraordinary proportions. The divisive effects
of the Reformation had been assimilated and the concept of a united
Christendom, held as an ideal since the Middle Ages, had been irrevocably
destroyed by the religious wars, making possible the emergence of a system of
nation-states in which power politics took on an increasing significance. The
growth of political thought focusing on the secular origins of state power
reflected the changes that were going on in 17th century society.
Within those states, there slowly
emerged some of the machinery that made possible a growing centralization of
power. In those states called absolutist, strong monarchs with the assistance
of their aristocracies took the lead in providing the leadership for greater
centralization. But in
-
-
8. Was Napoleon Bonaparte an Absolutist
ruler in practice and in his ideology? Discuss the three main reasons for your
verdict.
9. Why did Karl Marx predict that the
Industrial Revolution would lead to political revolution and the triumph of the
working class (proletariat)? Discuss two specific events or developments
between 1850 and 1914 and whether they supported or undercut Marx's prediction.
(Lecture notes on
Communist Manifesto and Marxism from
Lectures 11 and 12)
Communist Manifesto.
Scientific Socialists, argued they had key to history and progress. History moved forward through economic conflict (class conflict). Dialectical materialism
Consciousness was determined by economics
Society had to be revolutionized
condemned liberalism as exploitative
Challenged ethics of middle class society (religion was opiate of society)
Middle class society increasingly nationalistic, attacked nationalism
Change was coming (bloody revolution)
Fewer and fewer rich people
Immiserization: growing misery, dictatorship of the proletariat
Take from the rich. State would whither away, producing harmony
Communists argued they were most advanced economist of their day
“The Internationale” song that expressed feeling of Marx’s followers. Written in 1871.
Marxism
Countries and nations did not exist, only classes
Individual organizers set up unions and trade parties, took on a more national connotation
S.P.D. (social
democrats)
Longer capitalism was in control, the worse things would get (immiserization), working class would overthrow the upper classes.
Eduard Bernstein, sought to revise Marx - Revisionism, thought everything right except immiserization. Working class could come to power through elections instead of revolution.
Bismark worried about revolutionary movement of SPD, Bismark invented the welfare state. Sought to discriminate against SPD politicians, needed something to appeal to the proletariat. Introduced social security, insurance for old age and accidents on the job, made safety net for German workers binding them to the State.
Bismark thought German Catholics and Protestants non-nationalist.
Marxism appealing if among the proletariat
“It is no accident that (political assertion)” –Communist saying
Where did Marx and his followers think changes would happen first?
Industrial
society (
Vladimir Lenin
Age of Imperialism
-Marx hinted that imperialism was associated with the ultimate demise of the capitalist system.
Events to consider:
Revolution
in Imperial
Scramble for Colonies (Lecture 13 and p. 630-704)
Balkan Troubles (p. 700-704)
10. How do you account for the dynamic
course of the French Revolution? What influence did Enlightenment ideas have on
this event (be specific)? Who were the revolutionaries, and what did they want?
Ultimately, was their venture a success or a failure?
11. What were the most important problems facing the Congress of
(Congress of Vienna covered in Lecture 8 notes)
Restoring monarchs–used principle of legitimacy
What
to do with
Formed new Balance of Power to keep one country from dominating another
Made
The
long term success or failure of their decisions depends on your ‘thesis.’ I
would say they were successful because (correct me if I am wrong) no large
scale revolutions really occur in central
Notes for Test #2
Audience Research
1)Primary Research- done by station itself; surveys, etc.
2)Secondary Research- Ratings (Nielsen, Arbitron)
Availability of audience
Determine content
Determine specific needs and wants
Determine promotions and strategies
Determine sales strategies
Find a target audience
Find a format/content
Determine needs and wants of audience
Music Preferences
Topic Preference
Anchor preference
Production Preference
Lifestyles
Media consumption
Commuter habits
How much money people make
How much people spend by category
Plans to buy major products
Target audience
Focus Groups
Telephone call-out
Mall intercept
Auditorium Testing
New station start up
Modify existing station
New competitor in market
Program evaluation
Performer evaluation
Used at night
Develop questionnaire
Female callers
Product
Price
Place
Promotion
In 1979- 53% of journalism students were women
Now- 64.1%
Women are 44% of workforce, but few make it into senior management
% of women executives highest in HR, Community Affairs, and Legal. Areas not traditionally on the right track for high level posts?
MIDTERM EXAM REVIEW
SHEET
Look at the ID’s from class notes and find out which
ones he gave dates with!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review
HISTORY 242 (Liulevicius)
Below are sets of practice exercises to aid you in preparation for the
midterm exam. The midterm exam will be of the following format: you will
have to choose 4 of 6 possible identifications and 1 of 2 possible essays.
IDENTIFICATIONS:
(In several sentences, explain "who, what, when, and where" and then
summarize the significance of the term or person in the historical context.
What larger point does it demonstrate? Think each item over, sketch an outline
for yourself, and then write out a short paragraph in answer. Be sure to use
complete sentences and proper grammar. These terms often do not stand
alone--STUDY THEM IN CLUSTERS. REMEMBER: NO ANSWER IS COMPLETE WITHOUT A DATE.)
Feudalism:(1) unequal ordering of
society bound by rights, duties, and obligations
Mercantilism:(2) A set of economic
tendencies that came to dominate economic practices in the 17th
century. The belief that the total voume of trade was unchangeable was a fundamental
principle. The prospierity
of a nation depended on a plentiful supply of gold, bullion, or silver. A favorable balance of trade in which goods
exported were of greater value than those imported to promote an influx of gold
and silver payments. Mercantilism
focused on the role of the state, belueveing that
state intervention in some aspects of the economy was desirable for the sake of
the national good. Government regulation
to insure superiority of goods, construction of roads/canals, and the granting
of subsidies to create trade companies were all predicated on government
involvement in economic affairs.
“Merchants need to help their country economically, because “international
economics is a zero sum game”, the state should interfere w/ monopolies and
have active state roll to help economy.” Stressed government regulation of
economic activities to benefit the state.
Counter-Reformation(2): Also known as the Catholic Reformation and was the revival of the
Roman Catholicism in the 16th century. The reforms involved a
mixture of old and new elements such as the regeneration and formation of new
religious orders. The Jesuits were formed and were the chief instrument of the
Catholic Reformation. There was also
arguing and debating about key religious issues and doctrines to resolve
religious differences between Catholics and Protestants. The Council of Trent
reaffirmed traditional Catholic teachings in opposition to Protestant beliefs. Many reforming decrees were passed at this
council. The popes had gained an
acknowledged supremacy over bishops and councils. The Roman Catholic Church had become one
Christian denomination among many with an organized framework and doctrinal
pattern that would not be sufficiently altered for four hundred years. The Catholic Church entered a militant phase
in order to do battle for the Lord.
Absolutism (3): Absolute monarchy or absolutism meant that the
sovereign power or ultimate authority in the state rested in the hands of a
king who claimed rule by divine right.
The new states of
1)
Collect taxes-tried to centralize taxation
2)
foreign policy-fight wars and mercantilism
3)
army-warriors and knights are of the past
4)
bureaucracy- Burghers must be loyal to the king,
5)
Ideology to justify absolutism-establish strong sovereign state
New
kings/queens claiming absolute power over larger areas, super kingdoms,“a form of government where the sovereign power
rested in the hands of a monarch who claimed to rule by divine right and was
therefore responsible to God”
Great Chain of Being(2): An ideology of how God intended society to be
organized, it was offensive towards God to disrupt this.
Peace of
Christendom(2):
This is the concept of one Church which united people in the West(
Baroque(2):p.
432 An artistic movement that replaced mannerism and began in
Agricultural Revolution(5): p. 511 In the 18th century it was first experienced by
Louis XIV(3): "The Sun
King" (1643-1715) p. 409 The most exceptional king w/ absolute power, sole
ruler of France, removed nobles from the royal council and replaced them with
new aristocrats whom he could dominate. Created a majestic spectacle at the
court of Versailles. One of the keys of
Louis XIV’s power was that he was able to restructure
the central policy-making machinery of government because it was a part of his
own court and household. The greatest
threat to Louis’ personal rule came from the very high nobles and princes of
the blood(the royal princes), who considered it their natural function to
assert the policy making role of royal ministers. He eliminated this threat by removing them
from the royal council and kept them preoccupied at
Fronde(3):
p.409 (1648-1649)The most important event during Mazarin’s
rule was a revolt known as the Fronde. The nobles, who particularly resented the
centralized administrative power being built up at the expense of the
provincial nobility, temporarily allied with members of the Parlement
of Paris and the masses of Paris, who were opposed to new taxes to pay for the
30 Years War. The nobles of the robe led the first revolt and the nobles of the
sword led the second, both were ended in compromise or internal fighting. With the end of the Fronde,
the vast majority concluded that the best hope for stability lay in the crown,
and then Louis XIV took over supreme power.
Versailles(3):
p.409 The royal court located at Versailles was an elaborate structure the
served different purposes: it was the personal household of the king, the
location of central government machinery, and the place where powerful subjects
came to find favors and offices for themselves and their clients, main area
where rival aristocratic factions jostles for power, an office building for
members of the king’s government, and the home of thousands of royal officials
and aristocratic courtiers. The court he
set a standard that was soon followed by other European rulers and the people
here were expected to adhere to a rigid standard of etiquette.
: palace built by Loius XIV which was a symbol of his power; cunning and
realist purpose was to keep the old nobility busy working there for the king w/
odd jobs and not rebelling again.
"L'Etat, c'est moi"(3): Quote of Loius XIV which meant “the state, that’s me”
Peter the Great(3):p.419 (1689-1725)King
of
Deism(4):
p.470 The 18th century during
the Enlightenment a religious outlook that meant to reduce religion to rational
thoughts with reason, and it argued that God was not always present in our
lives, He had started the world and it kept going according to natural
laws. Deism was built on a Newtonian
world-machine, which implied the existence of a mechanic (God) who created the
universe. God did not extend grace or answer prayers as Christians liked to
believe.
Utility(4):
an Enlightenment thought that referred to usefulness of something.
Jean-Jacques Rousseau(4): p.472 (1712-1778) “The father of Romansticism” A philosophe of the
Enlightenment who argued that man had once lived in his original virtue as a
noble savage. He presented his political
beliefs in two major works: Discourse on
the Origins of the Inequality of Mankind and The Social Contract. The
social contract was basically an agreement on the part of an entire society to
be governed by its general will.
Adam Smith(4):
p.471 (1723-1790)Scottish thinker who argued that the government shouldn’t
interfere with natural laws of supply and demand. Wealth of Nations: A book by Adam Smith that summed up the notion
of allowing the economy to be free, “the invisible hand would push society
towards prosperity”. He made the best
statement of laissez-faire by publishing this book. He attacked mercantilism because free trade
was a fundamental economic principle to him.
He thought that labor constitutes the true wealth of a nation. The state should not interfere in economic
matters and stay out of the lives of individuals. The Physiocrats and
Adam Smith laid the foundation for what became known in the 19th
century as economic liberalism.
Philosophe(4):p.466 The intellectuals of
the Enlightenment were known as philosphes. They were
literary people, professors, journalists, statesmen, economists, and social
reformers. They came from all
classes. A philosophe
is someone who, “applies himself to the study of society with the purpose of
making his kind better and happier.” The
spirit of their rational criticism was to be applies to everything from science
to religion and politics. They called
for freedom of expression in a time of censorship, but found ways to get around
it.
Voltaire(4):
(1694-1778) p. 469 He was a key Enlightenment thinker; He was not a noble, but
a French Middle class writer with a pen name Voltaire; He attacked one
principle enemy: fanaticism; Proposed Deism; Rejected propriety and
disrespected old way of doing things.He was known
especially well for his criticism of traditional religion and his strong
attachment to the ideal of religious toleration.
Encyclopedia(4):
p.470 Denis Diderot (1713-1784) was a French popularizer who published the Encyclopedia. Encyclopedia: new concept of summing
all knowledge and reason that humans had obtained into one place. Also called the Classified Dictionary of the Sciences, Arts, and Trades. Its
purpose was to change the general way of thinking and Enlightenment ideas
spread as a result of it.
Liberalism(5):
(1815-1830) p.589 An ideology that began
because people believed they should be as free from restraint as possible. Its primary tenet was the concept of
laissez-faire which was the belief that the state should not interrupt the free
play of natural economic forces, especially supply and demand. Government should not restrain the economic
liberty of the individual and should restrict itself to 3 primary functions:
defense of the country, police protection of individuals, and the construction
and maintenance of public works to expensive for individuals to undertake. If individuals were allowed economic liberty,
ultimately they would bring about the maximum good for the maximum number and
benefit the general welfare of society.
Liberals held a common set of beliefs: protection of civil liberties or
the basic rights of all people, freedom of assembly, speech and press, and
freedom from arbitrary arrest. Most
liberals advocated separation of church and state. They believed in a
constitutional monarchy. Liberalism
stressed the liberty of the individual.
Laissez faire(4): p. 472, 589 The ideology of
a limited state that didn’t interfere in economy. Adam smith gave the best statement of
laissez-faire in 1776 in his book The Wealth of Nations. It is the belief that the state should not
interfere in the free play of natural economic forces, especially supply and
demand. It is the primary concept
embodied in liberalism.
Salons(4):
p. 474-476 17th century but
rose to great heights in the 18th century. Salons were the elegant drawing rooms in the
urban houses of the wealthy where invited philosphes
and guests gathered together and engaged in witty, sparkling conversations
often centered on the new ideas of the philosphes. In
Methodism(4):
p.487A religious movement led by John Wesley (1703-1791) that began as a deep
spiritual revival in
Balance of Power(5):p.492 During the 18th century it was the complicated diplomatic changing of alliances and international
competition between powers so that no one great power would be in a position to
dominate the others; there was no unifying political structure. It was like a
big game played between the powers and their rivalries lef
to major wars so they needed a large army always capable of going into battle
that was getting bigger constantly. The Great
Powers: the truly big powers were
Catherine II the Great(5): p.499 (1762-1796) Autocrat of
Joseph II(5):
p.499 King of Austria(1780-1790) who enhances the Hapsburg power and had a
far-reaching reform program. He abolished serfdom and added complete religious
toleration and restrictions on the Catholic Church to his reforms. But he
alienated the nobility and the church in his reforms. His attempt to impose German as the official
bureaucratic language alienated non-German nationalities. He ended his career with a deep sense of
failure. Tried
to enact internal reforms of education, legal code, religious practice in order
to make the empire an efficient machine; he was not a German nationalist but he
had to choose one standard language (efficiency) so he chose German which upset
others so his reforms failed miserably
Triangular Trade(5): p.380ish In the 16th and 17th century it was
a trade triangle that was English goods to the
colonies then to Africa where they got slaves then to the Caribbean to pick up
colonial goods and back to Great Britain. At least 15 million people were in
slave trade and many died on the voyage. Abolition:
end of slavery in
Declaration of Rights of Man and Citizen (5): p.531-532 One of the important documents of the
French Revolution, it was adopted in August 1789 by the National Assembly. The declaration affirmed that “ men are born
and remain equal and free in rights,” that governments must protect these
rights, and that political power is derived from the people. Quality of all
people before the law; Futilism was abolished and Old
Europe fell apart on impact; they decided no king was needed.
Bastille(5):
Cult of Reason(5): Ideas of Enlightenment used to do away with Christianity, Dechristianization
of the church emptied Christian symbols and God of Reason was made up. Est. 1793, Notre Dame turned into temple of
reason, churches and Christianity were eliminated and the concept of the
“nation” was the new religion called Cult of Reason which “worshipped”
Enlightenment thoughts.
Reign of Terror(5): To meet the domestic crisis and control
"The Marseillaise"(6): French
national anthem, greatest anthem ever written; a battle hymn written during
battle in a moment of inspiration; shows aggressive nationalism
Guillotine(5):
p. 539 A revolutionary device for the
quick and efficient separation of heads from bodies. Symbol of the
Terror and heralded as a symbol of the New Enlightenment; New technology,
modern, efficient, fast (utility).
Robespierre "the
Incorruptible"(5): p.537,540
(1758-1794) Ruler of the Reign of Terror with over-commitment to revolutionary
ideas. In its time of troubles, the National Convention, under the direction of
the Committee of Public Safety, instituted the Reign of Terror to preserve the
revolution from its internal enemies. Maximilien Robespierre, one of the committee’s leading
members, used much violence as a resort to install republican liberty. He was eventually guillotined, bringing an
end to the most radical stage of the Revolution.
Committee of Public Safety(5): p.537,538 To administer the government, the
National Convention gave broad powers to this executive governmental institution that took over in place of a king in
Plebiscites(6): Fake elections, no
real choice between candidates, you agree or disagree to a leader. Bonapartism: a
form of government dictatorship using plebiscites, but you must seek greater
and greater military success to keep power. The essence of the Bonapartist system were plebiscites, a poll of approval or
disapproval used by Napoleon as he continued to take greater risk for more
success.
Code Napoleon: Prior to the French Revolution of 1789, the country did not have a
single set of laws, but many local legal systems. During the Revolution,
revolutionaries tried to unite these laws into one code, following the
Enlightenment value of efficiency and utility. But it was only Napoleon
Bonaparte who succeeded in doing this in 1804. The product was called the civil
code or Code Napoleon. These laws preserved many ideas of the French
revolution, like the principle of the equality of all citizens before the law,
the right of an individual to choose his profession, religious toleration, and
the abolition of serfdom and feudalism. But the code was also conservative in
that it protected property rights, outlawed trade unions and strikes, and
restricted the rights of women. In sum, the civil code clearly reflected the
radical aspirations of the Revolution for a uniform legal system and legal
equality for all, but its conservative elements showed the true nature of
Napoleon's rule.
Bonapartism(6): A form of government
dictatorship using plebiscites, but you must seek greater and greater military
success to keep power.
Democrats(9):
Believed that liberal ideas are good and should be
extended throughout society.
James Watt
(7): (1736-1819) p.555 Invented steam engine used for
propulsive energy and steam was harnessed for human purposes. It had a huge impact
on people’s lives. Also invented the rotary engine applied to spinning and
weaving cotton.
Luddites(7):
"Gen. Ned
Ludd": p.575 Luddites were
followers of a legendary worker leader Gen. Ned Ludd
who smashed machinery at night because they were being overtaken by
Industrialization and losing jobs. In this collective action of workers, the Luddites were skilled craftspeople in the
Chartism(7): p.575-576Brought reform in the political process through signatures
and charting and was a meaningful expression of the attempts of British workers
to improve their conditions. It was the
“first important political movement of working men organized in the 19th
century. Its aim was to achieve
political democracy. “In the late 1830’s and 1840’s, working class protest
centered on achieving a clear set of political goals, particularly universal
male suffrage, as the means to achieve economic and social improvements. Chartism helped arouse and organize millions
of workers.
Cartwright's Powerloom(7): p.555In 1787, he developed the Powerloom in
St. Monday, Blue Monday(7): A craftsman could set his own hours and
work holidays he wanted. Allegedly a religious holiday used by craftsman to get
an extra day of weekend and rest, but this excuse would now get a worker fired
in the factories of the Industrial Revolution.
Reform Act of 1832 (9): The middle class allowed to vote and
expanded to the poor as well.
"Spanish Ulcer"(8): p.549 Shortly before the his fall in 1812, this conflict with the Spanish was so nicknamed because it
was a nationalist problem to Napoleon.
It was a Spanish uprising against Napoleon’s rule, aided by British
support that kept a French force of 200,000 pinned down for years. It was caused by Napoleon’s spread of
nationalism, which in turn made him a hated oppressor and thus aroused the
patriotism of others in opposition to French nationalism, and as a result also
showed what people in arms could do to defend themselves.
Invasion of
Guerrillas (8): Method the Spanish used to fend off Napoleon. A
guerrilla is a fighter from the common people.
Freikorps: “Free units” of guerrillas that fought
against Napoleon because they wanted to during the time of the “Spanish Ulcer”
Battle of Leipzig(8):( 16-19 October 1813) A
huge battle against the French also known as “The Battle of Nations” which
waged for 3 days as the French fought against the Prussians, Russians, and the
Austrians. It left 100,000 dead and wounded in southeastern
Johann Gottfried Herder(8): Talked about an
identity that showed up in German way of life.
War of Liberation(8): In a war 1812-1813; Germans against French
Clemens von Metternich(8): p580 (1773-1859) The foreign minister of
Burschenschaften(8): The congress of Vienna
had crushed hopes of a single German nation and 2 days later the Burshenschaft was formed; They were “Good ‘Ol Boys” who adopted a revolutionary agenda with a tricolor
flag(strong symbol of nationalism): Black(the dark night of tyranny)
Red(through bloodshed they would reach to the Golden Age) Gold(the golden age;
They were planning a revolution and this would be the outcome.) Honor, freedom,
and fatherland were its values.
Concert of
Karlsbad Decrees of 1819(9): p.587 The Great
European powers gathered to stop the revolutionary measures taken by the Beuscencraftens, student societies that espoused the cause
of German unity. They prohibited the B’s existence with laws and control on the
press and university. They seemed to achieve stability, but the problem was not
gone completely. Metternick had the Germanic
Confederation draw it up and it led to the close watch the people during
1830-1832.
Congress of
Coachman of
Romanticism(9): Romanticism was an idealistic way of looking
at the world. Today “Romantic” has a debased meaning—their was a new way of
feeling and thinking around 1800 which featured a rediscovery of things that
had been neglected by the Enlightenment such as the role of emotion, peoples
hearts and feelings, history, tradition. It is necessary to focus on what made
a person, nation, society, etc unique.
Values were stressed like emotion and sensitivity, enthusiasm. Hard to
define. An awakening of the young, a new generation.
1)The Past: historical romances
2) Faith: The Romantics valued faith and belief when facing the
mysteries of the world. One needed to get in touch with the sublime and got in
touch with Roman Catholicism(traditional).
3) The Bizarre: Irrational worlds and strange settings depicted in
stories and art.
4)Mysterious:
5)‘Impatience” to transform oneself and society happened first in
the Germanlands.
Edmund Burke(8):
p.582 (1729-1797)Terrified by French revolutionaries,
called them terrorists. He argued that people should not try to remake the
human from zero, but to disregard manners would be barbaric or some shit. He
was a conservatist.
Thomas Malthus(9): p.588 (1766-1834) A
thinker on population and economics. He
had a strong case against government interference in economic matters. He was a liberal.
David Ricardo's Iron Law of Wages(9): p.589 Suggested that there will ALWAYS
be poor people, so raising wages would not necessarily produce good. It was
developed in his book Principles of
Political Economy in 1817. He too
was a liberal.
Irish Potato
Famine(9): 1845-1847, a natural disaster
that was a famine of great height. The staple crop was fucked up by the potato
blight and it couldn’t be eaten which resulted in great famine. Very slow
government response due their liberal ideas that they shouldn’t’ help. It
killed 1 million and forced 2 million overseas.
Risorgimento(10): p.599 The movement
for Italian nationhood started by Giuseppe Mazzini
after the failed uprisings in 1830-31.
Bobbies, Sir Robert Peel(12): p.601 1829 3,000 police men called
“Bobbies” were the beginning of a modern police force to prevent crime. London policeman who came to be known as
Bobbies after sir Robert Peel, the man responsible for introducing the
legislation that initiated the London police force. Late 18th and early 19th
centuries.
Domesticity:
Dictatorship of the proletariat(12): abolish private property,
take away state power from the rich, the state would simply wither away
producing a “heaven on earth”.
Karl Marx(12):
p.630-33 (1818-83) Established socialism/communism
which is a political religion that affected millions of people in the 20th
century. He Collaberated w/ Engels
in a new political theory that broke with liberal ideas. Crafted a science of
revolution and published the Communist Manifesto which mounted a challenge
against middle class society and liberalism. He attacked nationalism as well.
“Marx was a radical journalist who joined with Engles
to write the Communist Manifesto, which
proclaimed the ideas of revolutionary socialism. After the failure of the 1848
revolution in
Crimean War:
p.614-616 (1854-56) Napoleon III had his initial success in the Crimean
War.
Otto von Bismarck(11): p.619
(1815-98)"Iron Chancellor" Provided
leadership as a result of a crisis in Prussian politics. He was a conservative
“wild man” revolutionary and the need for him came in 1861 when he became chancellor
with a policy of realism. He announced the real forces for change in the world
were “blood and iron” which is economic and political forces. He broke the law and still went for the large
army to unite
Bill
of Indemnity: excused Bismark’s breaking of law
and legalized what he had done because they were greatful
for his bold move,
“1870 Prussia
went to war with Napoleon III’s France; the result
was a stunning defeat of the French armies at Sedan by use of modern technology
such as artillery and railroads; the German’s and Prussia demanded large
reparations and annexed French land to Germany; a German Reich was then formed
which united all German states; the Second German empire had been formed with
all states united which was the strongest State on the continent; the key to
success was a strong unified nation-state”
Queen
Ausgleich(11): Austrians emplaced the Dual Monarchy as
government: emperor of Austrian lands and king of Hungarian lands as well.
Iron Chancellor: Another name for Otto von Bismark (1815-98)
Realpolitik(11): “a policy of realism”; morality and law
don’t matter, but force, might, and strength do
Napoleon III(11):
p.612-16 (1852-1870) Napoleon III, king of
Baron Haussmann, boulevards(11): He was charged with the task of rebuilding
Benjamin Disraeli(12): (1804-81) Eventually he became prime
minister of
Reform Act of 1867(12): p.627 An expression of Disreali’s trust of
common people. It was an important step toward the democratization of
Søren Kierkegaard(12): Danish theologian who
also founded school of philosophy called existentialism. He attacked conformity
of many Christians and stressed faith to the point of martyrdom.
Socialist Revisionism(12): , Eduard Bernstein(1850-1932): p.649 A German socialist who wanted to revise Marx;
argued that Marx was right except for the part of immiserization;
he said workers could gain power through voting, “the ballot box”. He was
rejected but his ideas spread. Worked to
improve the condition of thw working class. The
“working class party”. He wrote Evolutionary
Socialism. He said that evolution by democratic means, not by revolution,
would achieve the desired goal of socialism.
Pogroms(13):
Events that were “ a violent act, or chaos” near the
end of the 19th century. Thugs from Christian population targeted
Jewish minority and destroyed their lives and homes. Anti-Semitism: a racist word meaning the “hatred of the Jews”-they
were seen as alien and foreign and discriminated. Jewish was not religious, but biological so
it couldn’t be changed.
Communist Manifesto
S.P.D.(12):
(social
democrats): Social Democratic Party of
"The Internationale"(12):
an international anthem that summed up
communist/socialist ideas
Rudyard Kipling:
"Sick Man of
Boxer Rebellion(13): p.698 During the Age of
Imperialism the humiliation of
Alexander II(1855-1881): p.625,669 Tsar of
Opium Wars(13):
Pith helmet(13): “Safari hat”; shade British from sun in the tropics
"Social imperialism"
Social Darwinism
Übermensch – Superman(13): A being, the
“superhuman” defined by Nietzsche who would evolve from human. Superman
Dreyfus Trial(13): 1895, a Jewish French officer accused
and convicted of spying for the Germans, he was obviously innocent, but still
kept in jail. Mobs shouted, “Death to
the Jews!”
Weltpolitik:
Kaiser Wilhelm II:
(NOTE: FOR MODEL OF AN
EXCELLENT ID ANSWER, SEE END OF REVIEW \SHEET)
ESSAY QUESTIONS:
(Take the time to read over the question carefully. Make sure you have
understood and can respond to all of the points included. Formulate a concise
argument in one sentence, a THESIS (not retelling or narration), and then make
an outline for yourself planning how you will argue the position you take.
Finally, create a powerful title for your essay, which captures the argument
you have made. Be sure to use important details and DATES to anchor your
argument in historical context and time! )
1. Discuss the origins of nationalism. What forces or factors energized
nationalism at the end of the eighteenth century and the beginning of the
nineteenth century? Compare and contrast the development of nationalism in
2. How do you account for the appeal of socialist ideas? What is socialism? How
did Marx's message differ from that of earlier socialist thinkers? How did
socialists seek to organize the working classes in
3. What was Bonapartism? How does it function as a
political system? What are its strengths? What are its liabilities or risks?
How were the reigns of Napoleon I and Napoleon III linked?
4. What caused the "new imperialism" at the end of the nineteenth
century? How was it different from earlier forms of imperialism? Which of its
causes was most important, and why?
5. Imagine that you are the editor of a liberal newspaper in a city in
6. What were the most important political consequences of the Second Industrial
Revolution? Why did it take place? How did the Second Industrial Revolution differ
from the First Industrial Revolution?
7. Discuss how Absolutism changed
8. Was Napoleon Bonaparte an Absolutist ruler in practice and in his ideology?
Discuss the three main reasons for your verdict.
9. Why did Karl Marx predict that the Industrial Revolution would lead to
political revolution and the triumph of the working class (proletariat)?
Discuss two specific events or developments between 1850 and 1914 and whether
they supported or undercut Marx's prediction.
10. How do you account for the dynamic course of the French Revolution? What
influence did Enlightenment ideas have on this event (be specific)? Who were
the revolutionaries, and what did they want? Ultimately, was their venture a
success or a failure?
11. What were the most important problems facing the Congress of Vienna after
Napoleon's defeat? How did the Congress deal with these problems? Was the
system a success or a failure in the long term?
IMPORTANT HINTS ON STRATEGY:
*Do not get bogged down on one point. Pace yourself to leave time to respond to
everything. Never leave an answer space blank (it always makes sense to try for
partial credit). If you have a problem with one part, move on to the next and
then return to the first later.
* Leave yourself time to reread your answers for spelling mistakes, missing
words, or other problems. Write clearly, in full sentences, with attention to
grammar. FORM MATTERS!
MODEL OF AN EXCELLENT IDENTIFICATION ANSWER, COVERING ALL NEEDED ASPECTS OF THE
QUESTION:
Code Napoleon:
Prior to the French Revolution of 1789, the country did not have a single set
of laws, but many local legal systems. During the Revolution, revolutionaries
tried to unite these laws into one code, following the Enlightenment value of
efficiency and utility. But it was only Napoleon Bonaparte who succeeded in
doing this in 1804. The product was called the civil code or Code Napoleon.
These laws preserved many ideas of the French revolution, like the principle of
the equality of all citizens before the law, the right of an individual to
choose his profession, religious toleration, and the abolition of serfdom and
feudalism. But the code was also conservative in that it protected property
rights, outlawed trade unions and strikes, and restricted the rights of women.
In sum, the civil code clearly reflected the radical aspirations of the
Revolution for a uniform legal system and legal equality for all, but its conservative
elements showed the true nature of Napoleon's rule.
Professor: Georgiana Vines,
Movie Review, “Good Night, and Good Luck”
November 22, 2005
Movie Review
George Clooney
directs, “Good Night, and Good Luck” in journalism style. His documentary took
newsmen and showed their integrity. The great Edward R. Murrow
was played by David Strathairn. Surprisingly, Clooney
Played Fred Friendly that was not even the top actor in the spot light.
Indeed, this
movie portrays the way the media industry fights for what they believe is news.
The movie also looks at how rating makes the difference in continuing. Not only
does it show importance, it gives a very good since of power over media, and
who has it such as the networks at large. In their case and in the real story, Murrow’s show really got canceled.
Certainly,
even Strathairn lost his job in the script. However,
I don’t believe anyone still living could have played Murrow
better. Indeed, I give Strathairn three thumbs up.
The movie, “Good Night, and Good Luck” is a must see. Anyone studying
journalism and electronic media defiantly needs to see this movie. Over all,
Clooney did very good sowing his journalistic ways.
Last names are not used in this true story.
WakeUpCall
During the
cooled winter months of
The major question for all of us that night was: “Could we of called 911 to save his life?” A doctor said, “He would have died anyway.” At this time I do not even know the hospital or doctor he was taken. I do know this!
A cab dropped him off at the after party and said, “Take him in the house and make him vomit.” I asked the driver why and he replied, “I was getting pulled over by the police and he swallowed an eight ball of coke.” I asked the cab driver how much his fair was and the cab driver said, “It was taken care of.”
At this time Steve and I took him in the house and told everyone the deal. We all discussed the situation about what had been handed down to us. We proceeded to question him about the truth. We all were in panic mode.
After we all came to senses, we came to conclude his whereabouts in the last 48 hours. Justin had been up the night before parting. Coke had been a factor in our understanding. Some of us did not believe the whole story about the cab fair.
Steve and his brother was our pick to designate him to the hospital. He broke the news to us with a single phone call. Justin is dead. The doctor told Steve that he didn’t have any bags of coke in him, although the doctor said he had enough coke in him that “he would have not made it anyway.” The truth is we could have not saved him by life star helicopter.
I have never seen a man blue in the face like that in my life. Vomit and blood came out of his mouth that night. He died probably in our arms. As we carried him to our car, we all felt his weight passing in our arms. We could not do no more, but pray, and wish for the best.
Wake Up Call by,
We all decide to:
Promise to stay sober again. Promise to live again. Promise to help again.
The night I laid my head:
WakeUpCall in My Sleep
It was half passed a dead sleep. I just had seen a real death that night before. The dream felt real but could only be some other connection to the tragic death I witnessed the night before.
The dream: I could remember a women running up some stairs. She said, “I got it, I got it, it’s my turn to pluck the chicken. She ran up the stairs as fast as she could. I followed her up there to see what chicken. She went into a room and laid on a bed with a beautiful baby. She seemed to love this child with her smirky look. She rubbed her nose up against his cheek and ear. The baby looked at me with a wonderful smile. She bit off this Childs ear and stated chewing it.
She plucked me up out of bed. I have not been right ever since.
Dedicated to Justin.
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Reporting Interviewer:
Assigned by Professor: Georgiana
Vines, Retired Editor from
Date Completed:
Reporting co-interviewer John Troupe, Student in Journalism and Electronic Media
Students Interview Howard Scripps Productions
Students
interview Managers around
Out
of those 115 people
Dave was asked if he asked hard questions, “During an interview I really don’t try to ask anyone trick questions, people trip over the simplest ones,” he said. Such as, “Tell me about yourself?”
On another note, Journalism and Electronic Media students asked Metz if he has ever been influenced such as Army, and anything else that may have taking him away from his career in Communications. He said, “I was fortunate along the way that people had an interest in me.”
Indeed,
having people swift us in the right direction is good, like school.
Unfortunately
as a manager and like many other high pressure jobs, “Metaphorically, I bring
my work home,”
Speaking
of families, my co-interviewer John Troupe from the
Taking
a more seriously approach and family is one of them,
Getting more business and more money is always a good thing, especially if you’re the boss of 115 people. Troupe asked him: “What are the differences from a Management Standpoint?” Mets said, “Lots more people at Scripps I’m responsible for.”
Being
in charge of this many people plays a big part in management. Reporter John Troupe asked Dave Metz this:
“How did you get involved with Scripps? Did you look for this job, or did they
come looking for you?”
Dave
gave good words to
This page is just an ad on to my story to show what I learned. I could not get 4 pages out of this interview. Even my co-partner John Troupe said, “Man, I’m struggling just to get 3 pages.” I could have written the story a different way, and maybe I would have got 4 pages. However, there our a few concerns I have.
Putting commas where they belong is my hardest task. Probably because I spend more time writing screen plays that are based on breath. However, I get discouraged in my writing because of this, grammar, and style.
Indeed, sometimes my rocking chair is off because I have dyslexia. Maybe this is my medical excuse to help assure myself that I am not perfect. However, because of learning, I try harder.
Indeed, children and adults have their own security blankets, but in my case practice, practice, practice is not the answer. I wish dyslexia could be simple and understood through my eyes, but memory has a whole lot to do with my grammar.
Certainly, memory should not take all the blame. I do think in my younger days staying out all night and drinking plays a part in growth and creative writing. Truthfully, my life needs many changes.
Sometimes, I get discouraged because many of my teachers, along the way, have said something or two about my writing. Indeed, it is like getting a hair cut and many people say something bad about it.
My greatest concern and fear is three simple questions I have asked my self many different times: “Will I ever be good enough with all these problems? Is my writing really that bad? Should I consider giving up journalism if I am that bad?”
Reporting Interviewer:
Assigned by Professor: Georgiana
Vines, Retired Editor from
Date Completed:
Reporting co-interviewer John Troupe, Student in Journalism and Electronic Media
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This page is just an ad on to my story to show what I learned. I could not get 4 pages out of this interview. Even my co-partner John Troupe said, “Man, I’m struggling just to get 3 pages.” I could have written the story a different way, and maybe I would have got 4 pages. However, there our a few concerns I have.
Putting commas where they belong is my hardest task. Probably because I spend more time writing screen plays that are based on breath. However, I get discouraged in my writing because of this, grammar, and style.
Indeed, sometimes my rocking chair is off because I have dyslexia. Maybe this is my medical excuse to help assure myself that I am not perfect. However, because of learning, I try harder.
Indeed, children and adults have their own security blankets, but in my case practice, practice, practice is not the answer. I wish dyslexia could be simple and understood through my eyes, but memory has a whole lot to do with my grammar.
Certainly, memory should not take all the blame. I do think in my younger days staying out all night and drinking plays a part in growth and creative writing. Truthfully, my life needs many changes.
Sometimes, I get discouraged because many of my teachers, along the way, have said something or two about my writing. Indeed, it is like getting a hair cut and many people say something bad about it.
My greatest concern and fear is three simple questions I have asked my self many different times: “Will I ever be good enough with all these problems? Is my writing really that bad? Should I consider giving up journalism if I am that bad?”
1. Discuss the origins of nationalism. What forces or
factors energized nationalism at the end of the eighteenth century and the
beginning of the nineteenth century? Compare and contrast the development of nationalism in
Nationalism Origins:
· Arose out of awareness of being part of a community that has common institutions, traditions, language, and customs.
o This constitutes a “nation”, and rather than a dynasty, city-state, or political unit, becomes the individual’s primary political loyalty
Forces or Factors that energized
nationalism at the end of 18th/beginning of 19th century:
· Did not become a popular force for change until the French Revolution
o French
aroused nationalism by making themselves hated oppressors: thus arousing the
patriotism of others in opposition of French nationalism; and by showing the
people of
· Nationalists began to believe that each nationality should have its own government
Developments in
·
Divided
·
German nationalists focused on
·
By 1853 all but
o Although
it was Otto von Bismarck who skillfully combined domestic policies with wars
with
Developments in
·
Nationalism
developed during the French Revolution in the French people’s emphasis on
brotherhood (fraternité) and solidarity
against other peoples
·
French
nationalism made possible the mass armies of the revolutionary and
·
·
2. How
do you account for the appeal of socialist ideas? What is socialism? How
did Marx's message differ from that of earlier socialist thinkers? How did
socialists seek to organize the working classes in
Explain the appeal of socialist ideas:
·
Gave enormous confidence that you were on the
winning side
·
Socialism is:
· An ideology that calls for collective or government ownership of the means of production and the distribution of goods
·
Emphasizes
economic cooperation over economic competition
· Advocates placing at least some of the means of production (and at least some of the distribution of goods and services) into collective or cooperative ownership
Difference between Marx and earlier socialist thinkers:
·
The
ideology of socialism grew up hand in hand with the rise of the organized labor
during the Industrial Revolution
·
Began
as the product of political theorists or intellectuals who wanted to introduce
equality into the social conditions and believed that human cooperation was
superior to the competition that characterized early
· To later Marxists, those ideas were impractical dreams and they condescendingly labeled the theorists utopian socialists: term still endures
· Utopian socialists were against private property and the competitive spirit of early industrial capitalism – by eliminating those things, they thought a better environment for humanity could be achieved
· Marx said it was traceable to the dawn of human social history
o It was a natural trait of human nature and early human social models
·
Marx
saw socialism as a phase of human society that would follow capitalism and
precede communism
o Marx’s message was antinationalist
· Share the common belief that feudal and capitalist societies are run for the benefit of a small economic elite and that society should be run for the common good
Socialists wanted to organize
the working classes in
·
Frenchman,
Louis Blanc (1813-1882), offered a socialist approach to a better society.
·
·
Denouncing
competition as the main cause of economic evils of his day, he called for the
establishment of workshops that would manufacture goods for public sale
·
The
state would finance these workshops, but the workers would own and operate them
3. What was Bonapartism? How
does it function as a political system? What are its strengths? What are its liabilities or risks??????????????How were the reigns of Napoleon I and
Napoleon III linked?
Bonapartism
is:
· A form of government dictatorship using plebiscites, but you must seek greater and greater military success to keep power
· Essence of the system were plebiscites
It functions as a political system with:
·
Fake elections, no real choice between
candidates, an unknown poll of approval or disapproval
Strengths:
·
Liabilities and/or Risks:
·
Used selective reformism to appoint the
radicalism of the popular class
Connection between Napoleon I
and Napoleon III reigns:
·
·
He
established a rule based on
·
Napoleon
I and
o
Then
used selective reformism to appoint the discrimination of the popular class
·
Both
wanted
·
Both
have been thought to want to rule the world
·
Both
were captured
·
Marx
judged both Napoleon I and Napoleon III of having corrupted revolutions in
4. What caused the "new imperialism" at the end
of the nineteenth century? How was it different from earlier forms of
imperialism? Which of its causes was most important, and why?
Approximately from
This period is distinguished by a
unique pursuit of what has been termed “empire for empire’s sake,” aggressive
competition for overseas territorial possessions and the emergence in
colonizing countries of the principle of racial superiority, which denied the
qualification of subjugated people for self-government
Cause for “new imperialism” at the end of 19th century:
· Accumulation theory: adopted by J.A. Hobson-
o Accumulation
of surplus capital during and after the
o Economic motivation: supply and demand; great demand for natural resources and other products not found in Western countries
o Drove financial interests to seek more profitable investments in less-developed lands w/ lower labor costs, unexploited raw material, and little competition
o economic motivation for imperialism
· World-System theory: approached by Immanuel Wallerstein-
o Saw
imperialism as part of a general, gradual extension of resource investments
from the “core" of the
o Protectionism
and formal empires were the major tools of “semi- peripheral” (semi-marginal)
newly states, such as
Difference between “new imperialism” and earlier forms:
·
Imperialism
was used to describe different forms of political control by a greater power
over less powerful territories or nationalities
·
Later,
imperialism was used to describe the economic and political power of
"monopolistic finance capital" (full control over economic assets) in
the most advanced countries, and its acquirement — and enforcement through the
state — of power of the means
o Hence, the profits of production in less
developed regions
·
New Imperialism contained both concepts along with the adoption of ultra-nationalist
and racial supremacist ideologies, the period saw a shift to pre-emptive
colonial expansion, fuelled by the imposition of tariff barriers aimed at
excluding economic rivals from markets.
Most Important causes:
· Existence of competitive nation-states after 1870 was undoubtedly a major determinant in the growth
Why:
· European affairs grew tense and heightened competition led European states to acquire colonies abroad that provided ports and coaling stations to their navies
o Failure to enter the race for colonies was perceived as weakness and was unacceptable to an aspiring great power
· Closely tied to nationalism:
o Colonies were a source of international prestige
· Also closely tied to social Darwinism and racism:
o Social
o
· Some Europeans took a more religious or humanitarian approach when they argued that Europeans had a moral responsibility to civilize ignorant peoples
o Known as the “white man’s burden” – another form of racism
6. What were the most important political consequences of the Second Industrial
Revolution? Why did it take place? How did the Second Industrial Revolution
differ from the First Industrial Revolution?
Most Important Political Consequences of the 2nd Industrial Revolution:
· Long Depression
· So-called “New Imperialism”
·
Reasons for happening:
· Resulted in the "mass society"
o Involved significant developments within the chemical, electrical, petroleum, and steel industries.
· By 1870, the global market was already saturated with manufactured goods.
o Increasing production compounded the problem and was a factor leading up to the Long Depression and the so-called "New Imperialism"
·
·
In
the development of science and pure research, the Germans invested more heavily
than the British did.
·
The
German cartel system, being significantly concentrated, was able to make more
efficient use of fluid capital.
Differences between 2nd and
1st Industrial Revolutions:
· 1st Revolution began with the introduction of steam power (fuelled primarily by coal) and powered automated machinery (primarily in textile manufacturing). The technological and economic progress of the Industrial Revolution gained momentum with the introduction of steam-powered ships, boats and railways.
·
2nd Revolution began with cheaply mass-produce steel, and included
the chemical industries, petroleum refining and distribution, electrical
industries. These industrializations created the first giant industrial corporations
with often nearly global international operations and interests.
·
1st Revolution had given rise to
·
2nd Revolution led the way to new
7. Discuss how Absolutism
changed
Ways Absolutism changed
·
New European states were organized with the
principle of the
·
The king is the absolutist monarch of the states
5 Things Needed in an Absolutist
Monarch:
·
·
Foreign policy: fight wars and mercantilism
·
Army: warriors and knights are of the past
·
Bureaucracy: Burghers must be loyal to the king
·
Ideology to justify absolutism: establish strong
sovereign state
Reasons why Absolutism developed:
·
It
promised an end to devastating civil wars and could put an end to corruption by
the aristocracy, and restore attention to the Church's moral codes.
·
Having
nothing to gain but a soul to lose, the theory goes; the King was a far better
figure to enforce an ethical code than social climbers or newly rich nobles.
Successful Absolutism:
·
o French
culture, language, and manners reached into all levels of
o French
diplomacy and wars shaped the political affairs of western and central
·
Kings and
Failed Absolutism:
·
o
The
Enlightenment in
o
However,
the process of reforms ceased with the partitions (separations) of
o
1772-
lost about 30% land and 50% population
o
Torn
apart by neighbors and torn off the map; ultimately dissolved
????????
8. Was Napoleon Bonaparte an Absolutist ruler in practice and in his
ideology? Discuss the three main reasons for your verdict.
Napoleon was/was not an Absolutist ruler in practice and ideology:
·
·
·
3 Main Reasons and Explanations:
·
He was devoid of any personal faith and regarded
religion as nothing more than a convenience
o Example:
In
·
He saw it essential to come to terms with the
o He
gave the pope little control over the French Catholic Church; even though the
pope gained the right to dispose French bishops, the state preserved the right
to nominate bishops
o Catholicism
was not reestablished as the state religion; Napoleon was only willing to
recognize it as the religion of a majority of the French people
9. Why did Karl Marx predict that the Industrial
Revolution would lead to political revolution and the triumph of the working
class (proletariat)? Discuss
two specific events or developments between 1850 and 1914 and whether they supported
or undercut Marx's prediction.????????????
·
Industrial
Revolution marked a huge historical break between traditional agricultural
societies and
·
Marked
a new power that reshaped society, the physical landscape, etc.
·
Industrial Revolution was not just about
technology and machines; it was a combination of issues that launched the
Industrial Revolution and constant rapid movement
o
Some issues include: new management and
organization, new uses of people and technology for more capital, and new work
setting
Marx predicted the Industrial Revolution would lead to political revolution because:
·
He
saw the relationship between the bourgeoisie (the owners and management) and the proletariat (the workers) classes as, for the most part, parasitic
·
The bourgeoisie were depending on the
proletariat’s to do all of the labor and were not doing anything in return
·
Since
the bourgeoisie always under compensated the proletariats for their actual
labor value (according to the labor theory of value), it allowed the
bourgeoisie to grow absurdly wealthy through nothing more than the mistreatment
of the proletarians' labor.
Predicted triumph of working class (proletariat) because:
·
They will become class conscience and revolt
against the bourgeoisie
·
The working class would then take over the
existing capitalist state, turning it into a workers revolutionary state, which
would put in place the democratic structures necessary, and then “wither away”
1st Specific development between 1850-1914:
·
1886- Gottlieb Daimler invented a light engine
o Key
to development of the automobile
Support or Undercut Marx’s prediction:
·
2nd Specific development between 1850-1914:
·
Thomas Edison invented the lightbulb
o Briton
Joseph Swan opened homes and cities to illumination by electric lights
Support or Undercut Marx’s
prediction:
·
10. How do you account for the dynamic course of the
French Revolution? What influence did Enlightenment ideas have on this event
(be specific)? Who were
the revolutionaries?????, and what did they want? Ultimately, was their venture a
success or a failure???????
Explanations for forceful/self-motivated course of the French Revolution:
·
A new
way of thinking sparked the revolution
·
Nationalism
was a new way of thinking
o
Arose
out of the awareness of being part of a community that has common institutions,
traditions, language, and customs; which constitutes a “nation”, and their
nation becomes the
·
Resentment
of royal absolutism
·
Resentment
of the seigniorial system by peasants, wage earners, and a rising bourgeoisie.
·
The
rise of enlightenment ideals.
·
An
unmanageable national debt, both caused by and exacerbating the burden of a
grossly inequitable system of taxation.
·
Food
scarcity in the years immediately before the revolution.
·
The
rise of an ambitious bourgeoisie and, to a lesser extent, of the lower classes
Influences due to the Enlightenment:
·
Represents
the Enlightenment through a violent and messianic lens, particularly during the
brief period of Jacobin dictatorship.
·
The
desire for rationality in government lead to the attempt to end the Catholic
Church, and indeed Christianity, in
·
It
also took the ideas of social and economic equality further than any other
major state to that time.
·
Metric
System
Revolutionaries were:
·
Revolutionaries wanted:
·
A revolution and seeked
to promote, encourage, or lead the creation of one
Ultimate Success or Ultimate
Failure:
·
11. What were the most important problems facing the
Congress of
In 1814, before Napoleon was
defeated, his four major enemies –
Important Problems the Congress
of
·
Craft
a new order for of Europe after the Napoleonic wars and the defeat of
·
Keep peace after the war
Congress dealt with them by:
·
Planned to restore the Boubon
monarchy to
·
Prince Klemens von
Metternich, foreign minister of
o meant
that the great powers had the right to intervene military in other countries to
crush revolutionary movements against legitimate rulers
·
In hopes to form a new balance of power that
would keep any one country from dominating
o
o
·
Despite being weakened,
o
the fear that it could regain powers and upset
the European peace remained so strong that they attempted to establish major
defense barriers to prevent any possible expansion
Ultimate Success or Ultimate Failure:
· Borders were a failure, and were returned to those of 1790
·
Established a European order that kept the
general piece for about 100 years, but was based on the interests of the elite
of
·
Led
to the eventual establishment of the Congress system and the subsequent
congresses.
· An integral part in what became known as The Conservative Order in which peace and stability were traded for the liberties and civil rights associated with the French Revolution.
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Professor: Georgiana Vines
Five year goals
Five years from now!
Indeed, when I think of my goals for the next five years: I also think of how there is not enough sedation medicine to calm me. However, making a motion movie would be my top goal. Realistically, finishing Media Management 485 comes first. There are four major goals in the next five years I need to complete.
The first goal is to finish these last two classes at The University of Tennessee. Indeed, Media Management is not the only class left. In short, a practicum Sam Swam stiffed me with will give me my degree in Journalism and Electronic Media.
Anyhow, just because Sam put me elsewhere, doesn’t mean it’s the end of my goals. Just like the second goal and the most important to me, certainly, finding my wife and two girls a house would be a necessary interest.
Indeed,
the third goal is my own, it is, education at the
Certainly, going to film school is a very important goal. However, making the movie is just as important. Indeed, making a motion movie is my fifth goal. I could live my dream if theses interest hold. Anyhow, I may not keep these goals in order, but I will keep my perseverance and integrity true to them.
Louis XIV “sun king” 1643-1715
Waged 4 wars between 1667-1713
Fronde 1648-1649 important event
Peter the Great King of
1689-1725
Jean- Jacques Rousseau “the Father of Romansticism” 1712-1778
Adam Smith 1723-1790 Scottish Thinker who argued that the Gov. shouldn’t interfere w/ natural laws of Supply and Demand
Voltaire A Key Enlightenment Thinker 1694-1778
Denis Diderot Published the Encyclopedia 1713-1784
Liberalism 1815-1830
An ideology that began because people believed they should be free from restraint.
Society of the old Regime before 1715
30 years war 1618-1648
war ends 1648 Changed west
Peace
of
1648 goodbye
to old
1648 Fronde- Tried to collect taxes to pay for the 30 years war, but a Compromise that for stability lay in the Crown
So Louis took advantage of this and took over supreme power.
Devine Right of kings
Louis
XIV “sun king” 1643-1715
Then came along St. Petersburg-Peter the Great who joins Absolutism.
Peter the Great King of
1689-1725
The Enlightenment Moves in 1690-1789
Key
Enlightenment thinker Voltaire 1694-1778
Proposed Deism
Jean- Jacques Rousseau “the Father of Romansticism” 1712-1778
Adam Smith 1723-1790 Scottish Thinker who argued that the Gov. shouldn’t interfere w/ natural laws of Supply and Demand
Then came the Revolutions
American Revolutions 1776
Louis XVI executed 1773
French Revolutions 1789
1744-1803 Johann Gottfried von Herder
Father of Nationalism
Napoleon Bonaparte Ended Revolution and crowed himself 1804
Napoleon
Tried to conquer
Napoleon’s
Largest army ever “Grande Arme” Russians defeated Napoleon in 1812
The Loser abandoned his troops to get caught again.
The
duke of
During
this time the (Concert of Europe- like
the UN -Balance of power- no nation
could have more power) was established)
Because the turmoil Napoleon put them through
Then came along the “Industrial Revolution”
Great Exhibition 1881
During
this time the (Concert of Europe-Balance
of power)
Then came along the Romanticism age around
1800
Just Before Queen
Better Know this Guy:
Meternick: Nationalism was threatening him and his
traditional elite class
Irish Potato Famine 1845-1847
Revolutions of 1848
Liberalism and nationalism almost succeeded
but failed 1848
Still ruled by divine right Monarchy
Liberals and nationalist worked together
against Metternick
Bringing revolutionary change
Marx: Another important man:…..
Napoleon III Promessed
to restore order.
1848 revolution had been a failure
Napoleon III over thrown 1851
Crimean war 1854-1856 showed Balance of
power can cause conflict???????Maybe
1870
Franklin D. Jeffries II
Review for Act One
Act One the last play with Robert and Catherine may have been missing the title page and who wrote it. However, the play had a good tempo to it through out. In my writing I try to keep the tempo (speed) of the flow (writing). Sometime when I start a script out with a fast tempo I know I have to maintain that speed or top that tempo at the end. When I write a slow tempo for the start I know I will have to pick the pace up to keep the flow interesting. Act One started out the way it ended. The tempo kept even through out. I think this form can be effective but I enjoy change in tempo, like most people really think tempo should be consistent. Who is to say what a good play should be when it comes to tempo. That’s like saying you have to have an antagonist and a protagonist in a play or movie. Well do you? I think a movie or play can have it either way, so in my writing I may want to employee only one antagonist to prove my point by being the only person in the play. I am saying I can write a play with out the protagonist and the play can still be good, after all it is entertainment.
Play finished on
Revised on
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What does it Say
by
Dale
Jeffries
Copyright © 2004,
Dalebay Productions
Cast or Characters
DELBERT: Must
speak and know ASL?
MIKE: A
deaf person that signs ASL?
RUBELLA: Speaks
and don’t know ASL?
Cassandra: Speaks, English?
Scene
(An airport lobby that renews passports)
Time
2004 Speaking ASL (American Sign
Language)
Setting: On a stage of your choice.
AT
RISE:
Curtin rise Delbert and Mike Are Signing
American Sign Language to each
other while
Delbert is speaking and signing. And Mike is
Deaf so he will have to sign his
lines.
MIKE (Solutes Delbert)
Delbert (Solutes Mike back)
Hello Mike.
MIKE
So, how are you doing Delbert?
Delbert
Doing fine, and your self Mike?
Mike
Good?
Delbert
I see.
Mike
You see?
Delbert
I see.
Mike
So, you see they don’t have a clue?
Delbert
I believe your right, they don’t have a clue.
Mike
They don’t know, they don’t know!?
Delbert
They don’t know.
Mike
I need to tell them something?
Delbert
You need to tell them.
Mike
How can I tell them!
Delbert
Tell them how you can.
Mike
I’m going to tell them in ASL.
Delbert
You’re going to tell them in sign language?
(Pause)
What!
Mike
I have to try!
Delbert (refers to the audience)
They can’t speak sign language!
Mike
Are you going to tell them all the time for me!
(Delbert Stops signing when
A Russian walks in and asks
Mike and Delbert a question)
Rubella
Извините
меня господа.
Куда я иду и
получаю мой
паспорт?
Perdóneme
señores. ¿Dónde voy y recibo mi pasaporte?
Delbert
Holy Shit!?
Rubella
Thank God!? English!?
Mike (Trying to get Delbert’s Attention)
What is he saying?
Rubella
What the hell is wrong with that guy!?
Delbert
(referring to mike and Rubella
but Delbert don’t see
Mike trying to get his attention)
Its ok he’s deaf.
Rubella
Deaf! But--
(pause)
Why is he flopping his arms like that?
Delbert
That is how deaf people communicate.
Rubella (hands Delbert a note)
What does this say sir?
Delbert (hands it back)
Sorry? I don’t know, My eyes are bad.
Rubella (Starts to leave)
Delbert
Sir? Before you leave, What did you say?
Rubella
I Said! (pause)
Excuse me sirs, Where do I go and receive my passport?
Delbert (points to a booth)
Over there?
Rubella (Leaves through the Audience)
Thank you.
Mike
(You are starting to look
mad and you hit Delbert in
the arm to get his attention)
What did he say?
Delbert
Sorry Mike.
Mike
What did he say?
Delbert
Ok! He asked why you are flopping your arms.
Mike
What!
Delbert
Come on I’m kidding!? He asked where the passport booth is.
Mike
Payback is coming.
Delbert
Payback!
Mike
Just Wait!
Delbert (refers to the audience)
So, are you going to tell them now?
Mike
I will check to see if they can understand me.
Delbert
Ok! Check and see if they understand you.
Mike (looks at the audience,
Claps his hand, gives them the finger, jumps on the floor, hit the floor three times,
Hump the floor to show a point, jump up and kick Delbert right in the ass)
(pause)
Delbert (looking calm)
You think they have any ideal now what you said.
Mike
I’m not sure what I was trying to say.
Delbert
I’m not sure what you where trying to say either?
Mike
I know!?
Delbert
So you need to tell them?
Mike
But, I knew they would laugh at me if I humped the floor.
Delbert
They would laugh at me too if I humped the floor.
Mike
How do I tell them?
Delbert
Why can’t I tell them for you?
Cassandra (Walks is looking sexy)
Hello boys.
Delbert
Hello.
Mike (grabs Delbert and points at her)
Who is that!
Cassandra (makes a sexy sound)
Who is your deaf friend?
Delbert
Happy, I mean, Mike? he’s Mike, I’m Delbert?
(pushing Mike out of the way)
Cassandra (moves toward mike)
I like your friend, Mike is it?
Delbert
Yeah, he is Mike, but I am Delbert?
Cassandra
Tell him I’m Cassandra.
Delbert (signs to Mike with out speaking this time)
Mike she said she likes me.
Mike
Are your sure?
Delbert (signs and talks)
Yes.
Mike
Then how come she is all over me?
Delbert (Sign only)
She is a prostitute.
Mike
Give me a peace of paper so I can talk to her.
Cassandra (rubs Mikes leg)
Delbert (sign and speak)
No!
Mike
No What!?
Delbert
I mean no!? I will tell her for you.
Mike
How do I know you are telling the truth to her!?
Delbert (talks and signs)
I will sign the same time as I talk to her.
Mike
What is her name?
Delbert (Sign and speak)
Her name is Cassandra?
Cassandra
So, your friend asked my name?
Delbert (sign and speak)
Yes, Mike wanted to know your name?
Cassandra
Ask your friend if he would like to go for coffee.
Delbert (signs and talks)
She wants to know if you would like to go for some coffee.
Mike
Yes, I would love too.
Delbert (signs the truth and talks a lie)
He said yes, for me to pick you up.
Cassandra
So where do I meet him.
Mike
What did she say?
Delbert (sign only)
She said something has come up.
Mike
What!? Give me something to write with?
Delbert (sign and talk)
I put the pin and paper with your passport.
Mike
(Looking for his passport in his bag)
I found it!
(write down something)
Cassandra
So, where is he going to meet me?
Delbert
He is going to write to you because I lied to him.
Cassandra
Lied to him?
Delbert
Yes? I told him you where a prostitute--
Cassandra
You did what!
Mike
(Hands Cassandra the note)
Cassandra
(looks at the note (Pauses) then starts to read)
Please read out loud. I have been trying to talk to you all night, Delbert don’t tell the truth always, and I kicked him because deaf people should communicate with hearing too, Now, you see how important it is to me, for you to learn sign language, I will tell you the truth now?! And make Delbert feel the way I do?
Mike
(writes on another note
and hands it to Cassandra)
Cassandra (looks at the note and reads)
Read out loud until you see Stop! Then read the Rest silent!
Delbert dose not Know? Stop!
(pause like your reading)
Delbert
(grabs the note from Cassandra and looks at it)
(Cassandra and Mike start walking out)
Delbert (is furious)
What does it say? What does it say!? What does it say!
(Cassandra and Mike walk out while Delbert says his last line)
(Delbert Sits down in a chair next to a sign that says English line only please)
(Light’s go dim)
Delbert (With a quite voice)
What does it say…?
(Black out!)
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Another
Bad Play
---------------------------------
by
Dale
Jeffries
Copyrights ©
2004,
Dalebay Productions
Cast or Characters
JERRY: A
Male in his 20’s or 30’s?
HAPPY: Brother
20 to 25?
PAPPY: Dad
44 to 120?
MOLE: Who
cares?
FILLIN: Anyone
of age?
Time
Who Cares, 2004 English?
Setting: Any setting you desire.
AT
RISE:
Jerry walks in. Jerry is pacing the stage mad at
the Actors & Actresses for being two-faced. Pappy enters with a beer and finds Jerry
talking to him self.
JERRY. Actor’s, they walk around that green room like their famous!
PAPPY. Hey Jerry, what’s--
JERRY. And them there Actresses aint better.
PAPPY. Damn right! And you know--
JERRY. Hey Pappy.
PAPPY. Hey Jerry, Bad day?
JERRY. Yeah.
PAPPY. Me too. But this here old yeller want let me down.
JERRY. Hell yeah, let me tryer out.
PAPPY. Here you go.
JERRY. So, what is it any how?
(tips up the drink and starts gulping)
PAPPY. (looks at his watch) Piss!
JERRY. (spits it out everywhere) Piss!
PAPPY. Yeah Jerry I got to go. (Leaves the room)
JERRY. (looking at his cup) Your leaving!
(looks up and throws the cup toward the door)
HAPPY. (walks in) Hey, that’s all the beer man!
JERRY. Beer!
HAPPY. Yeah, beer.
JERRY. You see…a Pappy?
HAPPY. I gave him the last beer to bring you.
JERRY. You did!
HAPPY. Yes, you get it.
JERRY. I sure did!
HAPPY. That’s good. So--
JERRY. You see Pappy again! Tell him--
PAPPY. (walks in) Hey boys, glad to see both of ya’ll here.
HAPPY. Hey Pappy. (hugs Pappy) Jerry was just asking for you.
PAPPY. (slurring Speech) Well Jerry, Did that beer help ya any. (Hick Up)
JERRY. Beer!
PAPPY. Well yeah, thanks to Happy here, you got the last one!?
JERRY. You told me it was piss.
PAPPY. Ok, and you are not as drunker then I think I am. What?
HAPPY. Pappy don’t do that.
PAPPY. I can’t help. I smarten to feel it.
HAPPY. Feel it?
PAPPY. Yeah, this White Lighting he’s a tellin.
JERRY. White Lightin!?
PAPPY. No one said anything about lying.
HAPPY. Lying!?
PAPPY. (pulls a bottle out of his Jacket)
JERRY. I’m confused.
PAPPY. (hands the bottle to Jerry) Here, drink this.
JERRY. (grabs the Bottle and looks at it) Yeah right pappy.
HAPPY. (snatches the battle form Jerry and gulps it) Damn, this is real.
JERRY. Real! Wait.
PAPPY. (laughs)
HAPPY. (pulls out the Script and looks at it)
JERRY. (looks at the Script with Happy)
PAPPY. (still laughing and falls in the floor)
HAPPY. (looks at Pappy) I think he is really drunk.
JERRY. (looks at Pappy and the Script) I think he is too, cause this
(grabs the bottle) aint in the script.
PAPPY. Script! (laughs) You aint as drunk as you think I am too. (drunk laugh)
HAPPY. (whispers to Jerry) We need to get him off Stage.
JERRY. (looks at crowed confused) a… ladies and Audience? Just a moment.
(grabs Pappy by the arms with Jerry and walks him just out the door)
JERRY. What the hell is a matter with you, bringing that booze?
HAPPY. You can’t just show up drunk either.
JERRY. Go back home and straiten up,
so we don’t get kicked out of the University
PAPPY. (grabs the battle) I’ll take this with me!
HAPPY. (steps in the door with Jerry while whispering to him)
JERRY. Ok. Folks, we have another play coming up, Right Happy!
HAPPY. Yeah, another bad play!?
JERRY. (start acting paranoid about the beer on the floor) Hey Happy!?
HAPPY. (happy looking at Jerry while Jerry starts to Clean the Floor)
JERRY. Happy Just don’t stand there, help me clean this up!
Hurry, if the Theatre sees this, we might get kicked out of school!?
HAPPY. (grabs a Audience ‘fill-in’ to watch the door) Help us?
FILLIN. Help you do what?
HAPPY. Watch the door. If you see someone coming, tell us.
FILLIN. (looking back in fourth paranoid too)
HAPPY. (start cleaning fast with Jerry)
JERRY. (cleaning with a towel) Happy, you think—
HAPPY. (stop Cleaning and small your breath) Damn
JERRY. What?
HAPPY. Liquor on my breath!
JERRY. (stops cleaning, stands up with Happy)
HAPPY. Man…
JERRY. I smell it everywhere up here.
HAPPY. Yeah, I know.
JERRY. That beer Pappy gave me--
HAPPY. Beer!
JERRY. Yeah, beer!?
HAPPY. (pull out the script again and look at it)
JERRY. What are you doing?
HAPPY. Looking at the script.
JERRY. For what!?
HAPPY. Cause the script is bad.
JERRY. What do you mean?
HAPPY. I mean this (points to the floor) aint beer.
JERRY. The beer is in the script?
HAPPY. No, there is no real beer in this script.
JERRY. So, what are you getting at?
HAPPY. (read from the script) It says, the fake beer is to be piss?
The talent Pappy, Gives the Piss to Jerry.
JERRY. Wait you saying the script has me drinking piss?
HAPPY. Yes.
JERRY. Bull Shit!
HAPPY. Its true Jerry, I even helped donate the piss.
JERRY. (runs after Jerry in circles) While you…
HAPPY. Clam down Jerry, it’s the Authors ideal!?
JERRY. Calm down, I drank piss, and your telling me to Calm down!
HAPPY. I’m Joking Jerry I’m Joking!?
JERRY. Who’s the Author of this Play.
HAPPY. Dale Jeffries.
JERRY. Where do I find him for this!?
HAPPY. Dale bay dot com.
JERRY. Dalebay what!?
HAPPY. Dalebay.com.
JERRY. Well you just—
FILLIN. Hey, Hey.
JERRY. WHAT!
FILLIN. Someone is coming, that’s what!?
HAPPY. (get away from the mess) Hurry, stand over here.
MOLE. (Mole walks in to spy) What’s going on in here!?
JERRY. Nothing?
MOLE. So, why do I smell Beer?
JERRY. (looks at Happy) See, I told you it was beer.
HAPPY. (look at Jerry and say in a small voice) Shout up.
MOLE. What do you mean it was beer?
JERRY. I’m just happy it was not piss? (laughs)
HAPPY. He means someone came in and through beer on the stage.
MOLE. I see?
JERRY. (laughing on the floor now)
Yeah, and it could have been piss on the floor. (still laughing)
MOLE. So, why did Pappy go home?
HAPPY. He got sick.
MOLE. I may pay him a visit. (leaves)
JERRY. (stands up) I can’t believe this.
HAPPY. Believe it because that was to close.
JERRY. To close? (pulls another bottle out of his coat) I need a drink.
HAPPY. (looking away from Jerry) Me too.
JERRY. (dinks and makes a noise of relief)
HAPPY. (turns to Jerry) Dang Jerry we are in enough trouble.
JERRY. Trouble, we are trouble.
HAPPY. Trouble it is, hander here.
JERRY. (hands the bottle to Happy)
HAPPY. (drinks and relief sound) Jerry.
JERRY. Yeah Happy.
HAPPY. Let’s sit here and drink.
JERRY. (Sits with Happy) Sounds good!?
HAPPY. I starting to get happy.
JERRY. Me too…
HAPPY. Remember that song we made up when we was kids.
HAPPY AND JERRY. My Momma lied over the Otion.
My Daddy lied over the see.
My Daddy lied over my Momma.
And that’s how they made me…
HAPPY AND JERRY. (laugh together)
JERRY. Yes, the good old days.
HAPPY. The good old days are right.
JERRY. I just,--
PAPPY. (runs in breathing hard)
JERRY. (stands up with happy) What’s a matter Pappy.
PAPPY. I… I--
HAPPY. Well spit it out will ya!?
PAPPY. The Mole, she…-- (breathing hard crouched down)
JERRY. The Mole said she would come visit you.
PAPPY. She did.
HAPPY. What did you tell her?
PAPPY. I told her that I left cause I got sick on the stage.
JERRY. You did what! (looking at the stage)
PAPPY. Yeah, I didn’t know ya’ll told her
someone through beer on the stage!?
JERRY. Is there anything else we should know?
PAPPY. Yeah, she hired John shoemaker.
HAPPY. And John Shoemaker is coming here.
PAPPY. Yes.
JERRY. We need to leave before we lose are money.
HAPPY. I’m with you on that he’s bad news.
PAPPY. Yeah, and I want to stay in school.
HAPPY. (look at the audience) And what about all these people.
PAPPY. Give them their Money back.
JERRY. To hell with that, we told them it was a Bad Play.
HAPPY. Then what are you waiting for?
JERRY. Let’s get the hell out of here?
(Jerry, Happy, Pappy runs out and away!)
FILLIN. (looks in
side) The Mole is coming!?
(The Mole walks in and looks around as she walks out she says)
MOLE. One of these days.
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Authors Note’s
The play is based on parts of
a true story that happened on this date bellow. I was in school at the
My wife
answers the phone. I make a joke as always to make her laugh. What I said to
make her laugh I do not know now, but will always remember the news she gave
me. She started weeping and said, “Dale this is not the time to joke! Our baby
is dead.” My heart stopped as I went into shock, like I feel now. My reaction to deny or make us feel comfort
was say; the baby was only an embryo. Honey, the baby didn’t even have a heart
yet. She played my game of comfort. We both were silent for a few seconds. She
started to talk as I controlled my out rage of pain and sorrow. As she kept
talking I started getting even more thoughts of rage in my head, so I had a
silent cry on the phone and she didn’t even know, but knew and felt my silent
hurt. I do not even know anymore to the story then this above. My child that
went to the doctor today I don’t even know what she seen or heard. However, how do you tell a three year old
that has been excited about a baby in mommies’ tummy?
After nine hours of painful thoughts I knew the first
hour I was going to write this play no mater how much I hurt or it kills me.
The truth needs to be told about children we affect in this world from start to
finish. I hope this play puts a finish on all abortion thoughts too. At least
put the truth to what life means. Have you ever thought about the children
alive today that almost got aborted? The ones today that think “people think I
should have been killed because my mother got raped, but they decided to have
me anyway and people still want me dead.” This Play is dedicated to three (III)
kinds of people and they are children who die at birth, children who suffer
today with aborted connections and last to the president of the
The most Famous
Play wrote on
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Angels go
to Heaven
By,
Dale
Jeffries
Copyright © 2004,
Dalebay Productions
Cast or Characters
GOD: The
good inter voice.
DEVIL: The bad outer voice.
DOCTOR: Abortion Doctor.
DALE: A
man in his thirties.
MARY:
Pregnant Women.
PROTAGS: People
that don’t kill children.
ANTAGS: People
that kill children.
Scene
(Left Stage a fancy living room in a
house)(Right Stage a rain forest)
Time
(30 years after (my birth II Born 1974) III died) 2004
Setting: In a living room of a house.
AT
RISE:
Curtin rise a man is sitting in a chair looking at his self in a mirror just down the
hall. Above him is a window that show the night stars. He hears two voices in his head.
The man looks depressed with no reaction to the voices.
Devil
I should go get drunk.
God
What could make things better?
Devil
Waking up in a parking lot?
God
My family needs me?
Devil
You family don’t need you! Wreck your car and splatter blood everywhere.
Then disappear for three months.
God
Don’t think that way!
Devil
You do won’t to find out who cares- don’t you?
Dale (looks up at the window)
(Stage left lights fade out and rain, thunder and lighting starts)
(Dale positions his self to the audience then the lights fade in on stage right)
(The setting is in a rain forest at night)
(Dale stands in the rain holding a long knife down by his leg)
PROTAGS (standing left of Dale chanting)
Let them live! Let them Live!
ANTAGS (Standing right of Dale chanting)
KILL THEM! KILL THEM
(As the chant continues the Devils voice appears)
Devil
What are you going to do now? Your child is dead!? Dead! I said DEAD!
(the chanting starts to fade out slowly along with the lights on the chanters)
God
Listen to me Dale, Look up to me, Angles go to Heaven.
Dale (looks up slowly as the light appears)
(a bright light appears in the sky like and angel)
God
Dale you see your child is ok now.
Dale (drops the knife still looking up)
(The bright light fades out)
(loud thunder and a bolt of lighting strike)
Devil
Dale! , Dale! , Can’t you see your child is in your wife Dead! , I said Dead!
(Lights fade out along with the rain and thunder)
(stage left again, lights fade in
while Dale is sitting in the chair
Looking up still out the window)
Dale
(looks slowly into the mirror and points to it)
What the hell is the matter with you?!
Who me! Yeah me! I must be going out of my mind.
(Dale gets up and starts walking)
Devil (in a loud eco voice)
Dale!
Dale (stops dead in his tracks and looks around)
What! (pause) What! (pause) Who said that?
Devil (still on eco)
God!
Dale
You sound like the Devil, Not God?
Devil
I am God.
Dale
Well if you are God then tell me something?
Devil
Anything for you Dale, just let me guide you.
Dale
O.K. God what ever you want, just tell me something.
Devil
First accept this check card, so I can guide you better.
(a cardboard box falls from the sky into Dales hands)
Dale
Cool, what is this?
Devil
It is The Mark.
Dale
The Mark of What!
Devil
The Mark of the beast, Open it, I will answer all of your questions.
Dale
How does it work?
Devil
When the box is opened you belong to me and I will guide you.
Dale
O.K God, I will follow you anyway.
(Dale opens the box why a God says in a loud voice)
(Eco off)
God
NO! NO! NO!
(strobe lights are flashing on and
off stage everywhere when
the box is opened up)
(black out)
(lights fade in and Dale is looking up at the window in his chair again)
Dale
(looks slowly into the mirror and points to it)
What the hell is the matter with you?!
Who me! Yeah me! I am going out of my mind.
I thought I just dreamed I sold my soul to the Devil!
(points to the mirror)
You did. You did. You did.
Dale (Walks away Scratches his head looking confused)
Did I?
God
Dale!
Dale (looks up)
Hey Man! I’m not going through this again!
God
You can change your mind anytime Dale.
Dale
I’m not opening anymore boxes God!?
God
Your box has are ready been opened!
Dale
What do you mean my box has are ready been opened?
God
You gave your soul to the Devil.
Dale
I did no such things. I gave my soul to you God.
God
That was the Devil Dale. You opened the Box.
Dale (drops to his knees with a plea)
NO!
How can I change the thing I can not change!
How can I be deceived by this life!
(Stage left Fade out)
(Stage right rain fades in)
(this time chanters are not seen)
ANTAGS (Start chanting loud)
KILL THEM! KILL THEM!
PROTAGS (chanting louder then ANTAGS)
LET THEM LIVE! LET THEM LIVE!
(Lights fade in- Mary is lying on a doctors table Crying)
(Notes: for this part--- strobe lights again--- while doctor is giving
her an abortion)
(I will write this part baste on what my wife goes through today)
(
(Miscarriage is just a comfort word for the living)
(This is my end when I get to it)
At the end
(Black out)
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Another
Bad Play
---------------------------------
by
Dale
Jeffries
Copyright © 2004,
Dalebay Productions
Cast or Characters
JERRY: A
Male in his 20’s or 30’s?
HAPPY: Brother
20 to 25?
PAPPY: Dad
44 to 120?
MOLE: Who
cares?
FILLIN: Anyone
of age?
Time
Who Cares, 2004 English?
Setting: Any setting you desire.
AT
RISE:
Jerry walks in. Jerry is pacing the stage mad at
the Actors & Actresses for being two-faced. Pappy enters with a beer and finds Jerry
talking to him self.
JERRY
Actor’s, they walk around that green room like their famous!
PAPPY
Hey Jerry, what’s--
JERRY
Them Actresses too.
PAPPY
Damn right! And you know--
JERRY
Hey Pappy.
PAPPY
Hey Jerry, Bad day?
JERRY
Yeah.
PAPPY
(Hands Jerry a cup)
Here you go.
JERRY
So, what is it any how?
(tips up the cup and starts gulping)
(PAPPY looks at his watch)
PAPPY
Piss!
JERRY
(spits it out everywhere)
Piss!
PAPPY
Yeah Jerry I got to go.
(Leaves the room)
(JERRY looking at his cup)
JERRY
Your leaving!
(JERRY looks up and throws the cup toward the door)
(HAPPY walks in)
Hey, that’s all the beer man!
JERRY
Beer!
HAPPY
Yeah, beer.
JERRY.
You see Pappy?
HAPPY
I sure did!
JERRY
You see Pappy again! Tell him--
(PAPPY walks in slurring speech)
Hey boys, glad to see you both here.
HAPPY
Jerry was just asking for you.
(PAPPY Still slurring speech)
Well Jerry, Did that beer help ya any.
(Hick Up)
JERRY
Beer! You told me it was piss.
PAPPY
Ok, and you are not as drunker then I think I am. What?
I smarten to feel it.
HAPPY
Feel it?
PAPPY
Yeah, this White Lighting he’s a tellin.
(PAPPY pulls a bottle out of his Jacket)
(HAPPY snatches the battle form Jerry and gulps it)
Damn, this is real.
JERRY
Real!
(PAPPY laughs)
(HAPPY pulls out the Script and looks at it)
(JERRY looks at the Script with Happy)
(PAPPY still laughing and falls in the floor)
HAPPY
I think he is really drunk.
JERRY.
I think he is too, cause this (grabs the bottle) aint in the script.
PAPPY
(HAPPY whisper to Jerry We need to get him off Stage).
(JERRY tell the audience)
Just a moment Please.
(grab Pappy by the arms with Jerry and walks him just out the door)
JERRY.
What the hell is a matter with you, bringing that booze?
HAPPY
You can’t just show up drunk either.
JERRY
Go back home and straiten up, so we don’t get kicked out of the University.
(PAPPY stand out side until next cue)
(HAPPY AND JERRY step in the door while whispering to each other
start acting paranoid about the beer on the floor)
JERRY
We need to get this shit up.
(HAPPY grab anyone from the Audience to watch the door- Give them a script)
HAPPY
Help us?
FILLIN
Help you do what?
HAPPY.
Watch the door. If you see someone coming, tell us.
(FILLIN looking back in fourth paranoid too)
(HAPPY start cleaning fast with Jerry)
JERRY
I smell it everywhere up here.
HAPPY.
Yeah, I know.
JERRY.
That beer Pappy gave me--
HAPPY.
Beer!
JERRY.
Yeah, beer!?
HAPPY.
Well you just—
FILLIN.
Hey, Hey!?
JERRY.
WHAT!
FILLIN.
Someone is coming, that’s what!?
HAPPY.
Hurry, stand over here.
(MOLE walks in) .
What’s going on in here!?
JERRY.
Nothing?
MOLE.
So, why do I smell Beer?
JERRY.
BEER!.
(HAPPY look at Jerry)
Shout up.
MOLE
What do you mean beer?
JERRY.
I’m just happy it was not piss?
(laughs)
HAPPY.
He means someone came in and through beer on the stage.
MOLE.
I see?
(JERRY laughing on the floor now).
Yeah, and it could have been piss on the floor.
MOLE
So, why did Pappy go home?
HAPPY.
He got sick.
MOLE.
I may pay him a visit.
(MOLE leaves)
(JERRY stands up).
I can’t believe this.
HAPPY
Believe it because that was to close.
JERRY
To close?
HAPPY
Yeah! Let’s sit here and drink.
(Sits with Happy)
HAPPY.
Remember that song we made up when we was kids.
HAPPY AND JERRY.
My Momma lied over the Otion.
My Daddy lied over the see.
My Daddy lied over my Momma.
And that’s how they made me…
HAPPY AND JERRY.
(laugh together)
JERRY
Yes, the good old days.
HAPPY
The good old days are right.
(PAPPY runs in breathing hard)
JERRY
What’s a matter Pappy.
PAPPY
I… I--
HAPPY
Well spit it out will ya!?
PAPPY
The Mole, she…--
(breathing hard crouched down)
HAPPY
What about her?
PAPPY
I told her that I left because I got sick on the stage.
JERRY
You did what!
PAPPY
I didn’t want to tell her I through beer on the stage!
JERRY
Is there anything else we should know!?
PAPPY
Yeah, she hired John shoemaker.
HAPPY.
John Shoemaker is coming here.
PAPPY
Yes.
JERRY.
We need to leave before we lose are money.
HAPPY.
I’m with you on that he’s bad news.
PAPPY.
Yeah, and I want to stay in school.
HAPPY.
And what about all these people.
PAPPY.
Give them their Money back.
JERRY.
To hell with that, we told them it was a Bad Play.
HAPPY.
Then what are you waiting for?
JERRY.
Let’s get the hell out of here?
(Jerry, Happy, Pappy runs out and away!)
FILLIN.
(looks in side) The Mole is coming!?
(The Mole walks in and looks around as she walks out she says)
MOLE.
One of these days.
(MOLE LEAVES)
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Franklin D Jeffries II
Professor Dana Yeaton
Sanyo’s
Rob- is the middle man trying to understand what is going on between Delbert and Mike.
Mike- is deaf and dumb and his goal is to get Delbert to tell the truth to Rob about taking sign classes.
Delbert- Goal is to hold off on the truth as long as he can.
The scene takes place in Wal-Mart.
The first Line is Mikes and it starts with, “I can’t tell him that” while talking and signing ASL the same time (American Sign Language).
Sanyo 2
Jessie- Goal is to lie to her Mother about something she said at Wal-Mart.
Stranger- Their goal is to get Jessie to tell her mother that she said very bad things.
Jessie’s Mom- Tries to understand what is going on because she is deaf.
The first line is Jessie’s and it starts, “Mother this lady said I was a very pretty Girl”.
Sanyo 3
Otis- Goal is to get Willy to drink with him.
Willy- Goal is to find a reason why he can drink. And the reason has to be better then I just can’t or I have somewhere to be.
Scene is at a bar out side. The first lines is Otis, Let’s throw some horse shoes Willy. (With a slurred speech)
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A play and a movie
Play wrote on
_____________________________________
Wrestlman
By,
Dale
Jeffries
Copyright © 2004,
Dalebay Productions
Cast or Characters
WRESTLMAN:
COACH: Male
in his late 40’s.
VOICE OVER:
Male or Female Voice.
MOTHER: Women
in her late 40’s.
Scene
(Left Stage Wrestlman’s
bed room)(Right Stage a Wrestling Mat)
Time
(1993 and 2004 one year before the Olympics)
Setting: In side Wrestlman’s mind.
AT
RISE:
Heavy rain at Curtin rise with
thunder and
lighting flashes through the bed room
window while
Wrestlman is doing push ups.
Trainer (synchronizes with Wrestlman)
Come on? Come on? Push it! Push it! Push it! Come onnn!
Wrestlman (synchronizes with trainer)
N! N! N! N! N! NNNnnnnnnnnnnn Nnn
(Black out lights fade in dim on Wrestlman on the mat)
Voice
Wrestlman? Get up! GET UP WRESTLMAN!
Wrestlman
Who is it!
Voice
I am a sin dent.
Wrestlman
A sin dent?
Voice
Yes? (A pill bottle drops from the sky)
Take one!?
Wrestlman
What do they do?
Voice
Help you win?
(fade out lights fade back in while Wreslman’s asleep in his bed)
Mother (walks in)
Son, wake up, it’s time to wake up?
Wrestlman
Mother? It’s you?
Mother
Yes Son? It is me?
Wrestlman
I’m dreaming again Mother?
Mother
Dreams are just the beginning Son?
Wrestlman
I need to sleep?
Mother
Yes Son? Sleep? (kisses Wrestlman)
(lights fade out and fade back in on wrestlman mat)
Coach
Today is the day we win!
Wrestlman
Today is the day I pin!
Coach
Now get out their and win?
Wrestlman
I say I will pin! Three seconds? Three seconds?
(fade out fade back in Wrestlman sleeping)
Mother (runs in and turns on the TV)
Son! Son! Son! Wake up! Wake up! Wake up! Your on TV.
Wrestlman
Mother? How can this be!
(TV SET: Wrestlman, Wins again?
At
his opponent in three seconds. This has to
be the new world record set by Wrestlman
at
just happened? Wrestlman told me and the
team he was going to pin him in three seconds?
The team didn’t believe him, but I had a feeling he was going to do it.)
Mother (turns the TV off)
Son? The doctor said these things would happen.
Wrestlman
My Dreams are getting stronger mother?
Mother
I know Son? I know?
(Fade out and fade back in to Wrestlman)
Voice
Now you see Wrestlman?
Wrestlman
Yes my sin dent, I see.
Voice
Your Dreams are a gift.
Wrestlman
A gift they maybe? How do I use them!
Voice (is visible-A light effect)
You must first understand the future to come.
Wrestlman
The future?
Voice
Your gift is a dream for others.
Wrestlman
How dose it work!
Voice
Your dreams are true, your power is true, the past is true, the future is true.
Wrestlman
You mean? I can change the past and the future in my dreams.
Voice
Yes! And control the world if you desire!
(Fade out and Fade back in to bed room again)
Mother (runs in and turns on the TV again)
Wake up! Wake up! Wake Up! What have you Done SON!
Wrestlman
What now mother!
(TV SET: George W Bush Jr. loses the election today
because he omitted to Wrestlman how he plans to
end Social Security, However, the Olympics
are in a week and Kerry plans to help win the gold.
Wrestlman also, plans to donate three hundred
billion dollars to help children and their families,
Stay tuned and—
Mother (clicks the TV off)
Son, always dream for the good.
Wrestlman
Mother, I am trying to be the best.
Mother
You must undo what you have done Son!
(fade out fade back in to Wrestlman)
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Franklin D. Jeffries II
Professor Dana Yeaton
Synopses
Delbert- The interpreter
Mike- The deaf and dumb guy
Rob- who don’t know ASL
The beginning Delbert is signing to Mike in ASL while talking. Mike is Deaf and dumb. Mike replays back to Delbert with madness. Rob walks in and asks Delbert what is wrong with Mike. Delbert tells him it’s nothing. And Mike gets furriest at Delbert because he lied to Rob saying nothing is wrong. Rob asks Delbert what Mike said. He said he is mad at me. Mike asks Delbert did he tell Rob why he was mad. Delbert tells Mike yes. Mike asked Delbert why did Rob not react to what he said. Delbert said he didn’t want to get in the middle of it so he told him nothing was wrong. Mike gets really made at Delbert and tells him off. Rob asked what he say this time nothing again. Delbert tells him the truth about something is wrong. Mike signs to Delbert. Delbert signs ok. Rob says are you going to tell me what the hell is going on now. Delbert signs why talking to Rob. Yes, I am Rob. Mike told me I have to sign too while telling you, so he would know I told you the truth. Delbert tells him another lie by mouth while signing the truth. Finally, later the truth came out to Mike that Delbert did this sign lying. So, at the end he signs to Rob again and tell him the truth. The Plot what Mike said to Delbert? Rob needs to understand what I say and take ASL Sign Classes. Rob replies to Delbert. Is that all he said. Yes besides he called me a SOB for not telling you to get off you dead ass!
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Franklin D Jeffries II
Professor Dana Yeaton
Sanyo’s
Dan- is a wrestling coach pushing Dale to reach his full potential. His goal is to keep Dale from not giving up.
Dale- is the captain of the team and he is thinking about giving up because all the pressure of pushing his body and mind to his limits.
The scene takes place out side
The first Line is Dan’s
Dan- Dale,
Sanyo 2
Dale- His goal is to prove to his team mates he can pin his guy in 3 seconds.
Matt- Does not believe Dale can pin him in three seconds.
The scene takes place on the bench of the wrestling mate.
The first line is Dale’s
Dale- Matt I’m going to pin this guy in 3 seconds.
Sanyo 3
Dale- Goal is to prove to the ref that the people in the bleacher were cussing him first.
Dan- (Dale’s Coach) His goal is to help Dale say in the tournament.
Ref- Trying to help with the drama that is getting out of hand. His Goal is finish the wrestling match.
Mother- (other wrestlers Mom Dale flipped off) Her goal is to get Dale kick out for flipping a bird at her.
Scene is on the wrestling mate.
The first line-
Dale- Fuck you, (Flips a finger at the mother)
Franklin D. Jeffries II
Acting 220
Play Review: THE DRESSER
THE DRESSER started out slower then my mother getting out of my truck. However, I thought the actor JD Cullum did a good job at the beginning to evoke emotions with the alerts of war. His paranoia to the alerts puts me in a character myself as if there maybe a war, or am I really in the Clarence Brown Theatre. Cullum made me want to stay and watch the play through out. The actors did a good job to make me think as if I was there. What strikes me the most from the actor’s point of view is their control to stay focused on being spontaneous to keep the flow. There are three interesting captions I learned from studying the Actors. The first would be their movement. Another would be how their voice conveyed the audience, and last, I will explain why I am lost for words.
John Cullum is putting on his makeup witch is bizarre watching a character change into another one. His Son JD said, “What’s wrong with the teapot and why is it not boiling yet”. Just as he said boiling he taped the top of the teapot and a few seconds later the teapot started boiling. Then he acted as he filled up a tea glass and gave it to John. If I did not have this assignment on watching movements: I would have never known he turned the teapot on by tapping the top of it as if something was wrong. Also, knowing the teapot is a fake helped me understand why he positioned himself so no one could see the tea being pored. Movements are great examples how good actors have to be to help us believe what we see is real.
Being a good actor is to be able to convey voice. There were times in the play I could not hear the actor’s voice like pussy in a scene talks so quite I thought I was going deaf. But who care if I missed one line? Right! Just as long as I did not get up and leave like I have done in the past. If I stayed, the play was a success. Using strong voice like John and JB done in a few scenes helped me jump back on the wagon. When John told JB, “I pissed you off”. My rapt attention was kept to the actors because I was shocked to see them go on a rampage. However, I think good plays should have attention getters to bring the audience back into the play. John and JD did a good job conveying their voice to the audience.
Affective as the voice is I am lost for words. The play really kept me from being a critic as I really am. Normally, I will critic a play so much that my attention on writing these reviews drifts into another assignment, and causes me to throw carve balls at my reader. Somehow, someway, I followed the guidelines as if I just passed preschool. I really think it has to do with being a unique play. Having to watch it from back stage is not normal, but interesting to me since I was in the audience. Being lost for word is a way of saying good job and thank you for something new. I also think--
The script is rather nice.
Tying
all the above into my conclusion gives me my last chance to make my point. As I said at the beginning of my review,
evoking emotions is a good part of story telling I try to do in my writing. And
the actors did a very good job with the comic point of view. With out the comic
emotion I do not think any play would survive. The audience is the most
important part of any play, so with that I give my final thoughts. Movements
and voice make a play come to life as if no movement and voice came to life
then you have my mother again trying to get out of that big truck.
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Franklin D. Jeffries II
Professor: Dana Yeaton
OUT THE WINDOW
Review on OUT THE WINDOW
This play relates to my writing in a few ways. One is expressing feelings in a way to make people think about how bad it can be in life. Another why I see how this play related to my writing is the slang used in the time period. An example of slang in the play is… However, I can’t find the slang word right off the bat, but I think it is important for history in my eyes to record words of new slang in our time. I think it should be incorporated in our writing, so the next generation can analyze how much slang has changed. There is some slang words from our grandparents past we no longer use. And I believe slang helps us recognize the era that the play or story took place. And with out looking at the date of OUT THE WINDOW I can tell it has been written in my time because of the slang used. And that is important to me as a writer.
Comments on the plot
I do think Andy and Jake died too, and if they didn’t die they still died from the things both of them can’t enjoy anymore.
Review on PLAYWRITING 101: THE ROOFTOP LESSON
Wow, I have to say this play script is the best so far I have read. Rich Orloff writes in a style that I do admire. When I write I write to keep the audience on their toes. Suspense is an effective way of writing and I would back that with PLAYWRITING 101. In 101 Orloff has three goals I like and they are story, plot, and audience. I call them that because his style is new to me. The story is funny and that is a winner with my vote. A good play will use a story style that no one has heard of, and most of the time makes the play a winner. I try to do this in my writing every time with out thinking. The punch line should be the strongest however, in this play the punch lines were so strong it left no room for a strong finish. And, in my writing I try to hold the strongest at the end. Audience is the most important part of a play when writing. And, 101 did a good job of keeping the audience. Sometimes in my writing I really mess up with my dyslexia writing that it steers people away, so to steer them back I write to the audience like I wanted that to happen when the truth is I had no other choice at the time, because of limited proof readers around and lower educated people around me since I’m the first that may graduate from college in my family. Audience is the most important and 101 kept me as I try to keep you.
Comments on the plot
Punch line not as strong at the end as I think it could have been.
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Dale Jeffries Reviews Continued
Review on THE MAN WHO COULD’T DANCE
The play should have been called THE MAN WHO COULDN’T WRITE
Really, I could not even write a bad play at our play fest. And Jason Katims is trying to write a good play. Attention is a big step in a good play and Katims did not keep mine. I may have to read this play again and again to understand why I had to read it or if other people think the same things about his true bad play. I can’t relate to this play except the story lines did not keep my attention or keep me interested; however, I kept reading and made it to the end. A love story I try to steer away from in my writing, unless it is just one love scene in the play. That brings me to an interesting point. The best movies or plays most of the time will have all the characteristics of evoking emotions and as a good play writer should do, use all the emotions in his work as I try to do. Love is one of the emotions I would use. Katims love play was not as effective on me as it maybe to others.
Comments on the plot
To me I think the plot was he and she either wanted to be together but couldn’t because he was married. Maybe that was his kid too. And he could dance but couldn’t really dance with her cause he had to get down stairs because he was married.
Can you please email on this plot and your thoughts because I really got confused with Jason Katims work and why he wrote in this style. fdj@utk.edu
Review on The Road to Ruin
Relating The Road to Ruin is hard to relate to my writing. One thing I would of done different is make a better story board for the play. In my writing I would of tied another plot line with it, like why the garage made worked in this way. Basically, I would of incorporated how some mechanics over charge. The play does that in a why. As a reader looking at this story, I want more. The Road to Ruin gives some good examples on how we can be Ruin and go broke. But I think in my writing I would have done this script just a little different. I would make the garage look as it is they fault more. However, I do like the play. Maybe one of these plays seen better then read. Over all I can’t relate much to my writing in this play.
Comments on the plot
The title says it all on this play and that is something I do too. Giving my plot away at the beginning sometimes gives the wrong impression as to what is my plot or can it be interoperated to really mean something different or just what it is. However, some people write their title first and then write the whole paper or story just about the title, as I do often too, but as you see with my point it leaves the door open to the audience to change the play, and change is not a good thing to me when reading a play or watching it. That’s why I try not to write my story’s on the title.
Note to myself: Read ARABRIAN NIGHTS and review-this is last
one I have to review as of
Franklin D. Jeffries II
ASL 223
Paper 1
I HEAR DEAF PEOPLE
I HEAR DEAF PEOPLE when I read “A Journey into the Deaf-World” like I never have before. The Authors explain in the second part many opinions of how they felt growing up. The philosophy “Disabling the Deaf—World” between the deaf and hearing world will be my primary focus.
Growing up with deaf family myself maybe the only reason I have never thought my Uncle and Aunt Minnie and Genn Reynolds are disabled. However, the thought and quote, “Baldly put, the hearing world sees the members of the Deaf-World as disabled because they have limited hearing” is disturbing to me (214). I have never thought that before in my life time. However, I am not deaf to feel the way Ben Bahan did when he was a child, but I do know how it feels to be limited in ASL (American Sign Language).
Sign
Language has been in my family since the late 1930’s. Minnie and Genn Reynolds my deaf and dumb Aunt and Uncle have been
teaching me since the day I was born on
The book talks about crutches too with deaf people learning ASL after they try to speak. Also, the Authors explain the consciences for learning late, and why to deaf people the language is easy because it is natural. I can agree with them on natural language comes easy. However, learning at a young age as some of my family was required learned easy too and they could hear. Today, I am finally realizing the impotents of learning sign language at a young age, because the disabled feeling I feel from relying on others when someone feels hurt too.
When I decided to learn sign language at college I thought learning would be easy because I was raised around ASL, well it is like I have been born again in a new life starting at age three. Learning a new language today is the most important task for me, and the best reason I can give is of the guilt I feel from being disabled too. The best part about learning ASL is my Aunt and Uncle are excited that I am learning now.
The reason I don’t believe that deaf people are disabled is because their not. Growing up with deaf family really helps to know they are not. The Authors misrepresent the term “disabled because they have limited hearing”. I never my entire life have thought my deaf side of the family is disabled.
Most of my family knows sign language and I don’t. I used my translating side of my family to translate for a long time. If the Authors quote is true, then I maybe disabled because I am limited in ASL. The Authors of “A Journey into a Deaf-World” may think hearing people see them as disabled, but for me that is just their opinion from being different as I feel different too. However, deaf people maybe different then hearing people when it comes to commutating, but for me I feel deaf people think I am disabled because I can’t sign ASL.
Although, hearing people have something deaf people don’t; people should not be stymied. In addition to, for the deaf people have something the hearing doesn’t; stymied is a complex problem everyone has in one form or another.
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Franklin D. Jeffries II
Professor: Dana Yeaton
Topdog/Underdog play review
Suzan-Lori Parks wrote many slang words where I thought she was trying to be too clever or she just couldn’t spell. In my writing I try to use slang words where everyone can read and understand what the slang word is. Also, Parks had abbreviated words through out her play. Give me a “5er, yr, Pa, Ma, Abe” on the side of the bus. Yeah, that is how I felt reading the play. I do not approve in short hand slang and short hand alone turns me away from the read. In my writing I will try to remember not to do this.
Space by Donald Margulies
Margulies style of writing keeps me reading. I think this is the second play we have read this year on him. I really like the “read slow” part at the begging because of the smoking pot. Revealing a slow read at the begging gives us a sense the talent is high or brain dead. I like the A, B with the names of the talent. I use TA, TB, TC for talent A, B and C. Help me not to put names to a script when I don’t know who the names should be yet. I have written scripts like this because I had the idea down first and I new the names was not as important at the time, so I would write my script down with TA, TB just to have my story down.
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Dale Jeffries
3 characters
Professor: Dana Yeaton
Want-Is fascinated with his heart. He enjoys people. He always fears dieing. He is fascinated with beer. He is in recovery for alcohol. He is fascinated with school. He love’s high school. He still dreams about wrestling in high school. He is fascinated with his sponsor on how long he has been sober. He has pride. He dreams about being a movie star. Otis is a guy everyone can relate too. He want listen.
His fascination is life.
Need- Is fascinated with helping his self. He wants to get ahead in life. He can’t accept lose. He has to be number one or not at all. He has to have his way. He want listen to nothing but his needs. He is fascinated about taking care of himself. He comes first. Nothing can change his mind. He helps his self only. He will only help others if it is a need.
His fascination is himself.
Demand- Is fascinated with need. And doesn’t like want but puts up with him. Demand is fascinated with needs. She can’t understand why wants don’t listen. Demand is open minded but hard to talk to. Demand is fascinated with famous people. She only cares about other. She wants want to be famous. She fascinated with getting what she wants.
Her fascination is control.
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Dale Jeffries
2 Monologs
Professor: Dana Yeaton
Need- has a Burning desire to help his self recover from alcohol. He tries to help his friend want but want never listens to him. He is in a meeting and his friend want told the group that he was not an alcoholic. Need told Want to go try to just drink one then. And, the next day Want came in with a big sorry that we shouldn’t go to strip clubs cause you either get drunk or go broke. Want said, “He did both.” Need new that Want would get drunk. He listens and learns from Want. After the meeting was over need and want get to gather to talk about Demand.
Demand- Demand is a loving girl that is in the meeting too. She walks out and finds Need and Want talking about her. She acts as she doesn’t here them and gets behind the wall to spy on them. She finds out that Need is helping Want and just using her as an example. She wants to meat Need because Need referred to her as pretty. She steps out from the wall and tells them she forgot something and asked how they were doing. She told Want next time you want to go to a strip club call me. She was cheaper. Want told her he want go broke then. Need told them that’s how it works.
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Franklin Jeffries
English 281
Section # 42403
Evoke Me Continuity Breaks
Mr. Smith Goes to Washington started out with more continuity breaks then my dad tying to get a word in with my mother. However, I thought Frank Capra did a good job telling why filibusters are important for our senate. Capra made me want to watch the movie through out. The actors did a good job expressing their movements within the frame to help evoke emotions. There are three special effects in this movie that helps me laugh. The first would be expressions and movements. Another would be how sets and props help blend in the expressions and movement, and last, I will explain why movement brings out the emotions even with out the sound.
The only movie scene I will use through out this paper is when Happy the Mayor goes to Jeff Smith’s door. Happy rings Smith’s door bell and a loud concert band plays as if the door bell is making this sound. I would run too, as the Mayor did with a scared look. The door opens as he turns back and looks. His hand moves across his forehead as a sign of relief. The expression on his face looked as if he was in big trouble. The women that answered the door even played a role in the comic scene, looking at him as if he was out of his mind. Having an ideal of the scene gives me a better chance to explain why movements and emotions affect the scene as being humorous.
Movements and expressions in the door bell scene create even more emotion. Without these movements the story would not affect me as comic. If the Mayor did not run or even turn around I would not know to laugh. Expressions and movements are important to help evoke me emotions. Movements alone can make a person laugh. If I made a face at my daughter she would either laugh or cry. Making a face at my wife may have another affect, because she may hit me and not laugh. When a face is made in a movie we may have an ideal with what the expression is telling us. Movements work the same way. If I ran out of your class room you may have an ideal something is wrong. The movement would have an affect on one of your emotions, just like when I heard the door bell, my emotion was gone too.
However, in this scene without the sets and props the scene would not be as funny. Take the door bell and add sound with the props. The whole class would laugh then, because they would know why I ran out. Remove the movements and emotions and leave in the sound, I would be in distress too. The scene would not be as funny with only movement and emotion in Mr. Smith Goes to Washington. Either way, if the door bell on the set was not there and all the movement changed to scratching his head, then I would think there is something bigger coming when the loud band started playing. Perhaps then the door opens and he sees naked men drinking out of a trumpet. The emotion would defiantly change and I would no longer laugh.
Using all of them together evokes even more of my emotion. Turning the sound off and watching the scene with sets, props, movements and emotions alone gave me a better understanding why all of these work together. With out sound the movements become more visible. I can remember more detail on the expressions with the sound off. The Mayor’s face became noticeable. He had a look as if he did see a g0st. The fright gave me a feeling as if I was there too, and when he turned around I seen the door open as if he did. The detail of all the emotion played a part in how I felt. Frank Capra incorporated every emotional look possible in this one scene to make laughter. After looking at the scene with out sound, I became to believe why good Film Maker’s employees these affects, and that is to evoke our emotions the way they desire.
Although, I said the sound made the movie funnier, I am not all that certain the sound really did. Watching the scene with sound and without, I found both to be hilarious, but the sound gives a faster ideal what is going on in the scene. The silent way is really funny and more detailed. If I seen the silent version first I maybe able to tell by reaction. The only real way to tell that the scene is funnier would be research on other people’s reaction. I do believe the scene can be very funny with out the sound. Pushing the door bell and running away explains why movements can bring out emotions even with out sound. The emotion of the women opening the door tells us it’s ok. When Happy walks in and sees the band playing, we know by sets and props, he ran because the band got loud or just started as he arrived.
Sets, props, movements and expressions in the door bell scene are the best examples why Film Makers apply mise-en-scene methods to their movie. All of them play a role in ways we never think of when slowing down the edit point. How we view and understand the scene as a whole depends on the Film Maker. Capra used sets and props to give us the visible needs, and he applied the expressions and movements to help evoke our emotions even further. Being a Film Maker myself, I know black in white films are more detailed when it comes to movements, because there is no color to distract us from the expressions. However, I do think all of these affect the scene as a whole no matter how we script it together. Sound is the only effect that can be removed in the door bell scene, which means, emotions will still be evoked even if the continuity breaks stopped and my dad finally got a word in.
Dale Jeffries
EUKIAH Play Review
The Jon Jory EUKIAH Play split the prize with LYNETTE AT 3 A.M., at the Louisville Play Festival. However, my first impression after reading the EUKIAH was shit. I did know into the first read that Butch was going to kill Eukiah. Shock is the proper words I was in. I would have never guessed he was going to kill him. Looking back on Jorys’s work I can see the Narrative that relates to the Murder. I can see myself writing in this form to shock the audience. If the story didn’t end the way it did, I would have gave the prize to LYNETTE AT 3 A.M. Also, the first read through EUKIAH I didn’t like the play, because I didn’t see the point. Over the entire story fascinates me the more I look in to it. I give the play a four out of five.
Dale Jeffries
LYNETTE AT 3 A.M. Play Review
I can Relate to Jane Andersons Play LYNETTE AT 3 A.M. much better then EUKIAH. The prize would of gone to them on my first read.
From: Dale Jeffries
Re: Guidance
Cc: My Teachers
Note: Just to let you know why I missed class one or two days. I became overwhelmed with a number of things. These things gave me (stress, nerves) break down from past medical health problems were I needed a rest and a break by my professional Doctors opinion. I think I am doing better now? I am doing my best and with my doctors advice I am dropping one class and I am not sure I really want too either due to my graduation date this year. Although, I am playing catch up in a number of classes, I am not sure witch class to drop if any? I think I can finish strong in all my classes, but I think I may need to have a conferences with all my teachers to see where I am at-And maybe some changes I can make to help me carry on.
(The biggest concern I have for my self is some outside issues that have came up this year I have no idea how to fix and what direction to take. Hopefully, these maybe general everyday things people deal with).
However, I have asked disability services to help me out once again. I pray for your help in guiding me in the right direction.
Sincerely,
Franklin D. Jeffries II
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Franklin D. Jeffries II
481 Lighting Class
Summary of my Experience
Experience from 481 class in the Clarence Brown Theatre
In the beginning, I thought ninety hours would be a walk in the park to finish. Now that I am finished with this course, fewer hours should be considered. Also, my experience from 481 lighting class, has opened new light. The best part of the class is getting the hands-on experience. This class will help me in the future as a film student. I do think this class has helped me understand how light can effect the shades of color in an inside environment. There are some recommendations I feel should be considered. It came to my attention in the first weeks, while working in the CBT LAB that there is no handicap accessibility in many parts of the buildings. I thought if I brought this subject up it would help the CBT professionals to consider renovating all the buildings so that people with disabilities could get more involved in classes. Also, I think it would help the ticket holders who are handicapped have better access to the facilities. When the accessibility came to my attention, I started imagining that I was in a wheelchair everywhere I went. This helped me to see where all the places in the building could be fixed to help handicap people. In the next paragraph I would like to express my concerns about safety.
Safety is another concern I had while working at the CBT. With the experience I got from all my Theatre classes and jobs in the past, I do think safety should come first. 481 is not just a class, it is a job. My recommendation for safety is simple. A corporate video should be made on safety. The video should cover all jobs and classes that have safety issues. Maybe classes that have intense supervision are the only ones I see that could be all right not to have videos, but still they should have a handout of safety precautions read to the class by the instructor. These videos should cover every safety situation that a committee can think of, and I do think all 481 students and employees should have to watch them all. After watching the videos, a form should be signed that notes the students agree and accept the terms and conditions, and that they will be followed. In the next paragraph, I will give one example from my experience of safety issues that can be put in consideration.
The best example I can give is when I worked on top of the cat walk where the trap doors are. I did not know that it is best to take everything out of your pockets before working there. Well before I was aware of this, I had already worked up there with everything in my pockets. I know if I drop a penny off a very high building it will sink 5 to 10 feet in the ground. I would not like it if I was under that penny. The problem is, I did not think about the things in my pocket falling out. With this experience, I hope to make an impression that safety is a big issue at the CBT. A corporate video and a form signed would be the way to go.
Over all, I really enjoyed the 481 class. Working with John Horner was very educational. He is a good teacher and helped me very much. When I start my career making films, the one thing I will know the best is how to adjust the lights indoor.
The recommendations I have made are the only real ones I would look into. If the hours where a little shorter I think this would be an excellent class to take. I do think for 90 hours of hard work like this should be given more credit hours, like 3 or 4 credits.
Thank you for a good spring 2003-2004 year at the CBT, and I hope to do it again but this time I can only handle 1 credit class to make the 3 credits work in to my Theatre minor.
Sincerely,
Dale Jeffries.
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Franklin Jeffries
7232
Political Science 101
Section # 73876
The purpose of this paper is to summarize Schwarzenegger article from Time magazine. Also, I will react on how it relates to American Politics.
Wow,
according to the article
Gray
Davis is mentioned in detail on how he lost his votes in the race. Many advised
him on what to focus on. Even Bill Clinton gives his impeachment experience on
how to stay in the game. Time shows how
The
article influences
One of the greatest ties to politics is power, fame and money. It is a way people win. Just like Ronald Reagan did in his campaign. He had fame and money too. Therefore his odds were better because of power. The best way to react to this article and how it pertains to American Politics is mass media, history and power.
Schwarzenegger is a prime example on how important power is in politics. His recognition shows how the media mass produces his fame. The media plays an important roll in his mass popularity. I do believe the article is correct on power. It does not take just muscle to win over a crowed.
For
example,
It
could be difficult to attach any labels at all to Schwarzenegger or paint him
as a tool of the right wing (Tumulty 25).
Schwarzenegger
has resources, powerful backers and a name to push
One
of the best positions in political history held and assigned by, Bush latter
made Schwarzenegger the chairman of the President’s Council on Physical Fitness
and Sports, a position that gave Arnold the power to talk to school groups
about fitness and conduct push-up drills for Colin Powell on the White House
Lawn (Tumulty 33). Another help in his history is the
Kennedy’s back ground that gives him more experience to be good at Governor.
The help from his past plays a great part in his success. There is no denial
that
The
biggest concern that pertains to American politics is another change in our
history on recalls. Even Ted Kennedy stated, I like and respect
Over
all what do people make of a hero in films that has been in mass media for
years. I think the truth is here and shows how powerful media plays a role in
power. If I ran against
Works cited
Tumulty, Karen and McCarthy,
Terry. “All That’s Missing Is the Popcorn.” Time
Magazine July 2003: 22-33.
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Class 320
Professor: Maria Fontenot
Student: Franklin Jeffries
Re: Assignment 1
Lock Miller Real Estate Company Commercial from 102.1
“Hey folks, this is Jay Gotson with Lock Miller Reality Auction Company, that’s right I said Auction Company. Not only do we offer your regular Real Estate needs, we also offer a full service, Auction division professionalizing in farm sales, farm equipment and Estate sales, with several years in the business.”
The Positive and Negative parts about this Commercial (critique)
That commercial is so bad. The negative part is Jay Gotson said more words I could comprehend what his business really is. The positive part is I don’t have to remember his telephone number. Another positive part is he spoke well and sounded professional with his speech, however I do think the wording could have been simpler to make a clearer sale. Also, the name of the company sounds like a lock smith that adds more confusion to what the commercial is about.
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Memo
To: Teacher
From: Franklin Delano Jeffries II
Re: Assignment #1
Date: December 31, 2005
My name is Delano Franklin Jeffries. However, most of my
family and friends call me Dale. My parents Frank and Charlotte were both born
and raised in
I’m currently classified as a junior at the
I grew up listening to bluegrass music because that is what my father listened to. I enjoyed it for a while until I was old enough to discover other types of music. At the moment, I listen to a variety of music. The Internet has made it easier to sample a variety of music before purchasing a CD.
The other achievement in my life includes the three-second
pin for world record in wrestling while I was at Karns
high school. I wrestled for four years at Karns and
brought numerous awards for my school. Upon graduation from Karns
in 1993, I was given a full wrestling scholarship at
I have a short term and long term goal at the moment. The short-term goal is to take care of my family and be in good health. The long-term goal is to complete my degree program and write scripts for a play and or movie.
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Dalebay Productions
To: Dolly Parton
From: Dale Jeffries
Re: A Part in a Movie for Dolly
Cc: Dolly’s
Manager and Agent
Date: December 31, 2005
I have a Movie coming up and wanted Dolly Parton to play a part in the Movie. The Movie is full of
action and suspense with a twist at the end. WrestleMan
is a True Story with real clips taken through out his Wrestling career. The
plot is he loved wrestling so much he still dreams about it. The story is
driven by trade off’s of his success and in the end their will be a sense of
what a champion goes through to be a champion.
2 shot scene: One choice in the Script for
Dolly to consider is a caring Mother that is concerned for her Son that has (Post
Dramatic Stress Syndrome. The reason for the (PDSS)
is footage are ready shot 10 years ago in high school wrestling and world
championships that helps the movie flash back with out having to make talent 10
years younger.
1 shot scene: Another choice for her is a
Doctor that diagnoses WrestleMan with (PDSS). The shot establishes the importance of why he is
having dreams.
The Major Motion Movie will be entered in the Sundance Institute in 2005. I would
love Dolly to play a part in WrestleMan. (It would
only take a half of day out of her time and I will set pre-production at her
leisure). Please have her or her agent
contact me for more details.
This would help me jump start my career from all the hard
work I have put in from my education here at UT.
Dalebay Productions from
2521
THEY DID REPLY BY LETTER IN THE MAIL BOX.
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“FIRE”
Get out and stay out!
On Tuesday the 7th around 430am a bad transformer caused a partial power outage.
A motor in the back of
Lt. Severs noted, “Anytime there is a fire alarm, he
encourages residents to leave the building instead of taking a risk that it
maybe a false alarm.” This is a very important statement considering
Picture Take by Dale Jeffries
7:45am after
Kingston Apartments alarms
sounded.
“The fire alarm
system will still operate even when a power outage occurs, if the battery
system is working properly. The code is set up for 3 floors for alarms and
flashing lights to give the Fire Fighters time to get there and narrow the
problem in a specified time, if a alarm does not reset the whole building will
be alerted.” It is very important to understand how fire codes and panels work
because relying on systems may not be the perfect solution when our life is at
stake. Take my story for example that early morning. I remember my wife Tammy
waking me up and saying, “Honey, I think there may be a fire because fire
trucks are all around our building and the light is flashing but no alarm is sounding”.
I told her to take our Daughter Ashley out and down the stairs. Realizing we
have been having fire drills for the last few days. What I did not know is that there really was
a problem, so I am taking my time putting my clothes on and thinking well the
sound of the alarm is not going off so it may be another drill. And I even
thought hay just incase this is real I’ll just grab my laptop because it is the
smallest and most expensive property in my house. With this ignorant thinking I
even thought I would go ahead and get my books and bag and on the way out I was
so sick I grabbed my guitar because I thought I may be out side all night, so I
could play my guitar. Well again this thinking stated after my wife told me
they may really be a fire and that’s when I looked at the clock and it read
1238pm. I really thought I have only been asleep for 2 hours, not knowing there
has been a power outage too. The real
time I learned was 538am. And the time I started down
the stairs from the 7th floor caring all I could carry I smelt smoke
as soon as I opened the door to the stairways. That is when I had a reality
check and my fire instincts on surviving kicked in. Checking doors to see if
there where heat and how close could it be to me. Realizing again I had to cover
my face and with all that I was still caring my guitar. If it had been a real
major fire, the dirt thrown in my face would be the only thing putting me out. I
am very lucky there was no major fire. Know your codes and what to do in all
building here at UT. Rationality Means-end is death in this case, but
Rationality Means-end really means life. That is making the right choice:
“Fire” Get out and stay out!
Staff Writer
Dale Jeffries
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Franklin D. Jeffries II
My favorite Mineral
Geo/630pm/tu/LAB
Neil
CALCIUM IS MY FAVORITE “Besides Gold”
Where
do we find Calcium? This question brings up many issues on where, how, and why.
Another
way to find Calcium would be the Beach. Beach grade refers to the coral calcium
grains that have washed up on shore. There they have been baked in the sun and
weathered by the elements. They have also been exposed to man-made pollutants
and acid rain. Although this grade of coral maintains a high amount of calcium,
most of the precious sea minerals have been lost. This grade coral is commonly
used in teabags. This is an excellent product for purifying water but does very
little to replenish your mineral profile or to address your calcium needs.
There
has been a lot said by different companies on their TV ads claiming product
superiority. Some claim their product is better because you mix it with water,
some because it has crystallization, and other's because they have someone's
name on their label. While all these products can help replenish our mineral
profile and balance pH, the recognized indicator of quality is the product with
the highest amount of natural magnesium and sea minerals. Dealing with Calcium
in Coral, brings a major issues of- is it 100% absorbable. That is why milk is
the best way for me to get my Calcium. Calcium is a mineral that can get very
complicated, especially when it comes to heath. Speaking of that, health is way
calcium is my favorite Mineral. Besides if Gold could do all that, it would be
my favorite then. I wrote two pages, because I wined in class. ‘lol’
The Journey of John Adams
Franklin Jeffries
7232
Political Science 101
Section # 73876
The Journey of John Adams
David
McCullough New York Times bestseller, winner of the Pulitzer Prize wrote John
Adams a book of storytelling. McCullough researched
There
are so many great stories McCullough mentioned in his book that I recommend
reading it because 656 pages will not dent this 4 page paper. The story on how
the White House got its name is another fact that remains today with American
Government. When
One
fact that he pointed out clear is that
Greave is the plot of this entire book and the two major ones are separation of family and dedication to accomplish American freedom: a journey we try to keep. Abigail Adams and her husband had to experience one of the worse heart aches of all time. Leaving each other long periods of time when John traveled his journey into the political world. Abigail wrote letters of encouragement know matter how bad it was on her because she knew John had an important job ahead of him. She wrote and John stated, “I did not strive for this position but was just my journey in life” (McCullough 657).
Separation
caused both of the Adams Greave, but Abigail knew her husband had to be a
Revolutionary to accomplish his journey in life. The Decoration of Independence
is the most famous work completed by
John Adams is one man in political history
that was respected highly, so when he suggested something should happen, it
happened. For example,
After
After
On his return to Crabtree, the
town was named
Now,
the question still stands about the odds of Jefferson and Adams conflict that
McCullough expressed. After a year in office problems began with
First,
Abigail became ill and was not allowed to talk because of her diagnosis of
Typhoid fever. She died
Works cited
McCullough, David. John
Adams: A Masterwork of Storytelling.
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Broadcasting Student-Film Study |
Memo
To: Political Science 101 Teacher/Students
From: Franklin Delano Jeffries II
Re: Assignment #1
Date: December 31, 2005
My
nick name is Dale. When, I was a very young boy my mother called me Dale. And
sometimes she called me
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Franklin Jeffries
English 252
Section # 40397
Separation of Men & Women Values
Susan Glaspell is a woman who shows ideals and values differ between genders. Her Trifles play is clearly an argument about differences in thinking. The main point is women are separated by the men. Glaspell shows women are just as important in the play by adding irony and dialogue. Today, I still agree with Glaspell point of view. Women are still being treated as minorities. From experience in my life (1974-2003) women still are told how, what to do and when.
On this touchy subject, there will be controversy. I am relating truth that still is happening today around my life. Women in Glaspell’s day (1876-1948) were treated much worse. For example, women could not vote and in most states could not serve on juries (Jacobus 955). And today the 19th Amendment to the bill of rights give women the right to vote, However, it is sad it was one of the last changes in women’s rights in American history.
The separateness of the female and male worlds is immediately established at the beginning of her play Trifles, with the men going straight to the stove and the women following them slowly and standing close together away from the men (Jacobus 962). In 2003 women are still house cleaners and men are head of house holds on tax returns. My opinion is neutral. Men and women should be equal and both should agree on how, what to do and when. The truth is men separate women values from parts of their life that is important to them.
Helping out in the Kitchen is the greatest example for Glaspell’s day and now. When the women tried to get involved in the investigation of Trifles and help the men they were shut out and made fun of, like the part when the women noticed the preserves and Kitchen was out of order (Jacobus 955). Women can see women’s evidence, but men can not see women’s evidence. Now, men expect women to have dinner ready when they get home after work or school. This separation has been in world history for years and most of it is wrong. Glaspell was telling us how wrong it was in her day by her dialogue.
During her time it was hard to express what women thought about how men treated them. They struggled to maintain their beliefs, ideals and values (Jacobus 954). Today women express what they want. For example, if I told my wife to clean the house, wash the dishes and scrub the floor with her bare hands she would lash out on me and tell me to do it myself. Back in Glaspell’s day she could only suppress her desires or the rage she felt by writing psychoanalysis to express her feelings on mans abuse (Jacobus 954).
I do believe Glaspell felt nonexistent because men got all the power in her days. That is why the play Trifles is so complicated and so confusing when the play is only read, and not fully understood by research. She was writing about theories to explain everyday life in her day (Jacobus 954). The major point proved is control over genders, and Trifles does show how different values and ideals are. Even I feel nonexistent in my life when I am powerless and controlled. Existent’s does means more to those who are told how, what to do and when.
Today women have power over men on many issues such as divorce. That is a change in separation itself. I do not totally agree with the author Glaspell on control because women in my opinion had some influence on men in her days. Because I do not think all men are heartless even in her day. But I do think she is right on our beliefs, values, and they will always differ because of our opinion.
In the text of Trifles Glaspell explains how men had power over women and how she felt about it. She had to show her beliefs and values with dialogue, because in her time women could not express how they really thought, so she explained how women were separated in her time. The best example in her text is, she couldn’t do her part, and then you don’t enjoy things when you feel shabby (Jacobus page here). I feel not so good too when family tells me I can’t be an actor or famous because that is just a dream and not reality.
Now, looking deeper in the text how baffling the controlling power can be. When joy is taken from our heart, it is natural to protect our life. Just like Glaspell did, not knowing what to do next about expressing her pain, (Jacobus page here) so I do believe she would like to slip a rope around his neck (Jacobus Page #). But instead I do believe she wishes people would see her white dress with blue ribbons, and see her stand up there in the choir and sing (Jacobus page#). I would like to achieve better in my life too, but with people corrupting me about fame, life becomes more difficult for me too.
Because, who wants to be told what to do and how in such a way that is wrong. When I was told what to do in my career, that I couldn’t be an actor or be famous, I was crushed. In many ways I felt like Glaspell, trying to prove I am going to be great, too. The truth is Trifles is one of the best arguments ever written because belief differs, and I have shown that in this paper. From experience, I too want people to see my blue ribbons shine, just like Glaspell wants to have her dialogue expressed without men over her.
Separation of these values from men and women may never be possible because of opinions. Control may not be good for women or men, but change in heart can better our thinking. Women hold a different value from history when it comes to being told how, what to do and when, but men may not be over women as strong today like they were in Glaspell days.
Find the differences ---------------à
Franklin Jeffries
English 252
Section # 40397
Separation of Men & Women
Susan Glaspell is a woman who shows ideals and values differ between genders. Her Trifles play is clearly an argument about differences in men and women. The main point is women are treated much worse by the men. In the play men do separate the women. Today, men continue their control over women. Glaspell shows women are just as important in the play by adding irony and dialogue. Today, I still agree with Glaspell point of view. Women are still being treated as minorities. From experience in my life (1974-2003) women still are told how, what to do and when.
On this touchy subject, there will be controversy. I am relating truth that still is happening today around my life. Women in Glaspell’s day (1876-1948) were treated much worse. For example, women could not vote and in most states could not serve on juries (Glaspell 955). And today the 19th Amendment to the bill of rights give women the right to vote, However, it is sad it was one of the last changes in women’s rights in American history.
“The separateness of the female and male worlds is immediately established” (Dymkowski 962) at the beginning of her play Trifles, with the men going straight to the stove and the women following them slowly and standing close together away from the men (Glaspell 962). In 2003 women are still house cleaners and men are head of house holds on tax returns. My opinion is neutral. Men and women should be equal and both should agree on how, what to do and when. The truth is men separate women values from parts of their life that is important to them.
Helping out in the Kitchen is the greatest example for Glaspell’s day and now. When the women tried to get involved in the investigation of Trifles and help the men they were shut out and made fun of, like the part when the women noticed the preserves and Kitchen was out of order (Glaspell 955). Women can see women’s evidence, but men can not see women’s evidence. Now, men expect women to have dinner ready when they get home after work or school. This separation has been in world history for years and most of it is wrong. Glaspell was telling us how wrong it was in her day by her dialogue.
During her time it was hard to express what women thought about how men treated them. They struggled to maintain their beliefs, ideals and values (Glaspell 954). Today women express what they want. For example, if I told my wife to clean the house, wash the dishes and scrub the floor with her bare hands she would lash out on me and tell me to do it myself. Back in Glaspell’s day she could only suppress her desires or the rage she felt by writing psychoanalysis to express her feelings on mans abuse (Glaspell 954).
I do believe Glaspell felt nonexistent because men got all the power in her days. That is why the play Trifles is so complicated and so confusing when the play is only read, and not fully understood by research. She was writing about theories to explain everyday life in her day (Jacobus 954). The major point proved is control over genders, and Trifles does show how different values and ideals are. Even I feel nonexistent in my life when I am powerless and controlled.
Today women have power over men on many issues such as divorce. That is a change in separation itself. I do not totally agree with the author Glaspell on control because women in my opinion had some influence on men in her days. Because I do not think all men are heartless even in her day. But I do think she is right on our beliefs, values, and they will always differ because of our opinion.
In the text of Trifles Glaspell explains how men had power over women and how she felt about it. She had to show her beliefs and values with dialogue, because in her time women could not express how they really thought, so she explained how women were separated in her time. The best example in her text is, she couldn’t do her part, and then you don’t enjoy things when you feel shabby (Glaspell 952). I feel not so good too when family tells me I can’t be an actor or famous because that is just a dream and not reality.
Now, looking deeper in the text how baffling the controlling power can be. When joy is taken from our heart, it is natural to protect our life. Just like Glaspell did, not knowing what to do next about expressing her pain, (Glaspell 957) so I do believe she would like to slip a rope around his neck (Glaspell 961). But instead I do believe she wishes people would see her white dress with blue ribbons, and see her stand up there in the choir and sing (Glaspell 958). I would like to achieve better in my life too, but with people corrupting me about fame, life becomes more difficult for me too.
Because, who wants to be told what to do and how in such a way that is wrong. When I was told what to do in my career, that I couldn’t be an actor or be famous, I was crushed. In many ways I felt like Glaspell, trying to prove I am going to be great, too. The truth is Trifles is one of the best arguments ever written because belief differs, and I have shown that in this paper. From experience, I too want people to see my blue ribbons shine, just like Glaspell wants to have her dialogue expressed without men over her.
Separation of these values from men and women may never be possible because of opinions. Control may not be good for women or men, but change in heart can better our thinking. Women hold a different value from history when it comes to being told how, what to do and when, but men may not be over women as strong today like they were in Glaspell days.
Works Cited
Glaspell, Susan “Trifles.”
2001. 954-963.
Dymkowski,
Christine “Commentary, Trifles.”
Bedford/St. Martin’s, 1988. 962.
Jacobus A.
Lee, The
My teacher said “it was about a C paper now, because Unfocused weaving tree I have, she said also stay focused in the thesis specific main point, and it did not flow through to the end of the paper. I have changed some of it to help it flow. Hopefully, you can help me focus the theses to the body into the conclusion.
That is why they are two papers: I have to work harder then others at writing.
Correct me!
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Franklin Jeffries
English 252
Section # 40397
Play
Review of Sam Shepard’s Buried Child
The play was about a hidden secret that caused mentally grave emotional disorders in a family. A child Dodge killed and buried behind the house, because he found out his wife had an affair and the child was not his. However, the play started out with a twisted drunk, a father of the family Dodge. He was watching television and smoked heavily, and Halie, the nagging wife, was always at odds with Dodge because of his wrongs on passing his life away. Also, Halie nagged him in her ways of loss, but she loved him no matter what he has done. Even Dodge killing her child broke his family apart and most important is the family’s American dream was lost forever, because of the decisions the family made.
They had two sons and a grand son named Tilden, Bradley, and Vince. Tilden, the father of Vince, found out about this secret child and the burden affected him. Vince, the grandson, came to visit his grandma and grandpa and to find out being gone for six years no one seemed to remember him, because of the secret that caused his family mentally grave emotional disorders. Vince became more attached to the family with finding ways for the family to remember him. He became successful when he got drunk. On his return, he was so upset and drunk that the truth of what happed in the family came out.
Bradley the other son was a crippled man that knew about the secret too, and when Vince found out Bradley hid this burden, he through Bradley out. Vince’s dad Tilden uncovers the buried child out back and brings it to his mother so she can recover her life again. Father Dewis was corrupted too and fondled Halie. Dewis came to terms when he found out the truth, about the buried child. Vince’s girlfriend Shelly uncovered the truth about the child. Shelly kept nagging him to tell her on what was going on and why they didn’t remember Vince. Finally, Dodge told her and died. She left Vince because he stayed with his family, he missed so much. Vince inherited the farm and house from his grandpa and stayed because of the love he had for his family. A discussion in the play about family being more important than a girl friend or job far away is true. Dealing with family pain instead of running away from problems, seem to be the best answer. When relating this play to my future in film study, loss will be the issues, when leaving my family. In my opinion the determination of my family and friends as a whole will be the major issue of loss similar to the play. The question still stands for me today about leaving my family. Will the American dream be worth missing my family’s love and will the remembrance of the trajectory be worth leaving because of the guilt of not being there when they die? This is the only halt from my full potential. Choosing my path is relevant to the play Buried Child, because the love of my family can be stronger than any dream or career.
The answer to the question about individual culture and art is an important part of our development in life. Without my education, I would not have the experience to add drama in my films. The reality of art is a part of life and our culture that makes films real. If I did not have these experiences in life, what would I have to go off of? There has to be some kind of experience for us to use. Art and family is one of the most important educations I have received, and I will build on that the rest of my life. The play by Sam Shepard’s Buried Child should be and is considered art. Art is a statement of passion that one puts in to what she or he believes in completeness. I do believe a family is an art of life from some power greater than me. And the work Sam Shepard put in to his work defiantly makes Buried Child an art.
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Book I would like to write.
Put
a Mass Media Alert out for this Fathers right’s
A true story,
About an on going Child Custody battle that’s ripping a father and his daughter apart. Real Copies of the Documents and Documentation over a Seven Year Period
Written by,
Dale Jeffries
Dedicated to my Daughter,
Allison Lynn Jeffries
I love you
Attach Letter with this, tie it in
Page1 of
Alan Everett
Re: Jeffries vs. Long
Fourth Circuit Court for
Bill Swann the Judge, Laura Metcalf is x-wife’s Attorney
Cc: Nashville and all of the Media
Mr. Everett,
The letter that was sent to Laura Metcalf on January 22, 2004 from my greatly disturbed mental status that racist seem to keep making me out to be, I do not recall of the approval and the communication between us of this agreement to be sent out on my behalf.
Please, next time inform your client when you decide to send out agreements or suggestions regarding their visitation for my peace of mind. That way there is no conflicts between us and my representation is correct.
Seven long years of
abuse the Court System caused me and my family. I want never forget or forgive
the courts and lawyers who put me and my daughter through the worst terror that
can’t even be dreamed of. And it is the sadist part of my life. I can not bare to share or think of it most of the time, but I will.
Women are more powerful when it comes to children. Therefore, they are
controlling just like the courts. The worst kind of terror the courts aloud is
abusing us and our children. They do need to put a stop to it. But, who knows
the best interest of our children? The courts seem to think they know what’s
best for our children. I would rather be dead then continue letting people like
them bash me out of my sanity. Lets be for real, there is no such thing as
father’s rights anymore when it comes to Child Custody. Tell the truth too, it
is about money for most of them, and I do mean most of them, or power. Well,
you can’t buy my pain and you damn sure can’t bare it, so why don’t I share it
at www.hearmyvoice.com. Why don’t you stop hurting our children here
in
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Franklin Jeffries
7232
Political Science 101
Section # 73876
A Movie Review of Bulworth
American Politics I say, for many years movies have shown the power of what an election can do to our humen mind from the emotional care tragedies that involve pain from the drama of people surrounding, begging them, and telling them what to do. A summary will be the first part of discussion in this review to give a better understanding on Bulworth, the movie. Next, I will give my reaction to what Politics have to do with this movie and why it is impotent to care. Finally, I’ll sum up the important parts why emotional care tragedies can benefit us and how they do not help the greedy politics, also tell if Bulworth, the movie is credible to watch.
Bulworth is about a Senator running to get
re-elected and has a nerves break down because he cares so much for American
people. Joe Bulworth is the Senator that hires a hit
man to kill himself so his daughter can get ten million in insurance money. He
becomes paranoid about dieing so much that he called off his assignation. When Bulworth called off his assignation, he finds out the
person he hired went into a comma from a heart attack. The person he hired
never got a chance to tell the person he hired because of the comma, so this
leads the Senator running from people thinking a camera man is the hit man and
all along the hit man ends up being a women he liked that he ask to tag along
with him on his campaign. He what’s to die because all the people constantly
surround’s him, telling him how he should do things by begging him to help out
other politics by signing bills. He tells people the truth how he and other
politics tells lies in their campaign just to get re-elected. The pressures of
people and the lies he held bothered him so much that he didn’t sleep for about
seven days. Finally after being paranoid and finding out the hit man is not
going to kill him anymore, he sleeps for three days. In the end he gets
re-elected and falls in love with the hit man women. The people really respect
him for telling them the truth how politics are. The part of the summery that
is important is the tragedy of his death by being shot and killed by another
politic that did not like him telling the truth about how it is all about the
money and not the people.
American
Politics have a lot to do with Bulworth, the
movie. The major point that relates very well with this movie would be what
politics have to do to get re-elected. Telling lies to get into the power of
rich and not giving worth to the people is one of the ways to get elected.
Another way is telling the truth about the system and how you really care for
By telling people the truth what they want to hear like in the movie makes politics mad, on the other hand it also show’s what kind of government we all have and people have a better understanding what kind of Senator they will elect. Being honest may be better for us as electors to hear, but for the Senator death like in the movie may be the outcome, because of the rich and wicked beggars. The point here is Senators have a choice how they want to get re-elected and if they can live with the outcome they face then that will be their strategies in the campaign and with these two choices that’s why Senators should care how they get re-elected.
The benefits of a Senator that cares for people and turns out to be that emotional care tragedies is being a hero. Like in the movie, where truth shows that love can change an attitude of a drug dealer to clean up the streets instead of selling drugs. Being honest like Senator Bulworth did shows he is a person who cares for people. He cared for the ones that was getting poorer and did not pay any attention to the rich. The benefit he gets for helping the poorer people is respect and their vote. For the voters, giving them gratitude and hope changes how they feel as Americans to work and follow a great leader that motivates them by telling them the truth.
How they do not help the greedy politics like in the movie is the down fall a Senator gets because the truth about what really goes on hurts the rich. For example, in the movie Bulworth tells a black community the truth about the last election he won their and Bill Clinton and they promised to get more jobs for them and getting them more money to help fix up their town. Bulworth is delirious from no sleep and already wants to die and knows a hit man is going to kill him, so he tells the truth not caring at the moment about how that was just so they would get re-elected and told them that’s what they wanted to hear, so he gave them what they wanted and the money went in the rich politics pocket that the tax payers paid for. Telling the truth in this way does not help politics because they lied to the people that voted them in. The odd truth to this, he is respected for being crazy and telling the truth about taking their money and not helping them from the last election.
Bulworth telling the truth how politics lie to get what they want not everyone cared for him telling on them. The greedy politic that he would not help, had him murdered in the end for not helping him and for telling on him how he is greedy by taking peoples money. Truth turns the cards over on both politics and the voters. In this case the politics loses their pride because of their lies and for the people gain a hero that really shows them he cares and can not lie to them anymore.
A Mad mans comity that gives truth to what really goes on just to get elected again. The movie Bulworth is a very credible source for truth in American politics about what Senators have to go through just to win people over. For a great laugh and some truth to politics watch this move. Very funny and entertaining.
Works cited
Beatty,
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Franklin D. Jeffries II
Acting 220
Play Review: THE DRESSER
THE DRESSER started out slower then my mother getting out of my truck. However, I thought the actor JD Cullum did a good job at the beginning to evoke emotions with the alerts of war. His paranoia to the alerts puts me in a character myself as if there maybe a war, or am I really in the Clarence Brown Theatre. Cullum made me want to stay and watch the play through out. The actors did a good job to make me think as if I was there. What strikes me the most from the actor’s point of view is their control to stay focused on being spontaneous to keep the flow. There are three interesting captions I learned from studying the Actors. The first would be their movement. Another would be how their voice conveyed the audience, and last, I will explain why I am lost for words.
John Cullum is putting on his makeup witch is bizarre watching a character change into another one. His Son JD said, “What’s wrong with the teapot and why is it not boiling yet”. Just as he said boiling he taped the top of the teapot and a few seconds later the teapot started boiling. Then he acted as he filled up a tea glass and gave it to John. If I did not have this assignment on watching movements: I would have never known he turned the teapot on by tapping the top of it as if something was wrong. Also, knowing the teapot is a fake helped me understand why he positioned himself so no one could see the tea being pored. Movements are great examples how good actors can be to help us believe what we see is real.
Being a good actor is to be able to convey voice. There were times in the play I could not here the actors voice like pussy in a scene talks so quite I thought I was going deaf. But who care if I missed one line? Right! Just as long as I did not get up and leave like I have done in the past. If I stayed, the play was a success. Using strong voice like John and JB done in a few scenes helped me jump back on the wagon. When John told JB, “I pissed you off”. My rapt attention was kept to the actors because I was shocked to see them go on a rampage. However, I think good plays should have attention getters to bring the audience back into the play. John and JD did a good job conveying their voice to the audience.
Affective as the voice is I am lost for words. The play really kept me from being a critic as I really am. Normally, I will critic a play so much that my attention on writing these reviews drifts into another assignment, and causes me to throw carve balls at my reader. Somehow, someway, I followed the guidelines as if I just passed preschool. I really think it has to do with being a unique play. Having to watch it from back stage is not normal, but interesting to me since I was in the audience. Being lost for word is a way of saying good job and thank you for something new. I also think--
The script is rather nice.
Tying
all the above into my conclusion gives me my last chance to make my point. As I said at the beginning of my review,
evoking emotions is a good part of story telling. And the actors did a very
good job with the comic point of view. With out the comic emotion I do not
think any play would survive. The audience is the most important part of any
play, so with that I give my final thoughts. Movements and voice make a play come
to life as if no movement and voice came to life then you have my mother again
trying to get out of that big truck.
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Medication Evaluation |
To: Dr. Smith M.D
From: Franklin Delano Jeffries II
Re: Evaluation
from Adderall
Date: December 31, 2005
About 1140am on October 3, 2003 I took my first dose 5 mg tablets. I am not sure what to think at this time. It is about 702pm and I can tell my thinking is slower but distressed about what’s to come and the symptoms I have been feeling.
Most of my day was driving around looking at 4runner’s (cars) and making simple stops along the way. However, about 645pm coming home my peripheral vision seamed off. For example, driving along when a wall was on the right of me and before coming to a stop I felt like the wall was to close when it actually was not. I turned my head quickly to the right and realized I was fine. The wall was not going to hit me. Feeling dazed and confused not like before 1140am. Wondering if I should consider taking a dose tomorrow, because how tired I am with no motivation from this fast early day. I can say my thoughts are still running 100 MPH. Even after taking the medication I may have not been talking so much, but I sure was thinking a whole lot. More then most people do I can admit. Also, the time I was talking (like at the bank) I was doing all the talking and not letting the women talk that was preparing the loan. These symptoms bother me to the point that I wondering is this the right medication for me. The thought that I may be Bipolar, can it be true and why do I think this is a bad thing. Maybe just maybe it is too soon, because this is my first dose. But the headaches I have had today are like an earthquake. About 750pm I got very aggravated at my child and wife (my child was crying, tired and hungry, wanting her pacifier and my wife was trying to help her calm down and my wife did not know what to do because she did not know what my daughter was wanting) so, I went off on both of them not like ever before. My heart started pumping and was off beat hearing them before I went off. Then I got more nervous and mad at my wife because she could not calm our child like me. And then that’s when I over did it, telling my wife to “do something with her”, “give her what she wants” and to “deal with her”. And I told both of them to “hush” very loud. I did tell my wife I am sorry I was just trying to cope with this medication and that I was trying to write to Dr. Smith about how I feel. I have not got upset like that in a long time. My head still hurts and now it is 825Pm. I have had the some side effects today that go away during treatment like dry mouth, unpleasant taste. The side effects that worry me that almost convinces me to stop on the first dose is, stomach pain and the pain under my left rib. Also, my vision, unusual tiredness, at times severe headaches, no desire for sex (although I did not before have great desire but maybe more). The biggest concern is my heart beat I felt during and before my rage and the mood that went along with it. Of course, the mental concern too, because gosh I’m still baffling about it at 850pm. Now I am worried (my droopy face I feel in both of my cheeks and I do not feel sleepy. This hopefully has been day one.
Well it almost was, now my right arm is shaking in my
muscle at 900pm, and both my ears feel like I am going through the highest
hills in
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Broadcasting Student-Film Study |
Memo
To: Political Science 101 Teacher/Students
From: Franklin Delano Jeffries II
Re: Paper 1 cover and article
Date: December 31, 2005
I
have been waiting to tackle a story on Schwarzenegger since he has made his
appearance on the Jay Leno show. However, I will do my best summarizing the
article and give my “reaction to how the article pertains to American
Politics, as discussed in class and the text” as you say. Hopefully
Schwarzenegger will prosper and my paper will be coherent.
The
paper is above some where, you can go to edit in your browser and do a search
under find.
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Political Event |
Memo
To: Mr. Schneider
From: Franklin Delano Jeffries II
Re: Assignment #3 Event
Date: December 31, 2005
On Thursday, the community along with leaders from the
area gathered on the lawn at the
Randy Vaden of
“It is very
appropriate to have a memorial here since we have people from this area who lost their lives,” Knox County Sheriff Tim Hutchison
said at the ceremony. “It continues to show the unity we have here in the
Knox County Mayor Mike Ragsdale delivered remarks but Mayor Victor Ashe, who was scheduled to also make remarks, was not in attendance. Ragsdale’s remarks are in the Knoxville News Sentinel. His remarks could only be heard by very few people because there were so many people in attendance. The sound operator did not have enough speakers for the turn out so not everyone got to hear the remarks.
Bruce Haviland
lost his brother Tim in the attacks. Tim was on the 96th floor Tower
one of the
Other officially unveiling the sculpture included
representatives from the Knoxville Police Department, Knoxville Volunteer
Emergency Rescue Squad and Knox County Sheriff’s Department. “When given the
chance to design a memorial to the victims of the terrorist attack on
Over all this Political Event
relates to our class because Government history remains.
I wrote a story in the newspaper over this, and you can see it at www.daliybeacon.com.
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Franklin D. Jeffries II
Teacher/Maria Fontenot
320/Class/940
Business interview Presentation
Wally
Anderson a local business man that is a part owner of an internet service
called USxpress.Net Inc. Mr. Anderson has many plans for his advertisement and
promotions team. Before
At
USxpress.Net Anderson gives out promotional codes to his customers. These codes
give the buyer a discount when hosting with
Along
with his code theory and money making scheme is the advantage on advertising
spots because of more customers involved.
customers
are advertisings according to
Motivation
is the key to
All
of these tactics that Wally Anderson uses for his business at USexpress.Net are
very useful in promoting and advertising his internet site. These are
interesting ways to build a business in sales The first is to clutch his buyers with
his promotions code is a wonderful way to add a network for
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RE: UT STUDENT
CC: Sam Swan
Douglas Edlund,
I have been busy with other things these last few weeks.
Indeed, this letter is a request to finish my project at UT Extensions, so I
can finish my degree.
Certainly, I will agree to any request so I can satisfy
this last requirement here at the
In short, I have a lot riding on my shoulders this semester
from Vocational Rehabilitation as well. The state would never pay for anymore
training as long as I live, because of academic probation.
My major malfunction while at UT Extensions was losing the
lens cap to the camera. This may not sound like a big deal, but for me it was.
I could have lost the camera, but I didn’t do that. However, I still would like
to pay for the lens cap.
On another note, finding a project was very difficult for
me at that time. Indeed, story telling is not all that hard for me, but with no
direction and layout makes this practicum very complicated.
Anyhow, I do not like giving up. Indeed, I have been
dwelling on writing this letter to you for sometime. Guilt has played a major
roll in my absent. Certainly, shame alone has not been the only spin. Working
on my last requirements with all the stress of finding a job when I’m finished
is mind boggling too, and what am I going to do when I am out of college life.
These entire questions have come up in the last few months
of college, and many more that I won’t bother you with right now. Maybe seniors should have more direction
toward the end, so we can handle future stress.
Anyhow, I would like to finish my project I started on.
Indeed, I DO
NEED an example tape to show employers. I thought about finishing up my
project as a documentary: to show my last year at UT. I can shot the rest of my
shots on the Ad Campus, and maybe one shot off campus to plant a tree for a UT
Extensions correlation.
Please let me know as soon as possible if I can come in and
finish.
As soon as I hear back
from you, I will come in and start right away.
I do have access to edit
bays in the UT LIBRARY, if that would help you since I have a lot of work to
catch up on, I will us them when you are busy.
I will show up everyday to
finish this degree, and stand in the freezing cold for 3 days and 3 nights as
long as I can have a pillow.
This letter stands as a
contract and a promise note, so I can finish my degree, if you may let me.
Sincerely,
Franklin
D. Jeffries
II
“Dale Jeffries”
865-973-5523
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Franklin D. Jeffries II, BS
865-691-8627
or dalebay@dalebay.com
______________________________________________________Bachelor of Science in Communications______
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